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I'm an avid fan of Wolverine since the original X-Men cartoon, and have read comics since the early 90's.
 
Reviews by spidergirl723
Marie thought she'd left her life as an X-Man (and Logan) behind when she left the Mansion. But now Wolverine is missing and she may be his only hope. But can she afford to step back into the Mansion, back into the lifestyle and most importantly back into Logan's life?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Action, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 38
Wordcount: 72361 - Hits: 339322
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/22/2010 - Last Updated: 01/07/2011
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 11/06/2010 Title: Chapter 32: Safe In New York City

Awesome chapter, thanks for the Callum/Logan face-off, always fun. My favorite line is, "“Just a little ball o’ Southern sunshine!” Tony cooed." Ha.

Looking forward to some Rogan lovin'.

Just a thought for a new story- but how about one right before Civil War with Rogue on the Avengers, engaged to Tony, hence the reason that Logan has to become an Avenger and get her back.... Just a thought.

I love how you put Tony in there.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 11/26/2010 Title: Chapter 33: Love Hungry Man

I read this on my droid while waiting for a friend at disneyworld and I must admit you took me to another world while surrounded by images of mickey- so impressive. I really loved the enraged feral to tender moment btw logan and wolverine especially the neck part bc it felt intimate, well done.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 12/17/2010 Title: Chapter 34: Can I Sit Next To You, Girl?

“You need time to heal, Marie, I get that,” he was saying, and I’ll wait until you’re ready, I’ll wait for you. I just can’t pretend that I’m not gonna fight fer you.”

Pure awesomeness as usual. Thanks for giving me exactly what I wanted and more.

Love how Rogue didn't immediately give in and how Logan understood she might be dealing with a lot.

I seriously love how Tony Stark is in this universe. Can I hope that the next series has the avengers in it with Rogue to boot? Just a suggestion. Would love Tony and Logan going after Rogue, ha! That would be a fight.

Tangents aside, I'm excited and saddened to read the final chapter.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 01/04/2011 Title: Chapter 35: You Shook Me All Night Long

awesome as usual, and so looking forward to another chapter- yeah!

I love how Logan showed up 22 minutes later after the text, pure hilarity.

My fav line from this chapter, " “No! Ah’m done punishing you, you should know that. That’s why Ah kicked Callum to the curb. But Ah wanna have some control over what we do. Ah wanna decide the pace for a while. Ah wanna-” She took a deep breath, “Ah wanna- Ah wanna be chased, Logan.”" It's awesome how Rogue is woman enough to demand to be treated better. And so she should...Logan's put her through a lot.

I love how you write Logan's POV, btw. "He’d promised he’d give her time and that’s exactly what he intended to do- Even if it killed him." Ha, you definitely have his self-depreciation, honorable intentions, and humor down that the wolvie of the comics is famous for.

I highly anticipate some dating followed by some smut. Aw, good times.

Someone loses their memory, the other is going through hell without it.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 11880 - Hits: 3107
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/16/2010 - Last Updated: 05/16/2010
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 05/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Outside Looking In

I have been waiting for a story where Rogue loses her memory and Logan has to help her back- THANK YOU! It was excellent :)

Author's Response: Cool! Ya know, it\'s really hard to come up with new storylines for this fandom - we have a creative group of writers - so I\'m sure there are a few good ones out there of what you\'re looking for. I\'m glad you found mine! :) Thank you.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 05/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Outside Looking In

I agree that there could definitely be more continuation. Perhaps some side stories involving them dating more with some angst before she gets her memories back?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love that you liked it enough to want more. I\'ll definitely give it some thought. I live in Africa right now, so internet and posting isn\'t as easy, but I definitely have the time to write things about.

Something was bothering Logan and for once it wasn't his past. Marie is there to help and kick a little tush on the way! Notice rating change

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 4110 - Hits: 14268
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/31/2010 - Last Updated: 07/07/2011
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 09/27/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the first and second chapter. The first chapter is very well written. I think Logan is often treated merely as a weapon so often in comics. I always want to stand up for him :) Keep it going and up the angst (always a mainstay of the Logan Marie combo)

Despair, deceit and pain - this is only a taste of what awaits Wolverine when he and Rogue finally become an item. Because old enemies are stirring in the dark .....

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 91124 - Hits: 124680
Complete?: No - Published: 07/19/2010 - Last Updated: 05/02/2011
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star
Date: 02/02/2011 Title: Chapter 16: Circumstantial Evidence

"And once he gets that look in his eye, I just can’t refuse him anything...." Another great chapter, I really like the description of how much Rogue is in love with Logan. Really beautiful, sexy, and fun all at the same time- keep it up!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/02/2011 Title: Chapter 17: Resurrecting the Weapon

This story is awesome and I truly wish you would writer another chapter! I really like how you're using the Marvel Comics version of the Weapon X program and the Wolvie/Rogue relationship. When is the next chapter coming up?

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 09/08/2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Promise In Her Eyes

When are you going to post a new chapter aside from the re-postings? I love this story and the cage match is always a good time. Keep it up!

Author's Response: I\'ve caught up with all the old chapters now, so the very next one will be a new, previously unread one! Praise the lord, etc etc!! I hope to get it uploaded some time this afternoon!!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star
Date: 04/28/2011 Title: Chapter 21: Conversions

Thanks for continuing this story- it's one of my favs. The tension is definitely building for the "target" duh duh duuunnnn.

When Logan get's free it'd be cool if you throw in some Rogan style angst to slow down the smutty happy ending that awaits- It tends to make for a good read.

But, whatever, do what you will, you've been writing a great story, full of action of all the right sorts ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review - I\'m very happy to be one of your favs!\r\nPlease be assured that there is heaps more angst to come, ESPECIALLY when Logan gets free! Believe me, he and Rogue are going to have to fight for their smutty happy ending! No falling into each others arms and walking off into the sunset, at least not for a very long time. Hold onto something - it\'s gonna be a bumpy ride!!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star
Date: 05/07/2011 Title: Chapter 22: Reluctant Assassin

Love the suspense. Reminds me of another Wolverine story where he kills a senator in Wolverine #162, one of my fav arcs; did it serve as killer inspiration?

Hmmm, might Shield find him and take him in? Just a thought, can't wait for the next part. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Haven\'t any plans for SHIELD to appear in this story - sorry! And no, your fav story arc didn\'t serve as inspiration - in fact I\'d forgotten all about it so I must get the comic collection out and check it out again! Glad to hear you like the suspense - it will be hitting killer levels in the next couple of chapters!!

Would two people who are just friends act like this? Sequel to "Bitter Disappointments."

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 7273 - Hits: 28284
Complete?: No - Published: 07/30/2010 - Last Updated: 05/29/2013
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star
Date: 06/02/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

"Logan knew he would have to keep her off balance a little if he wanted her"- great line. I love reading you write from Logan's POV and I can't wait to see how else Logan keeps her off balance...

"He had something once, but it looks like she’s not his anymore."

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1858 - Hits: 3154
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/11/2010 - Last Updated: 11/11/2010
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 11/12/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the first chapter. You really know how to paint a picture. The angst is awesome, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping I\'d be able to describe the setting well without bogging you guys down with too many unnecessary words. I\'m glad you liked the angst too

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 11/12/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Because he’s the one who’d rather wait out the storm with her than walk away." I second loving the last line. It's quite beautiful.

Author's Response: I had a lot of trouble with that last line so I\'m super happy that you liked it. And I treasure the fact that you think this is beautiful. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Now COMPLETE!!! :-D The X-team, including Rogue, liberate a mutant lab and find our favorite feral...

Okay, that's not much of a summary, so here's an excerpt to give you a feel:

She held out her hand, palm up, and for a second time seemed to stop. The man narrowed his gaze on her hand, and then again on her eyes. He took one shuffling step forward, and she concentrated on keeping her body loose, letting no tension show in her posture. The sudden /snick/ as the claws retracted startled her, but she managed not to jump. He watched her closely, reaching toward her hand. Suddenly he grabbed it, and for a second she thought he was going to bite her palm. But he just took a deep inhale, smelling her scent and then looking back at her eyes, assessing. She thought she saw a slight lessening of the tension in his posture after this strange ritual, but either way they were out of time.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 45928 - Hits: 198079
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/06/2010 - Last Updated: 01/22/2011
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 12/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Prisoner

Really love this series, because it goes from feral to conscience, to action. I enjoy the pace and your pov on Logan, because it's a damn good one!

Author's Response: So glad you\'re liking it! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 01/04/2011 Title: Chapter 14: The Showdown

Hotness and tenderness at the same time. I like how Marie didn't let me get away with the leaving business, ha.

I really liked how you effectively mixed the two types of Logan/Wolverine in one smutty chapter as few writers do. It's realistic in that no one is just one type, especially Logan.

I love the line, "She met his eyes, startled, and saw the hint of shame they always held when he spoke of his more animal side." It really speaks to the true comic book character.

I also like that although it's from Marie's POV, you can tell what Logan's feeling by his emotive eyes and how he reacts to Marie. well done. continue by all means ;)

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star
Date: 01/14/2011 Title: Chapter 17: The Stakeout

Nice job! because locking Rogue in to protect her is so Logan. The man has issues. I cannot wait until Rogue goes after him and saves his ass, proving to be more powerful than him. Great job on the entire story arc and I'm sorry if I haven't been reviewing the whole way through!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!

Rogue is keeping a complicated secret that could change everything.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 10155 - Hits: 50920
Complete?: No - Published: 06/07/2011 - Last Updated: 04/18/2014
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/20/2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Consequences

Thanks for continuing the story- when do we find out who the father is? Can't wait :)

Before she could reach that fight bar in Canada, Rogue was taken in and raised by Mystique. Years later, she and Wolverine meet for the first time as fellow X-Men. Fate draws them together after a very unusual attack leaves Wolverine in a unique position to help. AU with movie/comicverse elements.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Animal Death, Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 68600 - Hits: 160477
Complete?: No - Published: 07/01/2011 - Last Updated: 10/23/2011
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/09/2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I volunteer to beta-read - this story is awesome and I really like the feral side. Too often in comics the feral/animal side is shown to be all bad, when really it's neither good nor bad, but somewhere in the middle. I enjoy the complexity of the feral side more than say pure rage which is pretty one note.

By all means - I'm in as beta, what's involved?

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star star
Date: 03/17/2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

When will there be another chapter because I can't wait! I love love love this story and especially love seeing the animal sides of Rogan. Keep it going.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star star
Date: 03/17/2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

When will there be another chapter because I can't wait! I love love love this story and especially love seeing the animal sides of Rogan. Keep it going.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/11/2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I know I already wrote this, but seriously when will there be another chapter. Excellent writing all the way. Can't wait!

Anna Marie D'Ancanto learns to live her life, free of the Rogue - and without the Wolverine. But will she realize, despite the many roads she takes, that Logan will always find his Marie?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X-Men Origins Wolverine, X3, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 68
Wordcount: 162787 - Hits: 509337
Complete?: No - Published: 08/12/2011 - Last Updated: 08/12/2011
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star
Date: 10/05/2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Marie

awesome chapter as always. I noticed in
"Most Recent" it was no longer there and I wondered where my fav story went. Had to track it down and re-read some chapters, but it was worth it! When's the next chapter?

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/11/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Headache

I know I already wrote this, but seriously when will there be another chapter? Excellent writing all the way. Can't wait!