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I like this story a lot. Altough its sad, it's very well written!
You are a really good writer!
o/ o/ o/
Thank you for coming back!!!!!
I love this story!
Don't take so long for the next chapter, please!!!
Author's Response: *lol* Thanks! :oD I\'ll try and have the next chapter up by the weekend.
wow!!!
Finaly!!!!!!!!!
I though this would never happen!! Thank you so much!!!
Suche a great chapter. You describe the emotions so well! It's really amazing!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks! :oD
They should forbid people from posting one chapter at a time!!! Serius, it's torture!!!
PS: this is my way of BEGGING you to not take a break :o) Please!!!
Love the story, it's absolutely fabulous!!! You are an amazing writer!!
I've registered here only to ask you to please don't stop it now!!!
Author's Response: oh wow--- what a compliment for you to register just for my story. :o thank you so much for the feedback and the support. i\'m so glad that you are enjoying it so much!!
wow!!!
That was amazing!!!
Ok, ok, you can take your rest :o)
But please, don't take it too long!!!!
Author's Response: thank you for the green-light on my break. haha. and thanks for the review.
Oh God
This is getting better each chapter!
Please don't take long for next one!
Author's Response: hey you. i swear i have actual plans to write the next chapter. honestly. i just haven\'t fully gotten back into the rythem of writing again. but i\'m trying. thanks so much for the feedback. feedback is truly the cattleprod to my butt that pushes me to write faster and post more often. ;)
Ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
That was hot!
You are evil!!! I want Logan to strip too!!!!
You really know how to make the story interesting, but I'm a little worried that you sad that There are only a few chapters left!!! O.O
Are you crazy??? I want a lot more...hahahaha
Just kidding! I know writing must be a really hard work. But thank God you are so good at it!
Can't wait for next chapter and next story!!!
Please, don't forget their double date with Bobby and Kitty! I'm waiting for it! And Logan and Scott meeting! And the party! Will there be any more drama in this?
Oh, don't worry about errors in the writing! I haven't seen none! Besides, the story is so good that we can't even notice than, even if we wanted too.
Sorry for writing too much!!! hahahaha
Oh, and sorry for my bad writing, english is not my first language!
Can't wait for next one!
Author's Response: i haven\'t forgotten! I\'m about to toss a drama bomb into the storyline because really soon there will be the double date and Logan and Scott will meet and of course, the infamous party. So yeah, there\'s more rides to come.
thanks for the great feedback-- you can *never* write too much! And double thanks for teh sweet words about errors and typos. I know they\'re there. But as long as there aren\'t too many than hopefully they don\'t distract from the story too much. which sounds like the case here (fingers crossed).
thanks again! The next chapter should be up by monday!
You know, the first thing I do when I get online is to come here and check up for updates! I'm soo adicted to this story! Although I can't understand the MacGyver fascination...hahahahaha
You are a really great writer. The story is very real, even for an AU without powers! And you developed the characters pretty well.
And you got me craving for peanut butter!!! And I have *never* eaten it! There is no such thing in my country :o(
I loved this chapter, it was the funniest! And I loved how Logan and Scott met. Your Scott is great!!!
Is there something going on between him and Jean?! Very nice!! Can't wait for the party!!!
I'm looking foward to next chapter! Please don't take too long!
Author's Response: lol @ the MacGyver fascination. I tell ya-- to explain the MacGyver fascination would take way too long to explain. But I may have to do that one day!
so glad you\'re enjoying the story still. I still cringe whenever I post a chapter because I, myself, have a hard time liking AU stories. like I said to someone else, I must be doing something right to please you all. And whatever it is, I hope I don\'t lose it!!
peanut butter is a staple in American children\'s lives. Where are you from? I will have to smuggle you in a jar. ;)
again, i\'m happy that you liked this chapter. and I can\'t tell you if there\'s anything going on between Scott and Jean. you just have to wait and see! haha
First of all, sorry you had a bad night! Hope you are doing better now!
You know, I came here today just to look up for things and you had updated!!! Then I saw that it was a big chapter (more than 5,000 words!!) and that there would be some drama.
Wow! Gotta tell you: I love some angst!!! And I was missing it in this story!!! It was about time everyone find out! Amazingly, I was happy while reading it, because I love the characters to suffer before a happy ending...hahahahaha
It was my favorite chapter so far, I kept reading it slowly, enjoying every moment, afraid to get too soon to the end!
I loved the discussion with Jean, I feel just like her, always having to be the perfect one, the one that does everything right, that can't disapoint anyone!
You know, what makes your story so good, even for a no-powers one, is that it is very real, you kept the essence of the characters, and above all, because you are a really good writer. You know how to keep it interesting, and make us want more when a chapter is over! The story is very well developted, you don't forget characters, or situations, everything fits perfectly.
I'm really anxious about the next chapter (as always), although I'm having a bad feeling that this story will be over soon!
PS: I'm not gonna offer to be the beta because english is not my first language! Oh, I'm from Brazil and I just foud out a place that sells peanut butter *_* Now I need the boyfriend!!!
Author's Response: i am doing much better today! And I completely agree about the angst. I love a story with a good bit of dirt in it, but considering how I\'ve tried to keep this one fairly light, I didn\'t feel like I could make it *too* angsty and still be able to get away with it.
thank you VERY much for the kind words about the story. i could honestly sit here and write about 2,000 words in response to all that you said but that would be just too much for you, i\'m sure. ;) The next chapter should be out in the next couple of days. It got really busy for me recently but it should all slow down soon and give me time to put into the next chapter.
hooray for finding the peanut butter!! you know what? I don\'t even love it, to be honest. I like Reese\'s candies, but I probably only have a PB (and honey) sandwich about once a year. However, since writing some of these chapters I have been craving PB like you wouldn\'t believe! I\'ve seriously got to go buy a jar soon before i explode. And yes, I need a boyfriend, too. let the manhunt begin!
Hey, just read it again.
And this caught my atention: “Bobby warned me not to trust you"
WOW!!!! What was that about? O.O
I can't wait for the rest of the story!!!!
Author's Response: lol. you don\'t miss a thing, do you? :P
Thak you, thank you, thank you for updating!!!!!!!!!
I was getting crazy in here!!!
Though you had forgotten this story...hehehehe
Ok, now I'm gonna read it! :)
Author's Response: nope. didn\'t forget it. just didn\'t have time for it for a while there. ;)
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!
So, first of all, sorry for all the work you had at your job. Why can't your boss see that this fic is way more important than all those papers he gave you? =P
Well, I'm just so jealous of you right now because of your new puppy. I'm thinking seriously of getting one too, even if my mother will kill me when she finds out!
So, to the story...
like everyone else, I wanted more Logan in this, but totally agree that you had to fix things between Marie and Jean first. I loved the scene in the three house. Very touching!
I think everyone who has a sister (or in my case, a brother) feels like those two. I'm a lot like Jean, actually, only I had to be perfect in everything because that was the only way of getting my parents atention. I bet my brother feels like I get all the atention because I'm the perfect one. Brother and sister relationships are always hard, no matter what! Anyway, this is not a terapy section! =P
Continuing with the story: I love the 'will they or won't they' with Jean and Scott. Although I don't like the Jean from the movies, I have no problem with this one. So it's ok if she gets a happy ending!
Now, the most important thing: please don't take another week to update again!!! Don't go to work, call in sick, just don't torture us again...hahahahaha
Oh, and please don't finish this story too soon. It's soo good I wouldn't mind reading another more 20 chapters!
MORE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!
Author's Response: well, my advice is to not show up at home one day with an unannounced 162 lb dane that\'s 36\" at the shoulder. Most mom\'s aren\'t usualy real keen on their kids and their \'bright ideas\' when that happens. =P
Thanks for the all great feedback. I was trying to make the discussion intimate so i didn\'t want it to happen in the middle of a party or in a big \'ole kitchen. i\'m glad the treehouse worked. and hey-- if they had broken into a fight atleast there, where it\'s cramped, they couldn\'t have inflicted much damage on the other person. hm. unless one defenestrated another. huh. anyway, glad you liked it and it worked.
as for all the rest, in a nut shell-- you know the story must come to an end and that end will be soon. :( so sorry. and also, it is saturday morning, the sun is barely out, and i am already stuck behind my computer at the office, working on these papers. Stupid, stupid, real life. Grr.
This story is fantastic!
I loved 'Anything' and always wanted to read a follow up to that story!
Thank you so much!
When is the next chapter coming?
Author's Response: It is here, if you still want to read it. Thank you for your comments and compliments.
This is sooooo good!!!!!
When is the next - sex - chapter coming out? :)
Author's Response: yes, i\'ve written half of it but got stuck when the \"Mutant High\" story plot bunny jumped on my leg and humped it madly. i\'ll get back to this story when I finish Mutant High, which I plan to do in the next week. :)