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Real name: megan
Member Since: 09/01/2008
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Reviews by velvetemr73
Dark Rogan. Rogue's possesive side takes over and she begins to unravel.

Rated: R
Categories: AU, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5017 - Hits: 3082
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/27/2011 - Last Updated: 04/27/2011
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 04/27/2011 Title: Chapter 1: "Try and touch me so I can scream at you not to touch me..."

ha that was good. evil jean. So Logan was innocent the whole time? Jean was manipulating him? Crazy Rogue. That was a good twist though with the baby.

Post X3. Professor Xavier returns to the mansion. Tries to help, and be helped by, two people. About bodies, and how to live in them.

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: None
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 7085 - Hits: 5756
Complete?: No - Published: 05/07/2011 - Last Updated: 06/18/2011
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 08/05/2011 Title: Chapter 2: TWO

woah deep and slightly dark. I can't wait for more. Wolverine seems more like the comic version of the character. It's good

He wanted her to be untouchable.

Rated: Adult
Categories: X1, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4811 - Hits: 6220
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/18/2011 - Last Updated: 05/18/2011
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 05/18/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow. i liked how u incorporated x-men origins into this. it makes sense though, wolverine not wanting to get hurt again. the smut was fantastic! very vivid. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks :) I do like to write smut *grin*

Rogue is keeping a complicated secret that could change everything.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 10155 - Hits: 50650
Complete?: No - Published: 06/07/2011 - Last Updated: 04/18/2014
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/07/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

yes please continue. I want to know whose the father! oh jeez u cant leave me hanging like that. love

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/08/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Instant Cravings

Well done. You're writing is really fantastic and the characters seem real. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/12/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Mood Swings

whoa might not be logans?!?! the plot thickens

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/17/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Prenatal Exercise

omg more! that was great

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/20/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Chorionic Villus Sampling

ooooo catfight! logan is sweet and remy is an ass.

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 07/07/2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Impulses

awwww! yah for an update. i had to reread a bit to refresh my memory and it was worth it. can't wait for more!

Just another mindless take on our favorite couple. Warning: contains no real plot and lots of Marie-centered rambling!

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 8384 - Hits: 3994
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/08/2011 - Last Updated: 06/08/2011
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/08/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ha! last part made my day.
"That's when the realization hit me.

Logan and I had sex. We had sex.

SEX! His penis was just inside me.

And I love Logan.

We had sex."
have you ever heard the lonely island 'i just had sex.' well those lines reminded me of that song.
loved the story! great job

Author's Response: I have heard that song but I wasn\'t thinking about it when I wrote this. And when you mentioned it, I was like \"oh shit, why didn\'t I think of that?\" And then I came up with an idea based on that song...mind if I go through with it? (Especially since you pointing it out inspired me)\r\n\r\n-Pepper ;)

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/20/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ya sure lol

My first challenge fic. The challenge was for a oneshot, where 1. Logan loses a bet to Marie, 2. Rated M, 3. Involves a chainsaw. Yup, you heard me, a chainsaw. Don't worry, nothing too kinky. ;-) Rated M for dirty thoughts, but otherwise it's my usual -- angst, a dab of smut, and a happy ending. Enjoy!

Rated: Mature
Categories: X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Friendship, PWP, Shipper, UST
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3816 - Hits: 4841
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/12/2011 - Last Updated: 06/12/2011
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/12/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Bet

oh and what a deal! very nice

Author's Response: Yeah, innocent little Marie really snuck one by Logan, didn\'t she? ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Just who came back from Canada...?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 4279 - Hits: 16926
Complete?: No - Published: 06/13/2011 - Last Updated: 07/13/2011
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/17/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow. is logan totally gone? can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Wait and see... :)

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 07/13/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow o wow o jeez o man. I'm coming up for air now. That was delicious and yet I feel sorry for Logan not being in control. He is such a sweetheart. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, velvetemr :) There is a reason he\'s not there. Honest.

AU...What if it was Logan who had Marie's powers and vice-versa?

"I believe existence was made to enable human beings to cross and explore their own borders; all their borders." M. CAROLE

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Completely OOC, Cutting

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 9374 - Hits: 12969
Complete?: No - Published: 06/19/2011 - Last Updated: 07/18/2011
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/21/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Setting a conducive atmosphere

awww sweet logan. too bad he's untouchable.

Logan comes back after a few years ready to accept his claim to Marie only to have a tendency of walking in on the wrong end of things. Misunderstandings arise that cause him to question whether he and Marie belong together.

Rated: R
Categories: X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 14136 - Hits: 29379
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/19/2011 - Last Updated: 08/08/2011
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/20/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Give me head

omg i was convinced they were being naughty and ewwwww. silly logan for not stomping in there and doing something. cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Charles and Rogue is kinda eek! This Logan is trying to take a more calm and collected approach, even if he still assumes the worst. ;)

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 06/23/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Work your magic fingers

yah more confusion for logan! haha

Author's Response: just tell him to hang in there for a few more chapters...

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 07/07/2011 Title: Chapter 4: That was one hell of a mind-gasm

ha, evil x-men. they must be bored. i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Evil indeed. Being cooped up in a mansion full of mischievous kids makes them wanna have fun too.

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 08/10/2011 Title: Chapter 6: This is how you do it....

ha! that was great! I don't think I've ever read a story with a drunk chuck in it. That was interesting. :)

Before she could reach that fight bar in Canada, Rogue was taken in and raised by Mystique. Years later, she and Wolverine meet for the first time as fellow X-Men. Fate draws them together after a very unusual attack leaves Wolverine in a unique position to help. AU with movie/comicverse elements.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Animal Death, Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 68600 - Hits: 159827
Complete?: No - Published: 07/01/2011 - Last Updated: 10/23/2011
Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 09/20/2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

true about the cartoon. it was an amazing chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the read and review :). I\'m glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 07/01/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooohh cant wait for more. I like the comic version of rogue you're using.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I like comic Rogue too. Well, and movie Rogue. She\'s pretty much an awesome character no matter what, heh ;P.

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 07/01/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooohh cant wait for more. I like the comic version of rogue you're using.

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 07/03/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yippee! that was brutal.

Author's Response: Absolutely. I was going to skim over the details, but then thought \'Screw it. If I\'m gonna attack this poor girl with a pack of wolves, by golly I\'m gonna do it right.\' Ya know?

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

haha wow i love it. last bit= priceless.

Author's Response: Hehe... I liked that bit too :P. Glad to know someone else appreciates Logan\'s utter cockiness. (That wasn\'t supposed to sound dirty. Really.)

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed
Date: 07/06/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

dun dun dunnnnn!!!! hooray for quick updates! marie made it, im so happy.

Author's Response: Lol yeah. I know it\'s kinda cheesy, but I just had to cut it off there and get that \'dun dun dunnnnn\' moment. I read too many Tom Clancy novels ;P.