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Reviews by Entropy
I said I wasn't going to do it, but then I did it anyway. I should be ashamed of myself.



Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Games
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4230 - Hits: 5910
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/09/2006 - Last Updated: 03/09/2006
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/30/2009 Title: Chapter 1: There Are Limits

Hot and sweet, a most excellent combination. I actually really liked that they sort of took it slow. Uh, kind of slow. Slow-ish?

Delicious all around!

Logan, Remy and Rogue come to an understanding.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 16691 - Hits: 3077
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/14/2001 - Last Updated: 02/14/2001
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/09/2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Reasonable Compromise

Sliced bread. Better than.

Simply awesome.
And what Mia said.

“That’s a long wait for a train don’t come.”

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2738 - Hits: 3985
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/05/2007 - Last Updated: 11/05/2007
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/02/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful.

"Nice Southern girls aren't supposed to talk about sex."

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 8396 - Hits: 5443
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/27/2007 - Last Updated: 11/27/2007
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Shit. Lost my review!

It went something like this: Beautiful, skillfully sculpted. I am dumbstruck by the way you managed to flesh out the characters so brilliantly. Dialogue hilarious, interactions believable. Just fantastic.
I love your work!

Marie has a probing question for Logan, who has to decide whether to describe or demonstrate by way of an answer.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 6506 - Hits: 5754
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/27/2007 - Last Updated: 11/27/2007
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ditto. More please!

In the great tradition of AU and What If?, a variation on a theme. Meeting, check. Bar, check. Running away, check. But at a very different time in life.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 8663 - Hits: 10854
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/01/2008 - Last Updated: 03/03/2008
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/01/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Slow Train Coming Remix

Beautiful writing. Vivid, visceral, poignant.

Logan and Marie take an interesting vacation.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4129 - Hits: 4304
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/09/2009 - Last Updated: 03/09/2009
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/12/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Road Trip

I so need a vacation.

Rogue and Wolverine become closer, and not in a way he expected.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Animal Death, Cutting, Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 36518 - Hits: 161029
Complete?: No - Published: 03/21/2009 - Last Updated: 04/05/2009
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star half star
Date: 10/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Getting Away

Don't leave us hanging!

Sometimes the moment has passed. If that is the case, could you be convinced to give us a synopsis of what happened?

Beautiful setting and interactions between our two esteemed heros.

Author's Response: i do plan on finishing this story. just have another one occupying my mind at the moment.\r\n\r\nyes, i know i suck leaving it hanging right at the NC-17 part, but i had to bust my smut cherry with a couple of shorter stories first. i hope to wrap this one up in the next month.

retired featured story Marie goes looking for Mr. Right Now.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 8007 - Hits: 10767
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/31/2009 - Last Updated: 03/31/2009
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star half star
Date: 11/11/2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Sunday Kind of Love

I love it when worlds collide, then merge. It's also great to see how Logan deals with New York City. Hot & sweet, a delightful combination.

Set in X-men: Evolution.

Logan is frustrated with life at the Institute, but as he gets to know the Rogue he starts seeing that life there isn't nearly as boring as he'd thought.

Each chapter inspired by my one of my favorite bands of all time: Nine Inch Nails. Can't think of better music to describe Rogue or Logan. P.S. I'm a comment whore, feed the beast!!!

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X-Men Evolution
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, PWP, Shipper, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 32987 - Hits: 63562
Complete?: No - Published: 09/28/2009 - Last Updated: 11/03/2009
Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 10/29/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Suck

Oh my! This series just keeps getting...
wow.

"Language, goddamnit!" best line eva.

Author's Response: i know, i have to work that line in again sometime. i was planning on having the next chapter up tonight but had the worst day ever. i thought i was going to get laid but instead if got a $400 a month pay cut. still happy to have a job but my hatred for my boss killed my muse for the next few days. i\'ll set up a new chapter soon, i promise!

Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 10/30/2009 Title: Chapter 1: All the Love in the World & The Hand that Feeds

*Sigh* I am so sorry to hear that! On the other hand, perhaps negativity will fuel some 'smexy' badness. A wise emperor once said; "The hate is swelling in you now...Give in to your anger...It is unavoidable. It is your des-tin-eee."

In seriousness, Deep breaths, and fluffy kitty thoughts. The love train will come round again soon, the muse will be back, and the money will too-- eventually.

A/U X1 - Logan and Marie meet as cage fighting opponents, somewhat follows the story line of X1, but with major twists.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 16554 - Hits: 69200
Complete?: No - Published: 10/18/2009 - Last Updated: 04/22/2010
Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 11/04/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Trouble

I'm hooked!

Sometimes comfort comes at unexpected times, and courage is rewarded in a most surprising way... even if it needs a trip into Greek mythology to fulfill your deepest wish. (Not my first fanfic, but my first Rogue/Wolverine).

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 6186 - Hits: 2573
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/23/2009 - Last Updated: 10/23/2009
Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 10/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Apples Of The Hesperides

Beautiful. Just beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you! *bows*

Marie and Logan play Poker with some pretty interesting stakes.

Rated: Mature
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Friendship, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 2980 - Hits: 22127
Complete?: No - Published: 01/03/2010 - Last Updated: 01/18/2010
Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 01/17/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Moar please!

Rogue and Logan, road trip, the American southwest.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: UST
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2628 - Hits: 3397
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/14/2010 - Last Updated: 01/14/2010
Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 01/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Writing. Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it. :)

Once upon a time, there was this really overlong and convoluted AU how-they-met fic. It wasn't finished. Now it is.

So here it is from the beginning.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 32
Wordcount: 81127 - Hits: 302451
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/17/2010 - Last Updated: 07/02/2010
Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 02/13/2010 Title: Chapter 31: When I Awake

Oh wow, Wow! This is delicious, like a N'Awlins pastry.

Need clarification: is this the conclusion, or is there more to come? Please advise!

Also, I wanted to mention a continuity glitch: Seems like there is an extra overnight added: They are getting busy, but they stop, she pretends to fall asleep, then it is morning. But it still feels like the same day. Pacing feels a bit wonky just there. Otherwise the flow was perfect for the story to unwind with delicious languor.

Author's Response: More now at last provided. (And I hope this chapter clears up the continuity for you...not a glitch, but possibly not as clear as it could have been made...)\r\n\r\nAnd thank you!

A different take on the origin of our favorite couple. What if Rogue hadn't hidden away in the back of Logan's camper? What if she'd taken a more direct approach?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 6781 - Hits: 7408
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/18/2010 - Last Updated: 01/30/2010
Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 01/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Only Option

Very well fleshed out. Looking forward to reading more!

As the cure wears off, Rogue leaves for San Francisco, and after a series of unexpected encounters with a certain mutant in a similar situation, learns a little something about grief, vulnerability, loss—and the things beyond romance. (UPDATE: I've now divided this monster into three parts.)

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 19723 - Hits: 12726
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/04/2010 - Last Updated: 06/14/2010
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/21/2010 Title: Chapter 3: San Francisco, or In Praise of Mourning: THREE

Wow. After that I need therapy. And a shot of Zubrowka.

Author's Response: Hahahaha. I love this comment. Short and sweet and traumatized. Adore. :)

Casual sex, that isn't so casual. UPDATE: Final part and epilogue added. COMPLETED.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 83307 - Hits: 72226
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/11/2010 - Last Updated: 06/26/2010
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/21/2010 Title: Chapter 1: IT'S A DULL LIFE

Just Delicious. Beautifully written. Pacing, characters, plot, everything -- beautifully crafted story!

Author's Response: Thank you for this incredibly kind comment. I\'m happy you enjoyed the story! Thanks again for reading.

Marie thought she needed a cure. Logan thought he needed answers. Turns out fulfilling a need is a lot less satisfying than accepting a want – but no less achingly complicated.

First part in the Use Somebody series. Post-X3, the architects of Marie's cure and Logan's amnesia conspire within the government. Only together can Marie and Logan break their cycles of self-destruction and stop a war they were never meant to start.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X2, X3, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Use Somebody
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 24694 - Hits: 77275
Complete?: No - Published: 12/16/2010 - Last Updated: 08/15/2011
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star half star
Date: 12/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Scream: I

Love it.
Could work as stand alone, or the beginning of something awesome. Looking forward to your next adventure!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Five days of torture, before her blood time. Scent so thick with musk that it made his judgment suspect, and his hands untrustworthy.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 9851 - Hits: 47255
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/21/2011 - Last Updated: 02/14/2011
Reviewer: Entropy Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/09/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Scent

No words. Just stars.

Author's Response: Thank you. Stars are good - I\'ll happily take stars!

Now COMPLETE!

Yes, another AU. :-D Logan is on a mission to contact a powerful mutant and convince her to join the X-Men. Things go awry, of course. ;-) Here's an excerpt: “You’ve been shot before,” she said, and he could practically see her mind piecing it together. “And you don’t want to go to the authorities.” He saw that icy calmness creep back into her demeanor as her scent changed sharply. She was no longer afraid for him, now she was afraid of him. “Who do you work for? Did he send you to find me?”

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 34127 - Hits: 90177
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/27/2011 - Last Updated: 05/07/2011
Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 03/27/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Contact

Exciting intro. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: :-D Glad you\'re looking forward to more! Second chapter is actually coming along pretty quickly...

Post X3. Professor Xavier returns to the mansion. Tries to help, and be helped by, two people. About bodies, and how to live in them.

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 7085 - Hits: 5766
Complete?: No - Published: 05/07/2011 - Last Updated: 06/18/2011
Reviewer: Entropy Signed
Date: 06/10/2011 Title: Chapter 1: ONE

Acse, I am soooo glad you are back. Really looking forward to reading more. Must say again, Anti Romance Story from way back was epic, and is still often reread!

Moar pleas!

Author's Response: Hi, Entropy, thank you for this lovely comment! And thanks for the comment on Anti-Romance Story, I\'m so glad you enjoyed it and still get enjoyment out of it. I\'m very very grateful.