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Oh my god I love this! Love love love and I'm seriously crushing on a story that portrays Rogue from the comic verse with movie looking rogue- love this love you please continue at the first signs of persistent inspiration
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!! I love you for reading. More on Thursday!
more pah-lease!
Author's Response: A whole lot more, if all goes to plan! Thanks for reading.
hey TR did ya get my e-maiL?
Author's Response: I did, thanks, and I just finished responding to it. Check your inbox.
OK- I just got around to reading this chapter because of scheduling conflicts and partially due to my six hours a week of Botany-and I'm a business major- I.hate.college. Rapidly Digressing-I'd like to tell you that I don't think its very nice when one person tries to kill another person. For example, cutting of the chapter at the place wher you left it- not very nice, good example of me trying not to die of shock and grief.
I'm mean seriously I've been anxiously waiting for more Logan and Marie and that little bit of talk goin on at the hockey game was a nice tie-over but OMG!! The bar scene was so0o0o0o sweet! I was all melty and happy and envious! But then when he put his hand over her's and said "go out with me again" oh my gawd! PLUS THE MAN DRIVES A MUSTANG!!!!! AH!!!
This is a great story and I just think if you don't want me dead you should continue it before I cry. Like really now, c'mon! Please thank you and....hurry!
Author's Response: haha, okay, that was a damn fun response! and no, i don\'t want you dead or crying so i promise to start writing the next chapter with a renewed sense of purpose. :) chapter 9 should be up and ready soon.
ahhh!!!! You updated!! I haven't even read it yet but I'm so excited I had to come say YEAH YEAH YEAH!!!! BRB!
Okay-back!!!
I don't even mind the lack of Logan/Marie...see look...this is me not minding- barely mentioning it at all....not like I'm DYING.For.More or anything......
......
LoL I do enjoy a good explaining chapter-I hope Jean ends up with Warren they deserve each other. Oh he is so totally gross by the way-pushy guys = the worse
The Toes thing with the "their like little candies" O.O...no no sorry Bobby can go be homosexual with a severed foot in a closet somewhere-far from Rogue.
Oh, by the way, I left it out of my last chapter but when I re-read chapter 8- ya know withdrawal can be a real bitch sometimes hehe*- I was mega impressed with your Logan- very real and down to earth, a great example of what Logan would be like without all the feral animal growly-ness with the extra baggage of no memories and the unknown age and the nightmares filled with metal and needles and doctors oh my- he seems real, and again HE DRIVES A MUSTANG- but really he does seem like A+, gold star, extremely 100% authentic Logan- you definitely hit the nail on the head.
Okay, think I said everything I wanted to say, I'm just gonna wrap it up now. can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Craving it like a heroin addict who ran out of needles ;)
Author's Response: thanks for the detailed feedback. im actually really glad that you said what you did about Logan because that was exactly what i was going for. :D
ah!!!! !!!!
Okay this review is for chapter 10 & 11- don't beat yourself up about 10 so much it was informative, I'm computer savvy myself and hey I've seen the inside of a few strangers e-mails ; ) yea the dork who couldn't figure out the < > codes, but I never knew that tid bit about the bluetooth thing- but I'd heard about it- thats interesting.
Also, you have an explosive vocabulary, you throw in these really sophisticated words and it really spices things up descriptively speaking. Such as:
saccharine, and sequestered, and inquisitiveness. Those are some of my favorites from Chp.10 but I equally enjoyed chapter 11 and pseudo, perusals
and rakishly-F.Y.I Logan grinning rakishly down at Marie- yeah just send someone with a mop to come clean me up b.c I was a puddle on the floor
Awesome-ness achieved and seriously I don't want to see Logan get hurt if he finds out Marie's plan- too bad so sad sorta deal- I LOVE THIS LOGAN usually I throw people cookies or cakes but I'm going to throw you a meat ball because it's brain food!
So take your hunk of meat and my praises and go! GO write another chapter!!!
Author's Response: 1) I don\'t know if i got the Bluetooth thing completely right--- i\'ve never done anything like that myself (honestly) but i think i wrote it pretty close to correct from what i\'ve read online. 2) thanks for all the compliments and the hunk of meat. haha. i would have preferred a hunk of Logan.... but yeah, i\'ll take what i can get. ;)
Oh man! At 9am I checked my mail as I was gettin ready for my Botany class-from HELL and I saw you updated but I was rushing so I couldn't read it but now I just did, yeah!
Magical meatballs work! A boulder needs to fall off a cliff and hit bobby on the head and MARIE AND LOGAN NEED TO KISS DAMIT! OMG-Yeah that whole parking lot scene- so frustrating! I would have jumped the man by now!
Author's Response: sorry you had to suffer through Botany before you could indulge in some quality fic time, :( but i\'m glad you enjoyed it. now, stop wishing death upon poor Bobby and make me some more meatballs. i need more brain power before i can properly connect Logan\'s lips to Marie\'s...
THATS WHERE YOU ENDED IT?!?!?!?
REMEMBER WHAT I SAID ABOUT NOT TRYING TO KILL PEOPLE?!?!
I'm going to go get meatballs and throw them at you! You just need to understand...you can't do that without warning a girl! Where's chapter 14-ahh!
Okay I'm breathing in and out breathing, I'm okay, everythings going to be fine ::whoooooo::
Okay, favorite lines in this chapter: I wanted to be her. Limp, on a bed, with perky nipples.
Other than that, again I LOVE your Logan I WORSHIP him-oh would you happen to know the name of the Chagall painting they saw? I'd love to see- your description really made inspires curiosity in the reader-hehe
Author's Response: thanks again for the feedback. i\'ll probably post 14 tomorrow. i don\'t want to post it any sooner because then i\'ll feel obligated to start the next chapter this weekend and, well, i need a break. even if it is only one day. haha.\r\n\r\nas for the painting, it is by Marc Chagall and it is titled: \"Traum der Liebenden\". which, loosely translated, means \'dream of the loving\'. to be honest, i\'m not a huge fan of Chagall\'s work but this painting strikes a cord with me and tugs at my heart strings. it\'s beautiful. everything around them--- the swirls, the bridge, the clouds, the tree, the flowers--- if you look close you can see countless images of faces and couples intermingled. Sigh.
WOW Okay yeah I'm sitting here plotting your destruction because you actually ended it there and I have this brown paper bag I'm breathing into but it isn't working! I almost fell off my chair and had a heart attack- yeah know when your REALLY into a story and you're just reading every word really carefully and then you keep scrolling down and suddenly there's no more DOWN cause you've reached the end of the story without even realizing it? And suddenly your breathing in and out of a paper bag b.c you're having a panic attacK? No...never had that happen? eh ?
But hey I'm so happy for you- 11 reviews just for this chapter-so far!- and you've written 54,000 some-odd words really congratulations it's a great story- you gotta be proud!
Now, I'm sorry but if there isn't an update by Monday at midnight I'm going to have to start plotting your demise-I can't believe you ended it there-obviously you're trying to kill me!
I do love you're Logan- his blunt revelation of his feelings for Marie could only be made believable by you and in this story- you created a really great Logan and I loved this whole chapter! The part where Logan licked her lip? I DID FALL OFF MY CHAIR! Seriously, that almost killed me but not as much as when the story ended like 10 lines later! UPDATE LADY
Author's Response: i loved writing this chapter. it is my favorite by far. i\'m glad that you and everyone else seemed to enjoy it as well. and thanks for your kind words about Logan. you are too sweet. now then, put the paper bag down and check your inbox. i\'m posting ch.15 asap. :D
"I sighed happily and fell asleep, safe in his arms."
AHHHH!!! I don't even have another word for it!!!! Wonderful balance between intimacy and pure mushy love! Hey now I was using that paper bag to breath again but it wasn't cause of shock this time! Whew! That was just like HOT and seriously what girl wouldn't want to be sharing Logan's massive bed! I get the feeling MR. Logan has more money then we've been led to believe oh but I hope he doesn't find one of her lists or something and find out about her plot with Bobby-even if it is so obviously discarded now
Love this chapter, love your writing, have a nice hiatus and come back with a rocking chapter 16!
Here have some chocolate chip cookies with reeses pieces! you've earned em!
Author's Response: hey... reeses are my favorite chocolate candy! thanks for the review, amanda. i\'m still nervous about the whole thing-- i don\'t feel like it came out quite right--- but maybe a lot of that has to do with the first time jitters. when i figure out what i\'m doing for 16, i\'ll try not to disappoint you. :)
TR....I miss you....update....booo
::throws out random cupcakes:::
May the cake up cup land in your hand and inspire you to UPDATE!!!
Author's Response: aww. thanks for the note and thanks for the cupakes. your cakes must be magical because look at that-- you threw them my direction and a day later i updated. hmm. ;)
LoL
It was so funny, when I saw you updated I hastily pressed on reviews instead of the link and I read that review below this one and all I see is "Logan stripping" and literally I went from o.o to O.O in point two seconds and attacked my computer trying to get to chapter 16
I can't believe this story already has 60,000+ words- you're doing a great job! Miasma, by the way, great word usage, especially when you plug into the rest of the sentence- lust cloud- niceeeeee lol can't wait for chapter 17!
.... really... I can't....c'mon now
Author's Response: haha-- i can absolutely understand your rush for fic after reading that line in the review. i\'m laughing just thinking about your comical reaction. :) and yeah, i can\'t believe this story already has that many words. did i ever have a life prior to writing this fic? the sad thing is this one isn\'t even finished yet and already i have more ideas for the next story...
Oh man that was fantastic and holy cow you have over 100 reviews.
I seriously don't think there's anyone on Wolverine and Rogue right now who doesn't know about this story, and if there is then they should really familiarize themselves with it because... its just that good! I loved this chapter and I LOVE that she showed up wearing a bathrobe lol it was great!
Author's Response: Amanda, you are too sweet to me. I don\'t know if everyone is reading this or not. My only hope is that anyone that *does* happen to read it also happens to enjoy it even a little. i\'m such a nervous nelly when it comes to posting. I\'m still so green that I don\'t know how certain chapters will be receieved until the reviews come in. I can\'t stress enough how much these reviews mean to me. But I\'m building confidence now and even have plans for the next storyline.
\r\nThanks tremendously for all your wonderful feedback thus far! now go and finish writing a few more chapters of WYCF. :P
::SIGH:: And now...the longest review ever....
"But I wasn’t insane. I was horny."
Its like 3 am and I just laughed ridiculously loud when I read this chapter- great scene.
Now, when I first started writing fanfiction it wasn't W/R so my first stories are elsewhere but I just wanted to say I know what you mean about posting for the first time and agonizing over whether or not the chapter will meet up to the readers expectations, and anxiously waiting for reviews and yada yadda yadda, but I just had to tell you- stop worrying! You're really good, impressive even when you consider this is your first W/R story and I have a confession to make when I read it was going to be a no powers story, I was like, eh : /
But this story blew me away and it blew everybody else away too- I mean you have so many reviews and it really hasn't been a very long time so they've accumulated pretty fast and you're doing a great job and I can't wait to read more!
I'm fresh out of baked goods, no time to bake, pre-midterm week ...blah-anyway I'm trying really hard to update.... and I started a new fic.... I know I'm going to fanfiction hell a place chuck full of unfinished stories and spelling mistakes and bad plots with phony dialogue but I cant stop writing L/R fanfiction...maybe I just need a life? lol
Anyway can't wait for your next update, anxiously awaiting!
Author's Response: 20 points to you for picking out my favorite quote in the story! When I wrote it i didn\'t think anything of it, but then i went back to re-read everything and i laughed at that candid Marie-thought. How much more succinct can one get?
\r\nthank you again for the review. i love the long ones, they give me more insight into what the reader is thinking. And I know what you mean about AU/no powers. I\'d be the same way. In fact, I am the same way but I did this fic anyway. What was I thinking?? O.O I\'m very greatful that I\'m doing something right, though, and that people are keeping the flames away! I am absolutely in love with this forum because of the people here (oh, and of course the plethora of great stories).
\r\ngood luck with your midterms. don\'t stress out too much. but remember that you\'ve got people here still waiting on more updates from you--- and what is more important? School or FanFic? I\'ll give you a hint: it\'s not school. ;)
GASP!!!!!
THIS IS ME GASPING!!!!
I love and hate you all at the same time! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!?!?!?!?!?!??
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
IF I WEREN'T SITTING WHEN I READ IT I WOULD HAVE FALLEN OVER!! AH!
I'm reeling! I'm honest to god reeling right now! HOW COULD YOU!?! THE WHOLE THING!!! EVERY BIT OF IT!!
This whole part:
“Um. Well.” I took a deep breath. “My parents never paid attention to me. But then they did, only it was because of Bobby. Except I didn’t find out until I broke up with him. So I thought I could get him back and they’d notice me some more. There was one problem. He’d started dating you.”
I WAS LIKE: HOLY SHIT THAT IS A HEARTY HELPING OF TRUTH!!!
OMG!! THEN WHEN THEY WERE DRIVING HOME!!!!! Oh. My. Ga-
The way he quoted McGyver and the way he said about the NY chick he chases after and everything!!! I was dyyyying!!
Oh jesus woman you better update like fast! Like yesterday, like in the next five minutes!! HOLY HELL!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!!
YOU MUST CONTINNNNNUUUE!!!!!!!!!
I need to go, I'm very dizzy now I need more of this story like a heroin addict in search of opiates in the dessert of sobriety.... I'm gonna go lye down and breathe slowly- update in the mean time so I don't die of deprivation, huh?
Author's Response: LOL. i\'ve been laughing my butt off for the last minute straight after reading this. i would apologize but you\'re just too damn funny when you\'re impassioned and you know it. ;)
by the way, \"like a heroin addict in search of opiates in the dessert of sobriety\"-- great line. And, um, you haven\'t died yet have you? because then i\'d feel really guilty. maybe you found a paper bag to breathe into? well, jeez, now you have me worried. keep breathing! the chapter is in the process of creation!
OKAY
Let me explain something, recently I've been going about my daily life and entertaining myself by reading some stories on the old archive and I need to explain something to you.
THE ONLY REASON I'VE BEEN COMING BACK TO the new archive is because....drum roll please...I NEED TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER OF THIS STORY!!!!!!
I AM DYING!!!!!!!!
Literally, the doctors have come and gone, I'm having withdrawal symptoms and nothing can make me better!!! I've spent a hunk of my spring break reading and writing fanfiction and WHILE I'll be reading A WHOLE OTHER FIC I'll start thinking "ohhhh I wonder if something like that is going to happen in Stamp of Approval hmm.... can't wait to find out...."
EVERY TIME I come to this website, I'm a little hopeful and a little scared waiting to see if you updated! PLEASE! PER FAVOR!!! I'M possessed I'M STARTING TO SPEAK IN DIFFERENT TONGUES!
ADIO MIO!!!! IN DOMANI PATRI UPDATE!!!!! IMMEDIATEO!!!!
NO I DON'T KNOW WHAT ANY OF IT MEANS!
PLEEEEASSSE UPDATE!! I'LL GIVE YOU MY FIRST BORN CHILD!!! AHH!!!! JUST UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF ALMIGHTY GOD!!!!
::falls to the fall in exhausted panic::
Author's Response: lol. oh, amanda. my dear, sweet histrionic friend... how i adore thee. and would never wish death upon you. especially of the torturous fic deprivation variety! i posted a new chapter a few hours ago. Find the energy, fight the withdrawals and go read until you\'re better!
also, keep the kid. I\'ll settle for cookies instead. :D
YEAH!!! YOU UPDATED THANK GOD!!! NOW DO IT AGAIN!!!
Okay so I went to go leave you a comment about updating again- I know I'm a useless annoyance who offers nothing in the way of encouragement or inspiration, but I'm desperate here.
Anyway I saw the reviews for this chapter and when I clicked on the link to read it I saw that there was absolutely NO Logan/Marie and I was like 0.0 NO!
Then I actually read it and I have to admit, you always seem to surprise me. This was a really good chapter and I gotta say, you had me at every turn with Marie's onslaught of emotions. My little heart was breaking just reading about it- poor girl! OMG!
Now, I'm hoping that all that business with the great Dane puppy is going well and I'm sorry about you deleting those 200 thingy's for work- that's a bitch and a half no lie there, BUT I need for there too be ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!
Lady, I will do anything! I will climb up on a freaking ladder and clean your gutters, I'll go harass your boss, I'll even walk the dog-if need be- BUT PLEASE!! Don't wait another week, I cant hold out that long- please please please update soon.
Can't wait!
Hope life stops kicking your ass soon!
Author's Response: First off--- thanks for updating, now do it again? Ha. You\'re a demanding little thing, aren\'t you? :P Secondly, i shouldn\'t wait to post another week because you can\'t hold out that long? Hmm. Must I remind you of a little story about a traveling Logan and an obnoxious kid named Star and a possibly touchable Marie and... oh, darn. what was the name of that one again? I don\'t know. it\'s. been. so. long.
pot kettle black, by friend. I\'m going to have start a new rule. I\'ll post mine when you post yours. =P
\r\nas for the rest--- i\'m glad you liked this Logan-less chapter. But I wanted to save him for the next one. Marie and Jean had to have a little relationship mending first, you know?
anxiously awaiting chapter 21 Molasses Lady... : (
Author's Response: cute. real cute. =p
A/U Ideas:
TR starts a story and then actually...FINISHES IT
Okay I know you've been ridicuolously busy what with work and the new puppy and dodging the attempts of the assassins I've been sending after you...er...and food shoping- yeah food shopping.
Anyway I won't pester you as much as I usually do....I just wanna ask you something.
ARE YOU TRYING TO FREAKING KILL ME LADY!?
I'm over here doing freakin AFRICAN RAIN DANCES to the tune of "please let TR update PLEASE let TR update" while chanting around a bonfire waiting for the on pour of pure undiluted FAN FICTION and THIS IS WHAT U GIVE ME!?!?!
I NEED TO SEE LOGAN AND MARIE HAVE A SHOW DOWN!!!!!
I mean I kinda feel bad for being pushy- 6 am until 10 am? Do you work in retail or in hell? Is there a difference?
No, no I don't know either, BUT I DO KNOW THAT I'M GOING TO FREAKING EXPLODE!!!
DUDE I cannot wait this long for your next update...I will fall to the ground and explode like KABOOM!!!
Listen, I'm going to go grab my stress therapy doll and squeeze him until I can breath again. I'm even going to update WYCF just to be a good sport, but I want you to know....if you dont update soon...I'm going to have to get you fired so you have more time to write me fanficiton. *I have great confidence in my abilities to extract revenge for some reason....
Author's Response: you\'re going to update WYCF? my, oh my. i thought hell had to freeze over before something like that could happen. =P anyway, uhm. yeah. i\'m too tired right now to respond fully so i\'m just going to say a quick: sorry the chapter was so such but those damn assassins have just been running me ragged.
AHHHH!!!!! YEAAHHH!!!!!!!
I literally just finished writing chapter six of WYCF and I came on here to post it and I saw on that little side tab thingy on the welcome page MOST RECENT STORY: STAMP OF APPROVAL and I literally went ::GASP:: and jumped it like a Logan lookalike on the street.
Anyway it makes me want to cry to see this story come to an end! I can't wait to see you write more AU but remember you can always push out a quick one piece- I had a blast with "Revenge" and I'd love to see you do a L/M with powers just because I've grown so accustomed to your L/M.
Plus you blew me out of the water with this story I never expected a no powers fic to be this juicy and it really was just amazing, your talent and stellar writing abilites shined through on every line of this brilliant story. Besides stories where they have powers come with a lot of baggage- his nightmares her mutation yadda yadda yadd.
Really though-this was an epic story and that epilogue, which I'm waited for with baited breath over here, will be like Christmas! The best Christmas ever where it rains money and Logan and Marie smut lol-can't wait! I hope you go on to write many fabulous more L/M stories because I'm already anxiously awaiting them.
oh and OH OH OH lets please not forget about the possibility of sequels-those things only have massive potential! ; )
haha great story that was a funny last line , what with the "teacher man" bit
I read this story mostly to prove a point to myself and it was right on.
THIS is ridiculous- and I almost never flame stories- but seriously- It's Logan and Marie but just barely, you spend more time describing how Ms. Marvel "eats Marie's pussy while shoving a finger up her ass" then you do about anything Logan and Marie inspired. You don't describe anything concerning the two of them you just merely say "he was there five months and falling in love with her more every day" no other explanation and then you have two huge scenes describing Sarah and Marie and with a two line sentence of "It was a dare. Sarah -dared- him to make a move on Marie to see if she'd respond. Oh and respond she did." you start talking about Logan fucking Marie and Sarah with absolutely NO detailed description of how that event came to be.
Now A) I want you to realize I don't have a problem with gay Marie, it's actually kinda hot in certain aspects- like there's a great story written by November Tuesday which explores Marie with another women and that IS a great story.
B) I just want to say if I had read through this 8,000 word disaster and thought that you had skimped details on Logan and Marie because you lacked the ability to elaborate with verbal detail then I would hack it up to you being a poor writer and wouldn't bother com,plaining because you'd figure it out eventually yourself. However that's not the case, you're actually a semi-good writer and you don't need any help in the descriptive department either, and thats why it pisses me off that you posted this story here, which as I've previously stated scraps by as Logan and Rogue just barely and should really be posted on another website since it spends far more time describing Rogue and Sarah and only a little time describing Logan. Truly the entire thing is Sarah and Rogue and at absolutely no time is it stricly just Logan and Marie, you fast forwarding to a Marie whose pregnant after everyone dies and never mentioning anything about how or what is just another example of you skimping out of the Logan and Marie goods and you should really post this story somewhere that isn't a Logan and Rogue website.
I don't think your a bad writer but I do disagree with this story and I think you should throw in a warning if you intend to keep it up that this isn't going to be a story chuck full of Logan and Marie.
You posted a long time ago didn't you? I remember reading it before....
charle= telepath= that wont work- other than that I love your remix