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Real name: Bonnie
Member Since: 10/02/2007
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Reviews by alesia
"Suffering is permanent, obscure, and dark
And has the nature of infinity."
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William Wordsworth

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 30958 - Hits: 77000
Complete?: No - Published: 04/20/2010 - Last Updated: 05/21/2013
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 04/24/2010 Title: Chapter 4: The skein of time

Charles better get his damn act together. What is the use of being the most powerful telepath in the world if you can't locate one young woman. :)

Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!!

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 04/27/2010 Title: Chapter 6: Mens rea (Guilty mind)

I love the idea that Logan now remembers everything. And hurrah for Hank, he will find them. I have faith. I hadn't realized Marie had been in captivity that long if she has been gone two years!

Author's Response: In fact she\'s been gone only a year... She left about a year after Logan\'s departure. Sorry if I didn\'t express it well enough, I tend to be confused with dates and numbers in general!

One-shot PWP Logan meets Marie for the first time on a cruise ship. Sparks fly, good stuff happens! :D ;)

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Foof
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Lunarkitty's Oneshots
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4893 - Hits: 4457
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/26/2010 - Last Updated: 04/26/2010
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 04/26/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Toxic

the last line is the BEST!!!!

Author's Response: lol! :D Thanks!

Something was bothering Logan and for once it wasn't his past. Marie is there to help and kick a little tush on the way! Notice rating change

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 4110 - Hits: 14194
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/31/2010 - Last Updated: 07/07/2011
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 07/08/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like this a lot, its cute and brings up a point that isn't talked about much, which is how much different are the Xmen than the Weapon X project.

Casual sex, that isn't so casual. UPDATE: Final part and epilogue added. COMPLETED.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 83307 - Hits: 72169
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/11/2010 - Last Updated: 06/26/2010
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 06/12/2010 Title: Chapter 3: SURPRISES ALWAYS HELP

I am dying to know whether or not this is really Rogue or is it Carol in control. Read the entire thing today, its great.

After the Liberty Island incident, the professor wants to know the nature of Logan and Rogue relationship so he asks about it to the team. The answers are interesting;

Rated: G
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Friendship, General
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 206 - Hits: 2893
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/01/2010 - Last Updated: 07/01/2010
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 07/01/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay so this is really cute, Pryo's comments amused me to no end. He is totally a playa, isn't he? I would love to know what Xavier decides. Could be an interesting conversation with Erik about it. (Can you see that those two discussing inapproperiate relationships? It would be fun.)

Author's Response: That\'d be nice yeah, but I as I said I can only make short stories if anyone feels like they want to continue this or whatever they\'re more than welcome :)

"We love to learn we are not alone."-C.S. Lewis. The Wolverine meets, saves, and reluctantly befriends a girl while undercover.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 56200 - Hits: 167538
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/14/2010 - Last Updated: 02/09/2011
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/31/2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I really liked the way you did this. I knew we would see Magneto in some way but I wasn't expecting the Statue of Liberty. I like that you choose that, it was familiar but still different. I like how you put this together, you have kept the flow consistent throughout the piece. I like how you didn't bill this as a retelling of the movie. I am looking forward to the epilogue.

Author's Response: Fantastic--that was exactly what I was trying to get across. I\'m so, so, so incredibly, extraordinarily glad you feel that way. Thank you!! >hugs<

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 07/14/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this opening. I am assuming the second part - Logan arriving at the apartment and seeing the girl is a flashback? Or does the Thomas bit happen first?

Author's Response: No, you\'re right about the Thomas scene happening first, before he moved into the apartment. Thank you!!!! >hugs<

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 08/03/2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Have I told you yet how much I enjoy the way you structure this story? The way Logan's selfdeception drives the story is really natural and flows very well.

Author's Response: >hugs really really tightly< Thank you; Im so glad you think sn

A loose and dark retelling of Beauty and The Beast, Rogan style.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Dark, PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2680 - Hits: 5171
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/17/2010 - Last Updated: 07/17/2010
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 07/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beauty

It's really interesting. I don't think its all that dark but look at what I write so I may not be the right judge. :)

Author's Response: having read your stuff i\'m inclined to agree. but hope you enjoyed it all the same :-)

Logan and Marie as best friends... How long will that last? A tale of jealousy, betrayal, miscommunication and a real test of trust comes into play.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Friendship
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 28380 - Hits: 135414
Complete?: No - Published: 07/21/2010 - Last Updated: 11/18/2011
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 11/03/2011 Title: Chapter 20: Thoughts

Well Logan is soo going to touch her anyway. I find it interesting that Jean would define Logan as her soul.

'This just became one of those nights.'

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 940 - Hits: 3641
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/12/2010 - Last Updated: 09/12/2010
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 09/13/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy mother of God. That Fic should be legal to read while on the train ion the way to work! OMG that's hot. I am not sure I am going to be any use the rest of the day. Thanks for giving me a good Monday.

Author's Response: Anytime, Alesia! Seriously, try reading it again on Tuesday and let me know if it still works for you...No, really, I\'d hate for there to be a scene on the train...Thanks so much for the great review! --Wendie

Hope it is kosher to update this given that it was technically complete before...this is actually the second fanfic I wrote, but I've never been happy with it. Now that I've got a little more experience under my belt, I decided to rework it. I've added a section, and reworked the second half to resolve some point of view and other issues. Overall, though, it might seem very familiar if you read it the first time around. It's about half angst, half smut.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1, X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 6877 - Hits: 26896
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/25/2010 - Last Updated: 05/14/2011
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 09/16/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Sugar

I have read this a bunch of times and somehow I never reviewed this. I wanted to let you know I really like the style, it has great character exposition and smut! Could it get any better than that??

Now COMPLETE!!! :-D The X-team, including Rogue, liberate a mutant lab and find our favorite feral...

Okay, that's not much of a summary, so here's an excerpt to give you a feel:

She held out her hand, palm up, and for a second time seemed to stop. The man narrowed his gaze on her hand, and then again on her eyes. He took one shuffling step forward, and she concentrated on keeping her body loose, letting no tension show in her posture. The sudden /snick/ as the claws retracted startled her, but she managed not to jump. He watched her closely, reaching toward her hand. Suddenly he grabbed it, and for a second she thought he was going to bite her palm. But he just took a deep inhale, smelling her scent and then looking back at her eyes, assessing. She thought she saw a slight lessening of the tension in his posture after this strange ritual, but either way they were out of time.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 45928 - Hits: 197653
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/06/2010 - Last Updated: 01/22/2011
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/28/2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Butterfly

I have throughly enjoyed this story the entire way through. It is wonderful and sexy and dark and has a happy ending which makes my little heart smile. THANK YOU!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it!! Thank you SO much for reviewing. I\'m a sucker for happy endings too. :-)

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 12/30/2010 Title: Chapter 12: The Face-off

I think the Professor is going to kick Scott's ASS. Everyone seems to think Scott always acts with Charles' blessing and I have always felt when Scott gets his head on his shoulders like this he is doing absolutely the opposite of the what the Professor would want. And Logan had better not let Marie catch him. She will go all Southern belle on him, and Lord help him!
BTW I have been reading from the beginning and I love it, I am just a horribly bad at reviewing. But the story is great!

Author's Response: Oh, Marie will catch him all right! ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/19/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Prisoner

I am loving this. The way you wove Jason into the chapter I thought something might happen with him but I surely wasn't expecting that! I love the way you wrote Marie in this chapter - the avenging angel but she understands Logan's need for the kill and Logan finally understands the fierce will that lives within Marie. Now just don't kill them, yeah yeah I know they were both breathing but I won't rest assured until you get that next chapter up.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it -- especially that I was able to communicate Marie\'s strength and her understanding of Logan\'s need for personal retribution. I\'ll try to get the last chapter up this weekend.

Logan is away on a mission... What oh what will Rogue do to help him through his time away?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Logan's Chair
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 12293 - Hits: 31738
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/08/2010 - Last Updated: 12/17/2010
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 12/09/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, the second chapter worked exceptionally well. I really like it. Your tone is especially wonderful.

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 07/05/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Always really loved this one

Rogue's life has become pretty complicated after Alkali Lake. Logan's gone, Christmas is coming, and her relationship with her friends consists mostly of notes left in strange and unlikely places. Ororo gets the brilliant idea to teach the kids the Joy of the Envelope, and now a total stranger knows more about her than anyone else. Told through letters, emails, and notes from Secret Societies, like in Feeling Sorry For Celia

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Friendship, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 82395 - Hits: 112690
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/13/2010 - Last Updated: 01/01/2013
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 04/23/2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I have just read this from beginning to end and I really like it, I am looking forward to the next chapter. You have a bunch of stuff going on here and I really want to see how all of this works out. I think John might be a spy and the virus is intentional and John is right about the Professor and I want some Logan kissage. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m looking forward to posting the next chapter. This story has gone through a number of rewrites and so I\'m hoping that I\'ve managed to keep it consistent! Thanks for reviewing!

Marie's a little crazy. Logan's a little farther south than he should be. Everyone's a little worried about the political climate in the nation.
A long and mixed up AU containing our favorite cast of characters, in which Logan and Marie try to live their lives peacefully (yeah right).

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 49249 - Hits: 115025
Complete?: No - Published: 12/23/2010 - Last Updated: 05/16/2013
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 02/03/2011 Title: Chapter 6: An honest tale speeds best, being plainly told

So first things first, the reason you feel like you ran a marathon is because you did. This chapter had huge emotional reveals in it. I think more so then the previous chapters because we, the readers, knew Logan, Jubliee and Kitty wouldn't hurt Marie even if Marie didn't. Marie's back story, however, is completely open and the amount of blackness in it is completely up to you. Hence both our level of anxiety and your level of exhaustion.

Secondly this is going to sound pervse but I adore the idea that Marie killed Cody. It is a fresh idea on a 'story' we know very well. Even more fresh is the idea that because she took all of him, his presence changes and matures with her. Really cool.

I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 07/05/2011 Title: Chapter 7: In my mind's eye

I really am still loving this. I reread it tonight. I would love to see an update. (hint hint)

Author's Response: One is coming! Thank you for sticking by me. So much love to you!

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 08/31/2011 Title: Chapter 11: I like this place and willingly could waste my time in it

This chapter as really cute. I really enjoyed it. I adore the relationship you have created with Logan and 'his' girls.

Author's Response: Thanks! I love what it\'s becoming as well!

"...home of lost causes, and forsaken beliefs, and unpopular names, and impossible loyalties!" -Matthew Arnold

A Brotherhood Rogue is betrayed and finds herself in the middle of a very fractured team of X-Men after she kills one of their own. Now she has to figure out what Carol was & still is up to while juggling a tentative friendship with Jubilee, a growing resentment for the Professor, and a distracting attraction to the growling feral mutant who was sleeping with the woman she killed.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 42049 - Hits: 86794
Complete?: No - Published: 12/28/2010 - Last Updated: 08/18/2011
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/28/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I just wanted to let you know I am really enjoying this. This Rogue is just amount the right mix of brass and shyness for her background. I think that Carol is really interesting as well first as the rightnous aggressor and now as the source of selective information. I think I know what she is hiding. It will be interesting to see I am correct. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you for dropping a line & letting me know what you think about things so far. I\'m super happy you think Marie is balanced out in this. I\'m also very curious about your theory ;)

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 12/29/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would be happy to beta. I really like the opening chapter btw. My email is alesiaglfyn@gmail.com

Author's Response: Golly gosh goodness, really? :) I might post one more chapter and if you think this story is still something you\'d want to sit through then I\'d be awfully grateful for your help :D

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 02/22/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am really enjoying this story. I think, think mind you, I know what Carol was up to and why Magneto did what he did to both Carol and Marie. The begrudged friendship occuring between Jubliee and Marie is really great. Jubilee's protection of Wolvister is also just adorable. I am looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it! And I appreciate you not sharing what your suspicions are. I\'m guilty of that as a reviewer & now that I write, I\'m not so sure I like that. It\'s 3am, I\'m on ambien so this response isn\'t going to make sense, I\'m terribly sorry. You like the pacing, too?! Not too droll?