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Charles better get his damn act together. What is the use of being the most powerful telepath in the world if you can't locate one young woman. :)
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!!
I love the idea that Logan now remembers everything. And hurrah for Hank, he will find them. I have faith. I hadn't realized Marie had been in captivity that long if she has been gone two years!
Author's Response: In fact she\'s been gone only a year... She left about a year after Logan\'s departure. Sorry if I didn\'t express it well enough, I tend to be confused with dates and numbers in general!
the last line is the BEST!!!!
Author's Response: lol! :D Thanks!
I like this a lot, its cute and brings up a point that isn't talked about much, which is how much different are the Xmen than the Weapon X project.
I am dying to know whether or not this is really Rogue or is it Carol in control. Read the entire thing today, its great.
Okay so this is really cute, Pryo's comments amused me to no end. He is totally a playa, isn't he? I would love to know what Xavier decides. Could be an interesting conversation with Erik about it. (Can you see that those two discussing inapproperiate relationships? It would be fun.)
Author's Response: That\'d be nice yeah, but I as I said I can only make short stories if anyone feels like they want to continue this or whatever they\'re more than welcome :)
I really liked the way you did this. I knew we would see Magneto in some way but I wasn't expecting the Statue of Liberty. I like that you choose that, it was familiar but still different. I like how you put this together, you have kept the flow consistent throughout the piece. I like how you didn't bill this as a retelling of the movie. I am looking forward to the epilogue.
Author's Response: Fantastic--that was exactly what I was trying to get across. I\'m so, so, so incredibly, extraordinarily glad you feel that way. Thank you!! >hugs<
I really like this opening. I am assuming the second part - Logan arriving at the apartment and seeing the girl is a flashback? Or does the Thomas bit happen first?
Author's Response: No, you\'re right about the Thomas scene happening first, before he moved into the apartment. Thank you!!!! >hugs<
Have I told you yet how much I enjoy the way you structure this story? The way Logan's selfdeception drives the story is really natural and flows very well.
Author's Response: >hugs really really tightly< Thank you; Im so glad you think sn
It's really interesting. I don't think its all that dark but look at what I write so I may not be the right judge. :)
Author's Response: having read your stuff i\'m inclined to agree. but hope you enjoyed it all the same :-)
Well Logan is soo going to touch her anyway. I find it interesting that Jean would define Logan as her soul.
Holy mother of God. That Fic should be legal to read while on the train ion the way to work! OMG that's hot. I am not sure I am going to be any use the rest of the day. Thanks for giving me a good Monday.
Author's Response: Anytime, Alesia! Seriously, try reading it again on Tuesday and let me know if it still works for you...No, really, I\'d hate for there to be a scene on the train...Thanks so much for the great review! --Wendie
I have read this a bunch of times and somehow I never reviewed this. I wanted to let you know I really like the style, it has great character exposition and smut! Could it get any better than that??
I have throughly enjoyed this story the entire way through. It is wonderful and sexy and dark and has a happy ending which makes my little heart smile. THANK YOU!
Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it!! Thank you SO much for reviewing. I\'m a sucker for happy endings too. :-)
I think the Professor is going to kick Scott's ASS. Everyone seems to think Scott always acts with Charles' blessing and I have always felt when Scott gets his head on his shoulders like this he is doing absolutely the opposite of the what the Professor would want. And Logan had better not let Marie catch him. She will go all Southern belle on him, and Lord help him!
BTW I have been reading from the beginning and I love it, I am just a horribly bad at reviewing. But the story is great!
Author's Response: Oh, Marie will catch him all right! ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!
I am loving this. The way you wove Jason into the chapter I thought something might happen with him but I surely wasn't expecting that! I love the way you wrote Marie in this chapter - the avenging angel but she understands Logan's need for the kill and Logan finally understands the fierce will that lives within Marie. Now just don't kill them, yeah yeah I know they were both breathing but I won't rest assured until you get that next chapter up.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it -- especially that I was able to communicate Marie\'s strength and her understanding of Logan\'s need for personal retribution. I\'ll try to get the last chapter up this weekend.
Yes, the second chapter worked exceptionally well. I really like it. Your tone is especially wonderful.
I have just read this from beginning to end and I really like it, I am looking forward to the next chapter. You have a bunch of stuff going on here and I really want to see how all of this works out. I think John might be a spy and the virus is intentional and John is right about the Professor and I want some Logan kissage. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m looking forward to posting the next chapter. This story has gone through a number of rewrites and so I\'m hoping that I\'ve managed to keep it consistent! Thanks for reviewing!
So first things first, the reason you feel like you ran a marathon is because you did. This chapter had huge emotional reveals in it. I think more so then the previous chapters because we, the readers, knew Logan, Jubliee and Kitty wouldn't hurt Marie even if Marie didn't. Marie's back story, however, is completely open and the amount of blackness in it is completely up to you. Hence both our level of anxiety and your level of exhaustion.
Secondly this is going to sound pervse but I adore the idea that Marie killed Cody. It is a fresh idea on a 'story' we know very well. Even more fresh is the idea that because she took all of him, his presence changes and matures with her. Really cool.
I am looking forward to the next chapter!
I really am still loving this. I reread it tonight. I would love to see an update. (hint hint)
Author's Response: One is coming! Thank you for sticking by me. So much love to you!
This chapter as really cute. I really enjoyed it. I adore the relationship you have created with Logan and 'his' girls.
Author's Response: Thanks! I love what it\'s becoming as well!
I just wanted to let you know I am really enjoying this. This Rogue is just amount the right mix of brass and shyness for her background. I think that Carol is really interesting as well first as the rightnous aggressor and now as the source of selective information. I think I know what she is hiding. It will be interesting to see I am correct. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for dropping a line & letting me know what you think about things so far. I\'m super happy you think Marie is balanced out in this. I\'m also very curious about your theory ;)
I would be happy to beta. I really like the opening chapter btw. My email is alesiaglfyn@gmail.com
Author's Response: Golly gosh goodness, really? :) I might post one more chapter and if you think this story is still something you\'d want to sit through then I\'d be awfully grateful for your help :D
I am really enjoying this story. I think, think mind you, I know what Carol was up to and why Magneto did what he did to both Carol and Marie. The begrudged friendship occuring between Jubliee and Marie is really great. Jubilee's protection of Wolvister is also just adorable. I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it! And I appreciate you not sharing what your suspicions are. I\'m guilty of that as a reviewer & now that I write, I\'m not so sure I like that. It\'s 3am, I\'m on ambien so this response isn\'t going to make sense, I\'m terribly sorry. You like the pacing, too?! Not too droll?