Great story, only thing is at one part you say Rogue is 23, then at another you say they met over a decade ago. *wink*

First off, chapter 4 reminded me of this:
http://belovedshadow.deviantart.com/art/Wolverine-s-Take-on-School-38250305
=D

Second, I really thought the first two chapters were the whole story. You know, foofy fun wet Logan (yay!) but a plot? What! I'm following this to the end now~

One thing is... I didn't catch the chapter but I think it was chapter 5, the "Rogue's POV" and "Logan's POV" don't seem necessary since it is 3rd person writing. ;)

Can't wait for more =)

Author's Response: Bwahahahah that link is just GENIUS! I loves. *grin* You weren\'t the only one who thought the first two chapters were it...but then it sort of grew...\r\n\r\nHee, yeah probably not necessary...I was just covering all bases...like the obsessive compulsive I am :)\r\n\r\nThanks :)

AH! As I was reading it I was wondering why it felt so similar. =D I definitely read this years ago in the old archive. Nice to read it again!

Ouch.
That's all I can really say.

I kinda like where it left off. Leaves more to the imagination. =D

Author's Response: Thanks. I like it too. Plus I suck at writing smut.

I really like this story. =) Definitely a different take from what I normally read. You're doing great. Keep up the good work. =D
I laughed at the brass knuckles line - because when we were shopping for our rings, that sizing thing confused me, too! hahaha.

I think even ending it here is great. =) Sometimes stories don't need to be long. Short & sweet, right?

I definitely know the eyebrow thing. He does it so damn good!

Author's Response: yup i\'m a fan of short and sweet. but i figured i\'d just keep writing these as long as i have ideas, so we\'ll see how long it\'sll end up being i guess =)\r\n*dreaming of hugh and the eyebrow* *happy sigh*

I'd love to read more. =) I'm willing to beta if you'd like =D
I don't know if you need to mark the lines with a * though. They're a little distracting.

Oooohhhkayyy ... The second half of my message disappeared. I added that You don't need to make it any longer, because it is perfect the way it is. =)

Author's Response: Thank you! For both reviews lol. Yeah see I was debating with myself whether I should make a second part but every time I say it might be good this logical part of brain says \'you idiot it ended perfectly don\'t ruin it by adding more!\' So I\'ve decided leaving it as is and pursuing other plot bunnies. But, they seem to not like me much right now though... *grumbles*

lol. I can imagine the flip flops her stomach would be doing for the rest of the month.

And how the heck did you do the indents?! I've been trying to figure that out...

Author's Response: It depends: I use Microsoft Word to write, so I just hit \"Tab\" like you normally would (you know, like when you use your PC to write something other than WxR love scenes :)). But the key is that when I\'m finished, I save it as a Web Document (it will have .html at the end of the file name) and I upload it to the site as such. If you are copying and pasting your story into the big box they provide there might be some sort of code that would indent, but I don\'t know what that would be.\r\nThanks for the review!

What the heck can I say that everyone else has probably already said?
Hot! You have guts, girl. I could never bring myself to write this stuff.
Don't worry yourself with your word count. A story reads better when you get drawn in - not when it feels like you rushed to tie it up at the end. (Not that yours feels like it did, but sometimes you can tell.)

I wonder though. If Logan let Marie absorb a bit of him here and there, maybe she would age a little slower. ;)

Author's Response: lol thanks and you could tell me that you\'ve kidnapped hugh jackman and are willing to share - no one has yet said that to me ... though i have been sent milk chocolate covered logan via mail ... yum. and maybe not guts as much as what the heck, not like they know how to find me. lol. yeh, it\'s just that after the 1st one the second one seemed really small but there was literally nothing i could think of putting in there, and i was worried that you guys might point that out so thanks for clearing that up.\r\n\r\ni based my marie a lot on movie marie - even when she absorbed pyro she didn\'t really seem to be able to keep his powers for long. when she absorbed logan the second time it was to the point of near death and she does show characteristics of his but that faded before he woke up. she even stays herself and shows no visible signs of logans mutation other then healing the cuts when she touches him the 1st time - no claws, etc. \r\n\r\nso my marie can\'t keep the powers long either. they just drain out of her. sure he heals the small cuts and bruises she has, and some not even the whole way, but she can\'t keep it for long. and something like affecting her age would be too big to do without killing him, since its a constant thing.\r\n\r\nand plus that would be the easy way out wouldn\'t it lol, never been the fan of the easy way - unfortunatly.\r\n\r\nthanks for your great review :)

Nope. Looks good so far. =) Okay, better than good. I'm interested in reading more when you get it posted.

gasp! I've waited so long for this to be continued. I haven't read it yet - but I was so excited I had to tell someone.