I'm not gonna lie, as a rule I generally have a problem with the whole 'everyone in the mansion doesn't approve' premise in Rogan fics, but I like the save at the end - especially since your Logan was so confident in his decision.

I really enjoyed this & how you wrote Logan. I hope you have something else up your sleeve next. If not I'm wishing many Rogan bunnies your way!

Author's Response: Neither do I. If it helps, it was only Jean and Xavier, and Scott-but he wouldn\'t have found out. Im sure that in other fics they will be very accepting. However, in this one that wasn\'t plausable.

I like how you're balancing Jean & Marie in Logan's head. While some of us (*raises hand*) would enjoy just tossing the good doctor out of the jet so she doesn't get in the way of things happening between L&M, I do like this. It's more believable since she appeals to all of Logan's lusty wrong feelings, but we see that Marie wormed her way into Logan's brain - great set up & I can't wait for him to realize that she's more than a kid he made a promise to :)

Author's Response: I would LOVE to see Jean tossed out of the jet. And then trampled. By a thousand raging Rogan fans wearing tshirts with Hugh Jackman\'s face on them. Heck, maybe I could work it in. ;)\n\nThank you, thank you thank you thank you. I have the biggest smile on my face right now.

I like this version better than the 2nd movie so far. And please, by all means, bash Iceprick & Jean all you want ;)

Have I mentioned how much I appreciate your writing? Especially when it comes to dialogue & Logan's lines. You have a good grasp on his character.

And I'm oh so glad we see Logan the Humanitarian - ripping out the intercom, not having sex on the bench - gosh, always thinking about others ;)

I can understand how hard it must be to write Logan in love as you mentioned (even though I don't write myself, but that just goes to show..). Anyway I think you did a great job! I always figured he'd be gruffer and try harder to fit the Wolverine image once he finds out how he feels since he's not familiar with warm fuzzy feelings.

I rally liked seeing his struggle here & the ending was a nice balance of new-to-these-feelings-awkward Logan & melty-lock-the-door-&-just-you-wait goodness :)

I heart me some brooding/introspective Logan and this definitely topped anything that I've read about this side of him. There have also been many fics about his feelings for Jean after she died, but this one is great. The comparison of his grief to Scott's was the clincher and it rings true.

Favorite: "You’ve got to respect a little bit of a girl who sasses her way through a whole conversation with a man she knows could snap her like a twig" :)

Excellent work!

Author's Response: Aw shucks! Thanks for that. I just thought that even at the end of X2 Logan was starting to come to some sort of realisation about Jean and his feelings for her, considering how he and Scott interacted. In the end, even though she tormented Scott, his grief was just a lot more like someone mourning a love (not just a lover), and I don\'t think Logan ever really got there. I have to admit that line was just a one-off, but for me it just perfectly captured *that* scene in his truck.

Please please please continue & redeem Logan in my eyes! We know Rogue is strong & I kind of want to see Logan get his head out of his ass in this story ;)

Ahhh! Backbone!Marie :) You're Marie has a hell of a lot more restraint that I would after finding out Logan took her to that same restaurant.

Loved that she literally kicked his ass to the floor! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

"Little traitor". Haha, That was cute. And just where exactly does Logan get off thinking she has a boyfriend? Man, someone needs to take him aside & just smack some sense into him.

Oh how I love Jubilee and her timing. I love your little angst bunny even more - just when you think it's safe & lusty, BAM! angst bunny hits you in the gut. Poor Rogue. I can't wait to see Logan squirm :)

WOW! Where the heck did this dirty & incredibly creative little bunny come from? Even the details were written so beautifully to match the tone of what was going on.

Just a suggestion: include a warning at the beginning stories - like the ones on amusement park rides that might be too wild for people with heart problems ;)

Author's Response: i\'m catching up on my (long-delayed) thanks yous for reviews. hope this find you well, and just so you know, there\'s a gold lamee- wearing fic here with your name on it. (whistles innocently) just so you know, like... thanks again, and hobbits away, hey!

Oh good lord, just imagining Logan hiding in a closet & growling is hilarious. Then you add in a conversation about him coming out of it...w/ Scott?! Priceless.

This is like a progression in de-Wolverine-ing Logan. When should I expect him to start blubbering over The Notebook?

Author's Response: Haha! Yeah, de-Wolverine-ing Logan is exactly what it is! I\'m gonna Wolverine him back up a little in the next chapter though. Well... kinda... *g*

Not only are you a talented writer, but you're clearly psychic - I had a craptacular day & was in desperate need of some funny.

Loved how Marie was..ahem, on top of things & beat Logan at his own game.

"Oh Christ, did she know there were handcuffs under his pillow?

“Well I do now,” "

Nice ;)