Oh, the fun this could lead to!
And I loved the whole sucking him thing... wait... that didn't come out right... the whole draining him thing. Didn't even cross my mind that she would do that. [Course, as you can probably tell my mind ain't exactly out of the gutter when it comes to L/M]
Oh the fun that could be had in next chapter! Mu-ha-ha-ha-ha! I can't wait to see what's next.

Author's Response: Lol at the sucking him comment! And nobody\'s mind should be out of the gutter when it comes to L/M. The gutter is the perfect place for it I think *g* I\'m gonna try and get the next chapter up tomorrow. It\'s one of my fave chapters *pets it* It was so much fun to write!

:Fans face:
Oh dear lord.
You've combined all of my dirty little favorite Logan!Fetishes into one dominant demanding man of a beast.

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope I can keep it up. Chapter 2 is alot like this one and almost done. We get to the actual plot in chapter 3.

Yay for the Bitchy!Jean. I've become such a fan of that, and I love the way you've written her as a sort of twisted conniving character, just stringing poor Logan around.
Oh goody! More upset Marie, me thinks. Or at least conflicted Marie. With the way Logan's acting, and how she's got to be confused with everything that's going on, add in the fact that he got pissed because of the shampoo issue, and when he comes back he's pissed as hell. Wooo-Eeeee. That's just going to be a big bucket load of trouble.

And I can't wait for that bucket to tip it's contents over and bathe them in it's angsty-ness.
>:3

Author's Response: Marie has definitely got a long road ahead of her and Logan doesn\'t always make it easy, does he? I am glad you are a fan of bitch!Jean, she just begs to be written that way in my opinion.

Oh, Wow.
I absolutely loved that little bit of Rogue using Wolvie's mutation to her advantage, to send her own little secret message to him, it was so awesome.
I also love how you've presented her wanting to keep her 'control' secret. [I say that in air-quotes because she's only learned to turn it off, she hasn't truly learned to control it per se, she can't turn it back on at will yet, that I know of.] A fair amount of the stories tend to present it as 'she doesn't know if she can really control it or not, and doesn't want to hurt anyone on accident', referring to her wanting to keep secret so that she "[wouldn't be] poked and prodded and studied" was very original. I had never really thought of it that way before, the fact that if she suddenly gained control they would bombard her with questions on the whys and hows of it.
Ending on the ironic note that she's lying to herself, pure genius. I can't wait to see where you go from here.

D'awwww, almost sweet!Rogue, and almost caring!Logan. But only almost. Because this story is just to damn angsty and adult (and so many other words that I just can't think of), which is just the way I like it.

Author's Response: i hope you like more angst. yeh, i wanted the story to progress from somewhat gentle familiarity to something much darker as Wolverine gets to really know Rogue and how angry she really is, which provokes the raging animal in him.

Oh dear lord. The Guidance Counselors daughter part of me is saying 'This isn't right, you shouldn't be reading nor endorsing anything that portrays such acts.'
The dirty little almost Sub!Pervert in me is relishing this story, saying something along the lines of 'Well, she deserved it. And I mean, really, who wouldn't submit to a man like him.' I have got to stop enjoying dub!Con so much. *g*

Author's Response: heh heh, i know the inner moralist in me also bucked against the idea of this relationship and how disturbed and sick it is, but still smexy!\r\n\r\ni\'m going to write an epilogue which probably makes the question of \"is this a good or bad thing\" even more problematic.

D'aaaawwwwww

Love at first... fight...
Yah, not such a witty comment, it sounded better in my head. [Referring to Xaviers and her fight, not R/W]
As always, I love the story, and it's good to just go with the flow of the rabid plot bunnies, they usually know what they're doing.
I love how the relationship is progressing, it's nice to get some confirmation that maybe they won't kill each other... although, that rain check comment has me a little worried, the plot bunnies could make a sick little turn further in the story.
I'm happy at the thought that maybe Rogue will settle her demons a bit, get to see that maybe not she's as diseased and evil as she thinks she is. Letting down the shields can be a good thing.
As always, you're doing a great job with the characters and the plot, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. The possibilities are endless!

Author's Response: no worries, i have ZERO intention of letting her kill Logan. although another death had struck me as particularly fitting for this story. may not be for a few chapter but it\'ll happen. i was going over NIN lyrics tonight trying to find the right one for the next chapter and 2-3 of them inspired me for ore plot development. so much for my 4 chapters idea! the next chappie will be up Thursday night. i find promising you guys the date of the next update makes me accountable for the deadline LOL!

Oh God, all I could think of at that "We have to determine where to house you." line was Xavier plucking a sorting hat out of thin air, and placing it on our dear Wolvie's head. What an odd situation that would have been.

Author's Response: LOL! i guess Xavier is his own kind of sorting hat. and of course Wolverine wouldn\'t fit anywhere...at least not at the expense of anyone unlucky enough to have him as a roommate.

Wasn't quite sure I would enjoy what I read, despite my hungering for angst and drama, the thought of somebody else with Logan always make me squeamish [well, for keeps at least, quickies and flings don't squick me out].
Good lord was I wrong. This story is shaping up to be quite something, and the thought of a LoganMarieDon sandwich is just oh so good.
I cannot wait for new chapters and new confrontations between the three, and the rest of the XMen. Mwuhahaha

Author's Response: Doesn\'t it just make your toes curl in anticipation? I have longed to be part of a Logan and Marie Sandwich. It might not be the case with this story though. Logan and Donella might go for a threesome but Rogue? Maybe, maybe not.

I honestly loved the bit about his fantasizing about Jean and him getting caught by Scott. It was lol worthy. Again I enjoy the fact that he isn't so much in love with Marie at this point, he's just attached to her. The easing of his guilt by sending gifts is a good idea as well, and I'd be intrigued to see exactly how Marie would/will react to these little gifts.
Much love, and luck with the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! Cookies and brownies for you.

Not usually one to review(Yeah, I know, horrible person.) but good googley moogley. This. Story. There aren't words to describe it.

I've gotta say, I'm a fan of Vic. In this story especially. Vic, bastard that he is, having a soft side of sorts, sending Rogue to Logan even though he knows it'll probably end up with his girl leaving him. And I love to see stories that play up the brother thing, doing it comic style.

It's really good. I cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hey, my first review for chapter one! Let me know what you think of two & three. Especially 2. There\'s\' a whole lot of Vic Creed in it. With a whole lot more to come!

Oh boy, you make it easy for me to dislike Jean. Granted, that's a given for most W/R shippers. But at the same time, I feel that she's kinda relate-able.
"Jeannie, I love you. I will die loving you. But I'm not going to die from loving you."
I love that line, I think it sums up Logan's feelings really well.

I'm also really loving hearing from Logan's pa, Tom. Having the history from a third, more removed party is definitely good for explanations.
But goodness, I've gotta say that my favorite parts are the making house parts, and the whore in the bedroom parts. That last one probably cause I'm a perv concerning good ol' Wolvie.
Your story is remarkable, and I cannot praise it enough.