I'm a big fan of baffled Logan.......and how he's putty in Marie's hands.

Author's Response: he really is putty in her hands. logan in looove, it doesn\'t get better than that hehe <3

Right out of the box, I find myself intrigued........nice!

Author's Response: Wow! You read super fast! I just uploaded Chapters 1 and 2. I hope you like them as well. Thank you for reviewing, you\'re totally awesome and I hope you like the story!

I'm not exactly sure what I was expecting but this is surpassing it. It's well written and believable. Almost feels like I'm watching a movie.

Author's Response: That\'s really nice to hear. Sometimes, introspective writing can get a little bogged down in itself.

If you could see me, you'd know I was giving you a standing ovation.

Loved the pacing, loved the non-theatrics o the developing relationship between Rogue and Logan, the character development and insights of mutants I love like Kurt.

Very clever use of the song titles, btw.

Author's Response: If you could see me, you\'d know I was grinning happily. Like this -> :D only bigger.\r\n\r\nKurt is my favorite X2 character. X3 totally pulled a Pirates 2, except instead of not letting two black women star in a film (what the hell happened to Annamarie??), they must\'ve thought three blue people in one movie was just too subversive. ;)

Okay, THIS.....

"Listen, sparkplug, I’m here for the ass whoopin’"

....is about the most hilarious thing I have ever read. Genius!

Amelia is fiendish.......love sassy old ladies!

Author's Response: me too! there will definitely be more of her to come. :)

I nearly wet myself sniggering whilst poor Logan was under attack in the dark! Super humor, thanks for making my night!

Author's Response: so glad you liked it! =)

Just......perfect!

Please, do not start writing OMG angsty stuff because your gift for humor is unparalleled! I frequently burst out laughing when reading your stuff, in large part because of the wittiness of the dialogue you come up with. Nobody does it better!

Author's Response: me and angst? We met once. it didn\'t work out. *grins* thank you very much for the great feedback. i\'m happy that i\'ve been able to make you laugh-- that is the ultimate compliment! I\'ve got more of this one ready to be posted soon. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Fantastic, fantastic, I absolutely loved it.

I liked this a lot but one thing bothered me, relative to pace. If you've suffered a miscarriage, the very last thing you'll be doing later than evening is having sex. Emotions notwithstanding, you physically hurt.

Author's Response: I understand where you\'re coming from. While I was writing it, I was actually more concerned about whether Rogue would be ready to have sex from a purely emotional stand point. \r\n\r\nI didn\'t exactly sit down and do the math (ugh math) to figure out exactly how far along she was, but she was not more than a month. I was basing her miscarriage then off of a friend of mine\'s, who actually didn\'t know she was pregnant until she miscarried while having sex. She told me later that she did experience some cramping afterwards, but it was no worse than what she had during her period. I guess it was because she wasn\'t very far along, either. I don\'t know, I\'m not a obgyn. Thanks for letting me know!

I am loving the camaraderie and real family feeling you have been able to impart to the characters in this AU. The whole thing feels very natural, so kudos to you for that!

Also, unless you live waaaaay, waaaay south, 60 degrees in November isn't cold, especially not in northern climes herein the US. I live in the snowbelt of western NY and lemme tell ya, 60 in late November would be a dream! We tend to be 40 s or low 50s and damp, with temps in the 30s at night.

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to work as many of the X-Men in as I could without ruining the family dynamic or making it too unrealistic. Writing this has been a lot of fun so far. And if you can\'t tell, family is very important to me. I have some cousins who I\'m close to so writing this has been pretty easy.\r\n\r\nYes, I realize 60 degrees isn\'t cold, I was trying to impart that they were having some unnaturally warm weather for November. I live in Nebraska and if it was 60 degrees here in November, I\'d be thrilled. Once in a while we get lucky and have a mild Thanksgiving but sometimes we don\'t and we have snow instead. I\'m fairly certain they usually have snow in Wyoming by that time of year.

That is adorable! I really like the way we know he WANTS to be a bad ass but he's wrapped around her little gloved finger.