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Now COMPLETE!!! :-D The X-team, including Rogue, liberate a mutant lab and find our favorite feral...

Okay, that's not much of a summary, so here's an excerpt to give you a feel:

She held out her hand, palm up, and for a second time seemed to stop. The man narrowed his gaze on her hand, and then again on her eyes. He took one shuffling step forward, and she concentrated on keeping her body loose, letting no tension show in her posture. The sudden /snick/ as the claws retracted startled her, but she managed not to jump. He watched her closely, reaching toward her hand. Suddenly he grabbed it, and for a second she thought he was going to bite her palm. But he just took a deep inhale, smelling her scent and then looking back at her eyes, assessing. She thought she saw a slight lessening of the tension in his posture after this strange ritual, but either way they were out of time.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 45928 - Hits: 197452
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/06/2010 - Last Updated: 01/22/2011
Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 01/23/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Prisoner

Hi doctorg! Just for clarification of my review, I meant on to *your* next story. Please, please write more! :)

Author's Response: Ha, thanks for clarifying, I totally did *not* get that...I thought you meant you were on to reading other stories. :-D

Rogue's life has become pretty complicated after Alkali Lake. Logan's gone, Christmas is coming, and her relationship with her friends consists mostly of notes left in strange and unlikely places. Ororo gets the brilliant idea to teach the kids the Joy of the Envelope, and now a total stranger knows more about her than anyone else. Told through letters, emails, and notes from Secret Societies, like in Feeling Sorry For Celia

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Friendship, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 82395 - Hits: 112465
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/13/2010 - Last Updated: 01/01/2013
Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 04/21/2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay, so I saw the update and thought, "huh, how did I miss this story?" So, I started reading... and couldn't stop! This is good stuff---good character development, interesting twist with the virus, nice mix of the 'normal' world with Keltie and Rogue's less standard experiences. Please keep the updates coming! Now, I really should be getting back to work...

Author's Response: Thanks! I posted the first ten chapters rather rapidly although they\'ve been up at ff.net for a while, so I\'m not surprised you missed it. I really try to balance Keltie and Rogue\'s world--there\'s nothing more annoying than OC\'s that take over the story, but in this case Keltie is really there so that I can tell Rogue\'s story. \r\n\r\nGood luck with your work...I should probably get back to that too...:)

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 04/29/2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Another great installment! What a lovely mix of light angst and irreverence, humor and wit! I have to say, I wish Keltie lived next door to me when I was in high school. What a crack-up :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That\'s basically what I was going for so it\'s nice to know it worked :) I try to make Keltie a mixture of the people I knew in high school and the people I wish I knew in high school. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 05/06/2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ali, this is good, good stuff! There's an authenticity here that makes me really care about the characters, and the ways that they interact, understand and misunderstand each other avoids ever feeling contrived. Keep up the good writing and the posting!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 06/20/2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Whoop! I was ecstatic to see that you'd updated; I love this story. It's great that Keltie and Rogue finally get to meet, and I was on the edge of my seat reading about the pool incident. I don't suppose there's a future for John and Keltie?? Loved how she and her sister saved the day. Well, I should get back to work. Sigh. Congratulations on graduating and the fancy new grownup job! But remember, don't let that keep you from the important things: updating this story!!! :)

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Another great chapter! Every time I see you've updated, I think, "Yippee!" and devour the chapter. Then I get to the end and think, "Damn!" As in, damn that was good and damn I have to wait for the next installment. So, here we are again-- yippee! and damn! You do a great job of making the characters feel very real and making me care about them. I am adding this to my favorites, something long overdue. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 08/08/2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yes, an update! And a good one. The plot continues to thicken. I appreciate both the possible silver lining and the drama involved in seeking it out. And I anxiously awake the next installment!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 08/08/2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Okay, I just reread the chapter, because I read it in a hurry the first time. Oof-- Rogue's letter to Logan just socked me in the gut... in a good way. Well done! And now I'm going to stop commenting, and commence my (hopefully) patient waiting for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 11/24/2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awe-some! I am SO glad that you've gotten back to this. Whoop whoop! Keep the updates coming! I've been checking regularly, waiting, hoping. I didn't know I could laugh and nervously bite my nails at the same time, but your chapter showed me it's possible. :) More, please, and soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always look forward to your reviews..they mean so much to me, so thanks for taking the time to review every chapter :) I\'m hoping to get the new chapter up ASAP!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 01/02/2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow. I can't believe this story is over. Over! I have enjoyed it so much-- the way you developed the characters, their mixtures of strengths and weaknesses, the method of using letters/articles/announcements to tell the story. Rogue and Keltie were great, but I think (surprisingly) that John was my favorite. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it! No doubt I'll read it again and again to lift my spirits and make me laugh when things get stressful or boring or both. And I'll look forward to whatever you write and post next. Thanks for the great story!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad! I actually think John is one of my favorites too! When I started writing this, I had NO idea where it was going to take me, and John was always the biggest surprise. I really did enjoy writing it, as long as it took me to complete, and I\'m going to miss it a lot. But I\'m trying to work on some other things, so hopefully they will be posted eventually as well :)\r\n\r\nThe fact that you think you will read it again is really such a huge compliment, and I can\'t thank you enough :)

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 12/16/2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh my goodness. I cannot TELL you how glad I am that you're back! I love this story and have been waiting waiting waiting (like a lot of other folks, I'll wager), and was thrilled to see the update. It's great how strong Rogue and John were, how Rogue doesn't take any anything from Logan, but just lays it out there for him to deal with or not. And the deposition scenes... priceless! :) Thanks heaps and heaps!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!. It means so much to me that you liked it! I am the worst for taking eons to update but it\'s because this story is really important to me. I can assure you that this story will not be abandoned...I\'m seeing it through to the end :)\r\n\r\nReally, thank you for your kind words, and I will try my hardest to update sooner!

What's in a name

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 236 - Hits: 1380
Complete?: No - Published: 02/04/2011 - Last Updated: 02/04/2011
Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 02/04/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Here here! I second the previous reviews-- an excellent and suspenseful opening. And now.. please-more-soon!

Takes place after X1, X2&X3 never happened. Rogue's life is drastically changed after being captured and forced to kill her friends. Logan & Jean come back to the mansion engaged after leaving to explore a relastionship, to discover a lot has changed.

Rated: Teen
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 19
Wordcount: 41590 - Hits: 125982
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/04/2011 - Last Updated: 08/02/2011
Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 07/26/2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Time for a Jean-Smack-Down! Whoop!

Author's Response: I know right. (*evil grin, evil menacing laughter*) Jean will soon know what it means to have the fear of Wolverine put into her. Thanks for reviewing!!

Now COMPLETE!

Yes, another AU. :-D Logan is on a mission to contact a powerful mutant and convince her to join the X-Men. Things go awry, of course. ;-) Here's an excerpt: “You’ve been shot before,” she said, and he could practically see her mind piecing it together. “And you don’t want to go to the authorities.” He saw that icy calmness creep back into her demeanor as her scent changed sharply. She was no longer afraid for him, now she was afraid of him. “Who do you work for? Did he send you to find me?”

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 34127 - Hits: 89978
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/27/2011 - Last Updated: 05/07/2011
Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 04/04/2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Procedure

Whoop! Good chapter! Logan had better feel like an ass, a treacherous ass. I imagine he'll figure things out by the by. Waitin' on the next installment!

Author's Response: Yes, there will be a reckoning. :-) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 04/07/2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Agreement

Ah hah! Well, that explains the cryptic Storm reference. Logan, Logan, I hope Rogue kicks your butt from here to next Sunday when she finds out what you're up to! And is this an evil/manipulative Prof. X story? I always have such mixed feelings about those... but I'm loving this one!

Author's Response: :-D Yeah, I don\'t think Logan had much faith in Scott\'s ability to destroy his own bike. Probably would have tried to get away with just flattening a tire or something! Yeah, I don\'t actually like evil Professor X stories either. My Xavier is going to be a good guy. I think right now it\'s just a little intellectual to him. He\'s playing things strategically, and not really realizing how connected Logan and Marie are becoming.

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 04/14/2011 Title: Chapter 7: The Complication

An update--- whoop! Normally I'm not a smut-fan and tend to shy away from NC-17 and the like, but I'm just really digging your Marie and the whole set-up of this story, so I'm sticking with it. I like that she had enough of a sense of self-preservation to not tell Logan about her ability to flip him like a burger. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: So glad you\'re sticking with the story. If it helps, it will be smut-free for the next little while, until I figure out a believable way to get Logan and Marie back in a smutty mood with each other. ;-) And LOL at \"flip him like a burger\" -- very apt. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 04/18/2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Storm

Great update! I like how you got them all directly to the mansion without a lot of back and forth ("Ah'm not goin'!" "Yes, you are." "No, Ah'm not!") nonsense. And I also like how Rogue let herself get angry when she reached the mansion and met the Professor, aka puppet master. She's not "Rogue" for nothing! Don't worry about the next chapter-- I have every confidence in your story-telling skills!

Author's Response: Thanks! I had all these elaborate scenarios for how she ended up at the mansion (her being saved unconscious from Magneto, etc.) but in the end, it seemed to work better for her to just go. And she may be angry, but she\'s not stupid, and I think if she called Xavier \"Wheels\" she got enough info to know that Xavier is at odds with Magneto, and if she had to choose between the two of them, he would be the better choice. Thanks for the vote of confidence. I can\'t claim that I love the next chapter, especially the beginning part that gave me such trouble, but it\'s done and the story is able to roll on!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 04/21/2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Garden

Yeah, self-reflective Xavier! Yeah, thoughtful Logan! Yeah, serene Ororo! You have me cheering for them all. And anxiously awaiting the next chapter :)

Author's Response: :-D I\'m so glad you liked it. Yes, I\'m hoping Marie will discover that things aren\'t as black-and-white as they seemed at first. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 04/26/2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Uncertainty

Another great installment. And I'm with Alesia; I like that they've reached a detente. It feels more believable than all of a sudden to have smiley sunshines and happy birds, you know? My favorite part of this chapter:

He sighed, looking almost dejected. “I’m not your enemy, Marie.”

Her anger was gone too, leaving her feeling cold and empty inside. “Maybe not. But you’re not my friend either. Not like you pretended to be.” She turned toward the elevator, and this time he made no move to stop her. She stopped, but didn’t turn to look at him. “And the name is Rogue.”

Well done!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Yes, I\'m trying to hit the happy middle between dragging it on too long and having them reconcile too suddenly to be believable. Hopefully this in-between step will help. I\'m glad you liked that bit of the chapter. I\'ve found that Marie in this fic is a little weepier than I usually like to write her, so I enjoy the parts when she\'s a little more badass.

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 04/30/2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Confrontation

Okay, now is the time for Super Rogue! Seriously, the woman *knows* what Magneto is like, knows that he'll use Logan to get to her, and knows he can't be trusted. So, don't let Magneto manipulate you, Rogue! Fight! You're tough, you're badass, you've got way more up your sleeve than that villain. Don't go quietly! Damn the torpedos (or, in this case, darts) and full steam ahead! Make Mags wish he'd never even heard of you!

Okay, enough of my ranting. Thanks for the chapter! I'm still in and hooked despite my ambivalence about smut. Whoop-- on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, I\'ve been surprised by how this Marie has turned out so far...she\'s a little more vulnerable (i.e., weepy) than I usually portray her. I like a kickass Rogue myself. :-D I promise she will do what she can. Glad you decided to power on despite the smut...I don\'t know if there will be more, probably not, but if so I will definitely warn if there is.

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 05/02/2011 Title: Chapter 12: The Declaration

Ah! Evil cliffhanger! But now's when the full power and fury of Rogue is unleashed... right? I'm really looking forward to that. I'm glad to hear I won't have to wait much longer, but sorry to hear the story will end soon. Sigh. Whoop! So conflicted...

Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffhanger! I thought about making this and the next all one long chapter, but it was getting too long and I wasn\'t sure there would be enough left over for a whole other chapter. I hope you like Rogue in the next chapter. :-D

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 05/08/2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Choice

Happy anniversary! And many thanks for finishing up this great story. It's *so* satisfying to have Rogue kickin' some villain butt and riding off into the sunset. And it was interesting to think of Logan as being in better condition after getting rid of all the metal. Good thinking! And feel free to post another story anytime. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I\'m so glad you liked the end. I was worried that Marie wasn\'t ass-kicking enough...because I really wanted the reader to figure out what Marie\'s plan was as Logan did I felt I had to write it from his point of view, and then most of Marie\'s ass-kicking was \"off-camera\" because Logan was too busy with Mystique to see it! It did take serious chutzpah to strip the metal from Wolverine, though, so in that way I\'m glad Marie showed that she would do what she needed to do for them both to survive. Yeah, I can\'t remember what made me think that Logan would be happier without the metal...I think maybe some fic about how cold he gets. I was tempted to give it back to him fully in the end because it\'s so much a part of his character, but I settled for just the claws. ;-) I never know if I\'m going to write another story or not, but I promise if I do I\'ll post it here!

Rogue is keeping a complicated secret that could change everything.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 10155 - Hits: 50550
Complete?: No - Published: 06/07/2011 - Last Updated: 04/18/2014
Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 06/07/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

None of your business, Hank! But... I wanna know, too. :)

Sometimes love is the unrequited kind. Rogue is growing up. Logan is in love with Jean. And nothing is simple.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 15101 - Hits: 29271
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/01/2011 - Last Updated: 08/02/2011
Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 08/02/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

Oh, I like it. I really do. You've wrapped this up so well. I appreciate the hopeful resolution. I was a little concerned throughout the story at how all the angst would resolve... or not. I can deal with angst, as long as the ending is happy. Too much sadness and crap in real life for me to enjoy it on the page as well. Thank you for such a satisfying but not sentimental ending. And now, bring on the mankini!

Author's Response: Thank you! Especially for saying it was a satisfying but not sentimental ending - that\'s made me very happy :o)

Taking the cure was almost the hardest thing Marie had ever done. The hardest came soon after, when she left the X-men to build a life for herself in the "baseline" world. But years later, when her mutation returns—along with some unwelcome and unethical scientists—she has to turn to the X-Men once more.

That is, if they can find her.

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, Drama, UST
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 11832 - Hits: 10173
Complete?: No - Published: 07/05/2011 - Last Updated: 07/24/2011
Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed
Date: 07/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great great start! Thanks for making the switches between timelines so clear-- I sometimes have a hard time following those, but with this story it's not a problem. Please, update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat!