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I'm an avid fan of Wolverine since the original X-Men cartoon, and have read comics since the early 90's.
 
Reviews by spidergirl723
But knowing afterwards, after we’re done bleeding and after we’re done dying, there is someone who doesn’t want that from you. Someone who understands having your body used.


Rated: R
Categories: Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2482 - Hits: 4180
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/31/2007 - Last Updated: 03/31/2007
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 10/14/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to agree with all reviews and say this is one of my favorites because it seems so real. It's a beautiful depiction of love.

I know there was a sequel to this written by another author- do you the title and author? That one was great as well.

Logan has taken in a desperate and on-the-run Marie who has offered ‘anything’ in exchange for his protection. Logan wants everything. This story chronicles is what happens to them and their relationship dynamic as they learn about each other during the return ride to Xavier’s. It also explores how their rather non-traditional relationship is received by the team once they arrive at the mansion. This story was inspired by Kristine’s “Anything” http://www.wolverineandrogue.com/wrfa/viewstory.php?sid=2559. This story will make more sense if you have read "Anything" first as my opening chapter picks up right where Kristine’s story ends. Besides her story is one of the best W/R pieces ever written so you might as well go read it - NOW! :)…I’ll wait.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 74499 - Hits: 115911
Complete?: No - Published: 09/14/2009 - Last Updated: 04/11/2012
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 11/03/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is awesome- love the D/S nature of the story especially since so many authors write with Logan's softer side in mind, but you write him extremely bad-a$$, love it!!!

Especially love hearing it from both POVs.

When is the next chapter coming out?

Author's Response: Chapter 4 is out if you are still interested. No sex though, although chapter 5 will make up for it. Promise!

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Date: 05/29/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

These chapters are hotter than a summer afternoon in the middle of Florida. Nice work. Keep the smut coming. (no pun intended)

I enjoy a darker Wolverine, and believe me I immensely enjoy this series, but as a suggestion, could you add in more non-oral sex?

Just a suggestion, but keep up the writing- it steams up my car windows every time.

Author's Response: Spidergirl - Thank you for the review. Considering how hot the middle of FLA is about now, that\'s a huge compliment! We are definitely in store for more non-oral sex. I wanted to get the \'morning ritual\' and Marie\'s acceptance that she would be doing things because Logan asked her to, even if she didn\'t like them at first established. Now that I feel like I have done that, we will be seeing more variety. \r\nHere’s to keeping the car windows steamy! ~ alesia

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Date: 10/28/2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I've not even read it yet, I'm just super excited to read it after I get home from work!!! Thanks in advance :) and btw WOOOOHOOOOOO!

Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it.

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Date: 03/17/2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I can't believe it's been over a year since you updated as I love this story and can't wait to read more. Please keep writing, this story is H-O-T hot!

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Date: 08/11/2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for the latest chapter. This story is beyond excellent and unlike 30 shades of grey, you write like a pro.

Congrats on the spec script as I know from experience it's hard even getting to that point.

I hope you finish the story but also that you excel in the ent. business.

Any update on the spec?

In one moment, one split decision changes the lives of two people and Hell is what it leaves in it's wake!

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 68292 - Hits: 83789
Complete?: No - Published: 12/11/2009 - Last Updated: 11/27/2011
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star
Date: 07/11/2011 Title: Chapter 12: She is Found

Thanks for another great chapter, I've now read and re-read all the way through and it's a great story.

I especially like how Logan went to the Brotherhood, as I haven't seen that before in a story. I didn't like the rape scene, but realistically in that situation it would unfortunately probably happen.

Hell, if it was me I would have pulled a Michael Weston a la Burn Notice and swore I was with Stryker's team and not strayed from my cover. But I digress.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hey and thanks for the great comment!! I\'m glad that you are enjoying the story. As for Logan going to the Brotherhood, I got to thinking about how desperate he would be to find Marie and what lengths he would go to to find her. It just popped in my head that Magneto would be his best bet since I\'m sure that he has resorces that maybe even Xavier can\'t get to. So, the idea was born. As for the rape scene, believe me I DID NOT want to write it and fought against the idea for a while, but you\'re right, realistically it would probably happen, so I did it as tasteful as possible without too much detail. Thanks for reading and the next update will be out shortly!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star
Date: 07/28/2011 Title: Chapter 12: She is Found

"Swallowing the lump in his throat and not bothering to wipe the tears on his face, he walked slowly towards Marie."

I loved, loved, loved this chapter- great work and keep em' coming. I especially can't wait to see how this develops with Logan in the brotherhood. A very interesting predicament and not one I've seen before.

Author's Response: So glad you\'ve liked it! Yeah, I thought Logan having to join the Brotherhood would be a new twist and it would show the lengths he would go to for Marie! In my head, that man loves her more than life itself and sacrificing everything for her was only fitting. She had sacrificed everything for him at Stryker\'s hands and it was only fitting that he do the same!! Thanks for the review and keep them coming!

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Date: 10/05/2011 Title: Chapter 12: She is Found

OMG, I had to search for this story, bc it's been awhile since you updated.

But, I love, love, love this story- you really paint a heart-wrenching scene when Logan has to leave Marie, and I can't wait for the angsty/romeo and juliet saga to continue.

When will you update? Can't wait :) If you can't tell I'm a bit excited for this story to continue...

Author's Response: I know!!! I\'m sorry about the long wait. Life can get in the way some times, but I\'m back now with several updates and more to come! So glad you love this story, its what makes me continue writing. Please, continue being excited about the story, I feed off of it!! :)

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Date: 11/17/2011 Title: Chapter 14: Memories Made of Nightmares

Great writing, I'm looking forward to another chapter- keep going!! lovin' the angst.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Glad you\'re enjoying the story. Yes, I love angst to and it\'s so fun writing it...that\'s sounds weird! lol, anyway thanks for the review and keep them coming!

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Date: 11/17/2011 Title: Chapter 15: Explanation and Redemption

Awesomeness. I always knew Eric wasn't all bad, that's what makes him interesting. I cannot wait for the angst that will ensue. I'm sure not everyone will have agreed with Logan's decision. Ha, keep writing.

Author's Response: Yes, Eric has his good moments, though he is still the Magneto we love to hate sometimes!! He is VERY complex! Thanks for the review and more chapters are to come!

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Date: 12/12/2011 Title: Chapter 16: Home is Where the Heart is

Love this series- when's the next chapter? when does Logan start to spend time with Marie? So looking forward :)

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Date: 03/17/2012 Title: Chapter 16: Home is Where the Heart is

When will this be finished or at least the next chapter? I have loved this story and the interesting set-up. I can't wait for Logan to start romancing Rogue. Please write another chapter.

Author's Response: Never fear!! I\'m working on the next chapter now. It will be out shortly!!

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Date: 08/11/2012 Title: Chapter 16: Home is Where the Heart is

I know I already wrote this, but seriously when will there be another chapter. Excellent writing all the way. Can't wait!

Logan is being held in a mutant laboratory, until the team arrives. We are introduced through the eyes of Nurse Sutter.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Drabble, Drama, General, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1627 - Hits: 3164
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/04/2010 - Last Updated: 01/04/2010
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star half star
Date: 01/05/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought the details of the nurse's life and how you clearly painted a picture were very well written but would have liked to hear that amount of detail coming from Logan's noggin and especially during the dialogue between him and Rogue. Really liked when Logan said "Is that so?"-- sounded very loganish ;-) Will there be a second part, maybe a post mission with a debriefing? As I really liked this form of the rolo combo. Keep writing!

Marie thought she'd left her life as an X-Man (and Logan) behind when she left the Mansion. But now Wolverine is missing and she may be his only hope. But can she afford to step back into the Mansion, back into the lifestyle and most importantly back into Logan's life?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Action, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 38
Wordcount: 72361 - Hits: 338243
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/22/2010 - Last Updated: 01/07/2011
Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 05/17/2010 Title: Chapter 11: Back in Black

Really am lovin' this story! I especially like how you added that Logan cheated with a redhead, unfortunately it's right in character :( Keep it going! I can't wait for Logan to meet her bf for real and try to win her back.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 06/11/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Kissing Dynamite

You have to continue this rockin' fanfic! This is my favorite series going on right now, please keep on going. I seriously want to know how they make it out and what happens when Logan and the boyfriend meet. I want Logan to have to compete with another man for once and be on the other side of the fence!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 06/25/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Gimme a Bullet

I cannot wait to read more!!! When does Logan get back to the mansion and have a confrontation with Rogue's BF? When does the real lovin' between them start? hint.hint. ;)

Also, no offense to you but I really hate Daken. If you kill him off then you'll be my hero.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 08/07/2010 Title: Chapter 25: Got You By The Balls

Fantastic story arc, but when oh when is the next chapter coming? And when will Logan meet Rogue's bff? And when will Rogue find out the real reason behind Logan's wayward ways? Perhaps, in the next few chapters??? hint. hint.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 08/10/2010 Title: Chapter 25: Got You By The Balls

When's the next chapter coming? I'm dying here, your story is awesome and my #1 favorite read on this site.

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Date: 02/02/2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue: Let There Be Rock

I really didn't want to write a review because then I really do know this series is over. I really love how you write such a strong Rogue- one that doesn't put up with Logan's issues. Ha.

Your writing is fantastic and the way you write I can totally feel the passion- awesome.

More writers should take the strong woman approach with Rogue, it's so much fun.

Thanks for a great series- here's hoping I read more!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 09/08/2010 Title: Chapter 27: Playing With Girls

Love this chapter but still can't wait until Marie's BF and Logan meet. Good times. I hope Marie makes Logan jealous for at least a little bit. I love the inner Logan speak, btw. Right on target.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 09/12/2010 Title: Chapter 28: Fer Those About To Rock (We Salute You)

pure awesomeness. But, will Marie ever find out the truth about Logan's one night stand???... until next time I guess. Can't wait!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 09/30/2010 Title: Chapter 30: Some Sin For Nothing

That chapter was so awesome! You have wolvie's inner voice down to a tee. Now if only Callum had been using video or audio, because I'm sure Marie would love to listen to that. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed
Date: 10/28/2010 Title: Chapter 31: Kicked in the Teeth

Thanks for the mention. I really enjoyed when Rogue bended over laughing even though I didn't get the Callum/Logan showdown I was hoping for. Oh well, I do look forward to a bit more angst before Logan gets a happy ending :)