mltaylor1985 [Contact]
Real name: melody
Member Since: 10/26/2009
Membership Status: Member

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Yahoo IM: mltaylor1985
24 yr old female from East TN

My sister and I both write stories for this account.
 
Reviews by mltaylor1985
"He came to me the night she died. That's what he always did."

On Hiatus.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 14065 - Hits: 67246
Complete?: No - Published: 02/17/2010 - Last Updated: 05/18/2010
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star
Date: 03/01/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Heartbreak Warfare

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THE STORY.

I wander where this logan is going?

He seems to be not only a Logan without any honor, but also a liar as well.

Can't wait to read more!!!!!!

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star
Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 9: Run

ok, i thought i had it figured out, but now i'm not sure.

can't wait to see whats going on w/logan

3 levels of punishment. No way to escape. Two rules, do as your told and behave. Mutants are being rounded up for experiments and left in the hands of a secret government cooperation. Rated Adult for a Reason.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 9752 - Hits: 27589
Complete?: No - Published: 02/22/2010 - Last Updated: 08/23/2011
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sounds interesting...can't wait to read more..

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Marie... those guards are sooo dead..

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So he has one whole month to plan how he will kill the little prick... then another month for the other bastard to realize he's next... i love it.

"We need a break from the heat, darlin'. If I had my way, we'd be at the cabin in Alberta by now, but Hank says ya can't travel in yer condition, so I had t' be…uh…creative."

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1082 - Hits: 2643
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/03/2010 - Last Updated: 03/03/2010
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 03/08/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i love it... it was beautiful in that wonderful Logan would do virtually anything for Marie way..

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you liked this. It hit me one day that with the right amount of control on both their parts, he would be able to actually share his memories with her on purpose, because he wanted to and not just as part of the effect of her mutation. He just waited until he had a really special memory to share with her to give it a try. --Wendie

"It wasn't about doing the right thing. He just couldn't bring himself to do anything else, with her." Logan stumbles upon Marie in a mutant experimentation lab.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 23377 - Hits: 73988
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/31/2010 - Last Updated: 04/24/2010
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star
Date: 03/31/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ditto. i love where this is going and cant wait for the updates.

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/12/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

their are no words that can do justice to how much i love this story.

but i will try.

you're writing style is excellent.

the delicate character details you bring to the story are perfect.

i feel like i'm watching a weekly tv series unparalleled by any other.

and the cliffhangers always leave me screaming for more.

those are just the tip of the iceberg.

and still i failed to do justice to the art of your writing.

if you don't already, you should start writing professionaly.

Author's Response: There are no words to do justice to how happy your review made me. But I will try.... :) Thank you, thank you thank you thank you. I\'m so happy you feel that way, and I hope the next chapters don\'t disappoint. >hugs<

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/20/2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

thank you thank you thank you!

I am so happy that he found her quickly and has her back now.

I think he should disappear with her and never go back to the mansion, except maybe to extract revenge.

But however you write it will be far better than anything I could dream up.

Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Oh my god. Thank YOU. I\'m writing the final chapie now; you should see it this weekend. And I think you\'ll get your wish. ;~)

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/04/2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i always prefer to wait until i have read all the posted chapters, whether it is a finished story or incomplete, to give my review.

I have to say, this was an excellent story. i love how you manage to never once have Marie's powers enter the story.

It was a nice change from the other stories i love.

My sister was right, you are one of the best authors out there.

Can't wait to read more of your stories. Don't keep me waiting long. LOL

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you think so. Thank you!!! >hugs<

It ain't easy to trick a telepath--unless you've got another one telling you how.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, Drama, PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 18040 - Hits: 29592
Complete?: No - Published: 04/06/2010 - Last Updated: 01/16/2014
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/07/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love these kinds of stories where Jean is the bad bad bad girl. I hope she gets what is coming to her.

Logan will do anything and everything to ensure Marie's safety. Don't you just love him. * sighs *

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know I\'ve hit the nail on the head with regard to your kind of story. And, yeah, as big, tough, super hunky protectors go, they don\'t make \'em any better than Logan. I second your *sigh*, big time! And rest assured, Jean is going to get what\'s coming to her--and then some. --Wendie

"Suffering is permanent, obscure, and dark
And has the nature of infinity."
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William Wordsworth

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 30958 - Hits: 77398
Complete?: No - Published: 04/20/2010 - Last Updated: 05/21/2013
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/08/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Here I lay

i love how beautifully descriptive your words are. you have described it so well i can honestly picture Marie and Looo-gn in that cell.

Marie thought she'd left her life as an X-Man (and Logan) behind when she left the Mansion. But now Wolverine is missing and she may be his only hope. But can she afford to step back into the Mansion, back into the lifestyle and most importantly back into Logan's life?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Action, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 38
Wordcount: 72361 - Hits: 339479
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/22/2010 - Last Updated: 01/07/2011
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 04/22/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Gimme a Bullet

please continue

"We love to learn we are not alone."-C.S. Lewis. The Wolverine meets, saves, and reluctantly befriends a girl while undercover.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 56200 - Hits: 168113
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/14/2010 - Last Updated: 02/09/2011
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/07/2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

so now, i have reached the end point, so far.

I have to say, i love this story... especially your version of Logan here. Almost reluctant than dependent. can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you, a billion katrillion jillion times. So glad you feel that way.

Booze, half-naked Logan, growling, and indignation.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2037 - Hits: 4808
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/24/2010 - Last Updated: 11/24/2010
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/04/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this was hilarious. and much easier to read online than trying to read on my cell phone.

Great job. Gotta love that Jubes.

Author's Response: Yeah I can\'t do that on my cell either. I end up just getting frustrated, then forget things that I want to mention in the review. Oh well. And yes, Jubes is my favorite neon-colored plot device ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Hope it is kosher to update this given that it was technically complete before...this is actually the second fanfic I wrote, but I've never been happy with it. Now that I've got a little more experience under my belt, I decided to rework it. I've added a section, and reworked the second half to resolve some point of view and other issues. Overall, though, it might seem very familiar if you read it the first time around. It's about half angst, half smut.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1, X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 6877 - Hits: 27038
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/25/2010 - Last Updated: 05/14/2011
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/07/2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chase

i want more, but i'll respect the fact that you are finished.

but i have to say, that first chapter almost had me in tears. and that is hard to do.

as for the end of this chapter, WOW... glad its like 15 degrees outside cause i need to cool off.

Author's Response: Aw, I\'m glad you liked it -- both parts!

Now COMPLETE!!! :-D The X-team, including Rogue, liberate a mutant lab and find our favorite feral...

Okay, that's not much of a summary, so here's an excerpt to give you a feel:

She held out her hand, palm up, and for a second time seemed to stop. The man narrowed his gaze on her hand, and then again on her eyes. He took one shuffling step forward, and she concentrated on keeping her body loose, letting no tension show in her posture. The sudden /snick/ as the claws retracted startled her, but she managed not to jump. He watched her closely, reaching toward her hand. Suddenly he grabbed it, and for a second she thought he was going to bite her palm. But he just took a deep inhale, smelling her scent and then looking back at her eyes, assessing. She thought she saw a slight lessening of the tension in his posture after this strange ritual, but either way they were out of time.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 45928 - Hits: 198201
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/06/2010 - Last Updated: 01/22/2011
Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star
Date: 12/07/2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Prisoner

liking it so far. can't wait to read more. and i love how Logan automatically leaps up to defend Marie.

update soon, please...

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/09/2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Lake House

oh... i like this chapter... sure no Logan jumping to Marie's defense and definetly no action, unless staring at naked man's groin counts... hmm naked Logan...

sorry back on track.. can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for the multiple reviews! It\'s very motivating.

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/11/2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Dream

i love this chapter. and i love how even though i was expecting her to have to touch him, a la X-Men 1, she didn't. which was different.

can't wait for next chapter.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/12/2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Fever

oh... this is really good. really really good.

can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much for reviewing each chapter. I had never meant to write so much so fast, but you guys are definitely motivating!

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/13/2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Beer

oh you devious little minx...that was mean...

what's going on...... please don;t leave me like this...

Author's Response: :-) I\'m working on it!

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/16/2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Escape

you're back... you came back...

awesome chapter. Can't wait for the smut to begin.

oh and awesome twist at the beginning. i was worried that the Professor was trying to warn her off from Logan and I knew i was going to have to dig into my finances and hire a hit on him if so. LOL

Author's Response: Glad Professor X is safe from you for now. Glad you like the chapter. The smut may not be exactly what you\'re expecting, but hopefully there will be angsty-smutty goodness coming up.

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/18/2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Attack

oh my... so i guess Sabretooth won't be a problem. and do i detect hot animal sex coming soon... no pun intended towards the Wolverine and a heavy dose of Sabretooth in Marie...

Author's Response: Yeah, that was tough for me to decide (re Sabretooth dying). I know some people are big fans, and he is a link to Logan\'s past. I figured I\'d leave it up to the readers to decide what he could heal from or not, but Logan sure wasn\'t going to let him follow if he could prevent it, so I wanted him to be pretty thorough. Sorry if it was grim. And yes, the next chapter is quite smutty indeed, although maybe not in the way you are expecting. :-)

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/20/2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Stranger

i love it. i mean you could have taken it so many different places but this one feels good to me.

can't wait til Logan gets his... in more ways than one. LOL

Author's Response: So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed
Date: 12/30/2010 Title: Chapter 12: The Face-off

man sometimes i just want to hit Scott. I know he loves her in the whole big brother protective way but why can't he just leave her alone and let her be happy.

As for Logan, he better hope Marie is in a forgiving mood when she finds him.

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Happy New Year, dear.

Author's Response: Yeah, I had a little too much fun with the idea that in this AU it\'s *Scott* who is stuck thinking of Rogue as a kid instead of Logan. Happy New Year to you!