A brilliant twist on the old DoFP story. Grittier, more emotionally realistic, and absolutely fascinating. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

I like it. It's fun, sexy, and has the beginnings of an interesting plot to boot. The constant Britishisms are a bit irritating, and occasionally outright confusing (knitting a jumper, sleeping in a vest, etc.), but that seems to be par for the course in this fandom so no biggie. I love Freddie the imaginary wolf, and am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m so glad you liked, especially Freddie :) Yes, I\'ve had quite a few comments about the Britishisms, and have now found a beta for Chapter 15 onwards, so once I get up to date with all my updates, hopefully that will be resolved :) Thank you for taking the time to review!

This really needs a warning for non-con.

Normally I'm all about angst, but dammit, this is too adorable for me not to love. It's like blueberry waffles and hot cocoa and fuzzy little kittens all rolled into one. :D

Not gonna lie, I'm pretty skeeved out by this chapter, as Rogue is clearly far too drunk to legally consent to anything. The fact that Logan is totally sober thanks to his mutation makes it doubly skeevy. I'm finding it kinda hard to like him right now. :(

Author's Response: Honestly, I wasn\'t too happy with Logan\'s behavior either but he didn\'t take it any further, and let\'s face it, he\'s male with animal instincts, he can\'t be perfect all the time. And Marie is obviously becoming very hard for him to resist! Hopefully he\'ll become much more likeable in the next chapters. Thanks for reviewing!

Very hot. Has some spelling and grammar errors that need tending, and you should add the archive's Rape/Non-Con warning to the story for the obvious reasons, but otherwise highly enjoyable. And, because it bears repeating, HOT!

Author's Response: I will go back and fix the spelling and grammar, thanks for the heads up about those. I think I need to maybe tone down bits of chapter 2 if you really see it has rape/non con. The morning after wasn\'t really any different than the night before in \"Anything\" or the first chapter of this. I would love to understand which bits pushed you to see this chapter as non con. I had no intention of trying to make this chapter be non con. Specific things that squeaked you would be helpful.

Ah, the ubiquitous OOC Bitch!Jean. I'd forgotten that this was going to be that sort of story. As I've never understood W/R fandom's vitriolic hatred for Jean, nor the bizarre love of seeing her written OOC, I'm afraid this is where we part ways. Still, the first two chapters were hot, and I'm glad I got to read them.

Good luck with the rest of the story!

Author's Response: I am sorry to hear we will be parting ways. There will be fewer mentions of Jean until we get to the mansion at least and that won\'t be for a while yet. (And in my own defense, the ubiquitous bitch!Jean is Logan\'s impression right now, but that doesn\'t mean that is all that there is). \r\n\r\nTruely though, I will feely admit I have hated Jean long before I ever became a W/R girl. Jean always struck me as spoiled little Bezzatch who never appreciated what she had and whine way too much about what she did have so needless to say I loved the idea I could openly hate Jean in the W/R world (and I learned to write it from Terri). But to each his own and I appreciate your feedback all the same. Thank you for the well wishes.

Beautiful and heartbreaking and oddly hopeful. I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you for this very kind comment; for the love.

They finally found it! Yay!

Brilliant, as always. :D

Author's Response: Hope it stays that way! I\'m almost done with the next chapter. I probably would have finished it tonight, but I got hooked reading all the excellent new Rogan I\'ve missed. So much great stuff out there! We are such a lucky fandom.

Chiling!

Author's Response: glad you liked it. H