Wow again. This is one gem in the rogue/wolverine fanfiction world. While reading both of your stories (specially this one) I couldn't help but think that you've portraited Logan as a perfect DaddyDom. Oh yeah, probably you don't even know what that is, lemme copy/paste a definition for you:
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“Daddy Dom” commonly refers to a “Daddy Dominant”. The BDSM world commonly lays claim to this personality. Daddy/little girl does not refer to the ages of the participants and does not involve a father/daughter relationship. The word “Daddy” describes the feeling of comfort, security and guidance that a man provides. The word “Dom” describes the dominant personality some men hold.

A Daddy Dom must be the center of her little girl's universe. He wants and needs to be the Alpha male and wants to know that no other person holds the place in her life as he does. He does not share. He sees in his girl someone who can achieve a much higher level. He often believes more in her, than she believes in herself. He will push her when she needs a push, and support her when she needs support. She is safe in his arms because he knows everything about her, and he still loves her. When she goes to him she knows that this man knows all of her dirty little secrets and it doesn't matter. To him she is beautiful. She is his prized possession. She holds the most tender part of his heart and has greatest power to hurt him.

This love would not be possible without respect. It takes strength to be her confidant, her anchor. It takes strength to let her out into the world when all he wants to do is hold her safe in his arms. He sees it as his job to protect her, both from the outside world and herself. And it takes strength to do what is necessary when she needs to be disciplined. A man like this knows the value of discipline. If  he does not enforce discipline, this respect becomes a tenuous thing. If his girl finds that she can manipulate him, she begins to lose respect and the ability to empower becomes impeded. .

The little girl is submissive to her daddy and a willing follower since "Daddy knows best". Some relay on their Daddy's to structure their days. Daddy will put you to bed at night and wake you in the morning. Talk to you, teach you things and make sure you are happy and all is well in your world. He does everything for you. He will give you a bath, dresses you, cook for you and tells you when to eat. Daddy is always in full control, and the little girl loves it that way because it makes her feel safe. All in all a Daddy will take care for (physically and emotionally), nurture, mentor, teach, discipline if necessary, and fundamentally respect and love his girl.”
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I hope you don't think this is too kinky but your Logan/Marie relationship totally looks like that. Don't know about the discipline part because you haven't specified about it but the rest looks like a daddy/lg relationship to me (one that I loved!).

Author's Response: Wow. That\'s a fascinating insight (am not easily squicked). Interesting definition to the concept...I like it, and I\'m glad you do too. Thank you!!

I love all your work please keep on writing

Please more!!!

I loved your story, that was very intense! Added to favorites

Author's Response: Thank you! And it\'s not over yet, several more chapters to go :-D

Amazing comic, I've never seen anything like this before!!! But this page was so sad, I hope he doesn't leave her.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!