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Member Since: 11/15/2008
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Reviews by smilinghoney
Logan. Marie. Jean. Dark Phoenix. Muddled shit I had to get out of my head.

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3352 - Hits: 2590
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/06/2008 - Last Updated: 04/06/2008
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 05/03/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

I usually have Jean issues but you actually made me like her in this one. Even though she was the dark phoenix. Very well written per usual! Enjoy your stories so much!

A take on the Russian Fairy Tale 'Vassily The Brave'

Rated: R
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: Fairy Tale Redux
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3713 - Hits: 3394
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/24/2008 - Last Updated: 04/24/2008
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: We all do what we have to

Jo, I've never heard this tale before but no matter what, I love your version. Excellent work

Marie's father dies in a tragic car accident and find out that in his will that her new legal guardian is Logan, a complete stranger to her. How will these two clash?

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 32
Wordcount: 44672 - Hits: 226551
Complete?: No - Published: 07/13/2008 - Last Updated: 08/13/2008
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 04/28/2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Funeral

I don't know how I missed this story when it was being updated years ago, but I'm so glad I did. Now, though, will our begging get you to update and finish this story? Pretty please? Just when I thought Logan and Marie were going to start their happily ever after, you add more twists to it. But it's oh so good. I'm dying to see how they get Marie back and is this going to be the Marie we know that loves Logan with all her being? So many unanswered questions! Please please come back to this wonderful story soon!

Logan gets caught and we find out something about love.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Completely OOC, Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked, Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3601 - Hits: 7092
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/09/2008 - Last Updated: 10/09/2008
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Seven Days

at some point I was worried it was Marie. but then I still ended up crying. This was so well written. You have such a way with words.

What if it had been Rogue and not Wolverine who took out Phoenix?

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 40
Wordcount: 55447 - Hits: 298168
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/18/2008 - Last Updated: 02/21/2009
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/19/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG, I can't wait to read more. I've been a lurker for a while and this is my first review. I have always enjoyed your stories and hope you continue with this one.

Author's Response: Thank you and it\'s great to know I have a fan!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/20/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this twist. Poor Rogue, I'd be hella mad too :-)

"...It's her eighteenth birthday and she's using her duffel bag as a pillow."
Special days in Rogue's life.

Rated: PG
Categories: AU, X1, X2, X3
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3420 - Hits: 4087
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/22/2009 - Last Updated: 03/22/2009
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 05/05/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it!!! A day which would make anyone else in Rogue's situation sad is a day to embrace and be happy for!

After Rogue's mind is shut down by Xaiver, Logan brings her to the only person he thinks can help her. Wolverine's willing to pay any price to wake her up. But in her mind, Rogue is building a new life for herself, and when Logan sees it, he begins to question his past and his future with Marie.

Rated: Mature
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 34656 - Hits: 29287
Complete?: No - Published: 04/06/2009 - Last Updated: 05/28/2009
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 04/21/2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Please tell me you intend to come back to this. You've started a great story that has great potential. Please don't stop here. Would love to see so much more!!!

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 06/02/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I miss this story so much! Just think of this as my annual nudge.

A different perspective on the relationship between Logan and Marie.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU, X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 6854 - Hits: 34441
Complete?: No - Published: 08/13/2009 - Last Updated: 08/15/2009
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/09/2009 Title: Chapter 1: An Introduction to Jane Bayfield

I am really into this story so far. Like the others, I wish the chapters were longer just because I don't have the patience to wait for the next one, LOL. Please keep up the awesome writing!!

Marie finds something out that makes her run, Logan bumps into her and we find out that not everything is good in the woodshed back home.

Rated: G
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 14156 - Hits: 30856
Complete?: No - Published: 11/26/2009 - Last Updated: 12/02/2009
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG, this was... well, I'm still having a hard time articulating my words ;-)

I know this hasn't been updated in a while but please please come back and finish this! I want to see Xavier and Jean get what's coming to them for what they did to Logan and Marie.

In one moment, one split decision changes the lives of two people and Hell is what it leaves in it's wake!

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 68292 - Hits: 84100
Complete?: No - Published: 12/11/2009 - Last Updated: 11/27/2011
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 04/03/2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Vote

Oh please please please don't forget about this story! I just found it and am crying my eyes out right now...and I'm already late for work LOL. Your writing is really pulling us to feel so much for our favorite characters and even Magneto. I can't wait to read more... srsly, I can't wait!!

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/23/2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Vote

This is my yearly plea. I miss your story so much! Please don't abandon this heart wrenching, beautiful piece of work. What can I do to feed your muse?

Rogue gets the cure, Bobby breaks her heart, so she turns to alcohol to solve her problems. The outcome to that is where a very angry Wolverine realizes he doesn't like other people touching his possessions.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 28963 - Hits: 127471
Complete?: No - Published: 12/15/2009 - Last Updated: 12/27/2010
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 05/04/2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I love Victor / Marie in this. I just watched Origins so that's prolly way. I'm imaging Liev as a Victor who can love Marie and not claw her to death.

Please continue this story. I know you said that some people hated the Victor/Marie pairing but it adds an interesting twist to this story. There's other stories on this site that has Jean / Logan ending up together and Rogue being strong to continue on her own. You can still have an awesome story despite our fav couple not ending up together. Come back please!!!!

Logan is being held in a mutant laboratory, until the team arrives. We are introduced through the eyes of Nurse Sutter.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Drabble, Drama, General, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1627 - Hits: 3168
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/04/2010 - Last Updated: 01/04/2010
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 05/05/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"I am...gimme one second. Go on, got something to take care of." Love Logan when he's focused on fulfilling a promise ;-)

Another awesome story. Hope to see more from you in the future. Please!!!

"It wasn't about doing the right thing. He just couldn't bring himself to do anything else, with her." Logan stumbles upon Marie in a mutant experimentation lab.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 23377 - Hits: 73812
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/31/2010 - Last Updated: 04/24/2010
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 05/05/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just read this in one go and don't know how everyone else did it having to wait for updates. This is one of the best lab captured Marie stories EVER!!! And your Logan... I swoon just imagining how gentle, kind, and loving he is with Marie through all this. Most stories have him not being able to completely bottle his feral side but you had him perfect here. I'm so glad that I found this and now I'm looking for more stories in your profile.

Excellent, excellent work!!!! And I hope a mod can get those random spam messages off this site. It ruins the awesome feedback and praise ya'll deserve as writers!

It ain't easy to trick a telepath--unless you've got another one telling you how.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, Drama, PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 18040 - Hits: 29468
Complete?: No - Published: 04/06/2010 - Last Updated: 01/16/2014
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 04/12/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm reviewing this story on 2 sites in hopes that I can help jump start your muse again. Please come back to this story. It's so unfair leaving Rogue with these nightmares ;-)

I'm ready to see Jean get her punishment and see how Logan will coax Rogue to love him again. Is there anything we can do to help?

Author's Response: I have seen your reviews on both sites and I assure you that I know how unfairly Rogue is being treated, by me and Jean. The truth is I wrote myself into a corner, sort of, and I\'ve been too wrapped up in my real life to put in the necessary time to write my way back out of it. I deeply appreciate your offer to help. I\'m terrible at asking for help, but for Rogue and Logan\'s sakes, I am swallowing my pride and saying, \'HELP!\' Any ideas you have for where to go from here would be welcome. You can email me through the \'contact\' link on my author page. I look forward to hearing from you and with any luck we can get this puppy wrapped up sooner rather than later. Thanks again for still caring and for taking the time to let me know that you do. -- Wendie

"Suffering is permanent, obscure, and dark
And has the nature of infinity."
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William Wordsworth

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 30958 - Hits: 77099
Complete?: No - Published: 04/20/2010 - Last Updated: 05/21/2013
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 05/03/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Here I lay

Free, I'm sorry to hear about you experiencing first hand what happened in Japan but am so glad to hear that you're safe now.

Although an update would be awesome, I understand that you have a lot going on and will patiently await your return. Please take care of yourself first.

Wishing you the best of luck

Logan, Rogue and Storm learn about infidelity and its consequences... Very dark...

Rated: G
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1974 - Hits: 2550
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/16/2010 - Last Updated: 05/16/2010
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 04/24/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I had the song playing in the background as I read this and it was so much more haunting with it. Great job. I hate it when Marie and Logan don't end up together but I loved the way your story turned out. Awesome!

Rogue must overcome her addiction. Hopefully Logan can help.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Dances
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 5110 - Hits: 5947
Complete?: No - Published: 05/27/2010 - Last Updated: 05/04/2013
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 05/10/2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Shaky Ground

So glad you're back and with a continuation of this. Can't wait to see in what direction you take this.

Logan breaks Rogue's heart, and she does her best to move on. Sometimes your best is more than good enough. And sometimes it isn't.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 30
Wordcount: 51376 - Hits: 233765
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/09/2010 - Last Updated: 05/12/2014
Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 04/29/2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thank you, Ally, for another quick update. You made my weekend!!! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Author's Response: I\'m doing my best. Good to know it\'s appreciated. :-)

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 04/27/2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Ally,

So glad to see you're back and haven't abandoned this story.

1st) CONGRATS on the new baby!!!!! (I know it's a year late LOL). I have 2 close friends who are now 2-4 weeks from their due dates and totally understand what you went thru.

2nd) Yea for not abandoning this awesome and well-written story. It's one of the WIP that I've been dying to see finished.

So glad that you like us enough to not leave us hanging! Good luck and can't wait to see more

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 03/25/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've re-read this story yet again and realized I don't think I ever reviewed... so since I did that doesn't it warrant another chapter? ;-)

Your wonderful writing has made me feel as if these are friends of mine that I miss so much!

I hope you're still writing and haven't abandoned this story. It must suck for Rogue to be pregnant for so long ;-) LOL

Author's Response:

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/09/2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I'll forgive you if you post again soon . Awesome post. I'm upset for both Rogue and Logan but especially Logan. I think we've punished him enough. Not to the point Rogue should be with him yet, but enough for her to be friends with him. Can't wait till you post again!!!

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed
Date: 05/07/2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Love it since it tides us over until you can get the rescue chapter out :-D

How did Logan not know this woman was all sorts of shades of crazy? What good are feral senses when they can't help you avoid women who are bat $h*t crazy? LOLOLOL