Almost lost you in the flood of updates.

Hmn. I'm always speechless at the end. I try to compliment, but nothing comes out!

Yay. I wonder if we'll get to see these two off to Japan in the end. That would be different.

Author's Response: \"I\'m always speechless at the end. I try to compliment, but nothing comes out!\" - I\'m like that most of the time too. I never know what the hell to say! I like the idea of them visiting Japan though. You never know... *g*

Take as long as you need to write the ending. =)
Sad to see this end soon... but it also means I'm going to go back and re-read it start to finish. =D

Author's Response: *lol* the ending\'s written - it\'s just the bits in between I need to sort out! I\'m going to be sad to finish this one too though!

Oh wow! Definitely don't stop. I'm with you till the end on this one. =D
Excellent job so far!

I feel like I'm missing something - is this part of a series?
It's kinda confusing, I think a beta reader might help clean up some of the grammar and awkward sentences.
The general idea behind the story is good, though. =)

Bah, forgot to mention a few things in my above comment.

1) Multiple Man... you've been spelling his name Jaime. I think it is supposed to be Jamie. "Jaime" would be pronounced "Jaym" where Jamie would be "Jaymee"

2) Dead Girl kept bringing up the Rob Zombie song "Living Dead Girl" in my head

3) "I may be dead, but I'm still kicking" Totally sounds like a CLASSIC comic book/super hero line. Nice! It made me smile.

=D

Author's Response: Thanks for your review :) You\'re right though about his name I just realized, I know two people who both spell it differently, so I guess I just glossed over it and went with the way I\'m use to spelling it, as both people I know pronounce it the same anyways. Yeah and Dead Girl is an actual character from the comics, I wasn;t sure if it would be believeable because it\'s such an obvious name lol I also wasn\'t sure about keeping that line in cuz it sounded so corny but then i realized it sounded exactly like a superhero line.

She didn't tell them about the drugs! =O

My actual response to the last paragraph:

"Yaaaayyy- WHAT?"

d'awwwwwwww.
*goofy smile*

This is the end? You have it marked as complete. =(

Author's Response: This particular story is done, but there\'s a lot more to come in the Dark Side of the Moon series! Thanks for reading!

"He had remembered his precious cigars, but not underwear for her? Men."

Definitely something a man would do!
Going to have to fave this one and get back to it later. Much too tired to continue reading tonight. Very interesting, though.

Noes!
;_;

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: :) Sunday at the latest!

Ooo. Batman, interesting.
My husband is into batman, so I know a bit about it. I'm an X girl, myself.

Hopefully you don't let this one die.... I'm good at that!

Author's Response: Thanks for the response. I\'ll try to keep its head above water. ;) I\'ve got the next chapter coming out soon.

So far the story is pretty good. Like another review said, the intro was a bit wordy. You might want to get a beta reader to catch some small grammar mistakes (apostrophes where they don't belong, and such)
Otherwise, I'm interested to see where this ends up. =) I'll review when I'm done the other chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yeah I do need a beta pretty bad but I appreciate the input, hope you liked the other chapters!