Really great story, lots of interesting stuff happening! You've gone from a wonderfully light-hearted playful start to all this plot and new characters, it's great! Love it :)

Great writing style too.

I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad you liked, and especially glad you think the plot thing is working so far. I don\'t normally do plot...so I was a bit worried!\r\n\r\nNext part will be up later today :)

that was hot!
the urgency was palpable, and somehow seemed more realistic than dragged out fluff.

seems like nobody reviewed this particular chapter so thought I would..
i liked it, it came across as genuine and realistic; that she'd agreed to the marriage without thinking through the consequences for him and now she's realised what his future might hold she feels guilty but wants it anyway.

Good chapter, if short.
I liked how you made Rogue own up to not being as naive as she's pretending, and how Logan didn't cheat on her through circumstances beyond his control, as opposed to because he wouldn't have. Nice one.
Also loved her little chat with Jubilee, and her obvious suggestion.. “Close your eyes and pretend he’s somebody else,”

The Cosmo suggestion was also very ingenious, would love to read the result of her quizzes and what other articles she reads.. that would be fun!

Brilliant!
This 'short' chapter went from light hearted to hot in a matter of seconds.
Very cool ;)

Aw, that was such a nice chapter, very sweet!

I like how you've taken the time to take them ring shopping and have them talk about what the marriage means to them.

Your story is developing really well :)

Fun out-take, can't believe how long this ring buying is taking though, at this pace we may never get to the actual wedding and aftermath! ha ha

This was good fun if a little lengthy on the descriptions for my taste. Worked well for me on the flashbacks and scene setting but a bit too much detail later on every single candle she put out and piece of garment she laundered.
Having said that, it does show off your writing / descriptive abilities amazingly. Can't help being impressed at the level of detail and the amount of time you devote to it without getting carried away by the plot. I can see you becoming a paid writer one day!

I really liked the park swing scene, both the dialogue and the little things like her shuffling back away from him and then him stepping back to let her relax. Little tensions like that are just priceless.

I do hope you're going to do a follow up to this.. it's no fun her having gone to all that trouble if we don't see Wolvie's reaction and what he does about it! As with Rogue at the end.. "she couldn't wait to see what happened next."

Author's Response: Wow August Thank you, that was the sweetest review you\'ve ever left me. Very endearing and I greatly appreciate the praise, that part about me being a paid writer didn\'t hurt either ; )\r\n\r\nI\'m working on trying to come up with ideas worthy of Logan when it comes to extracting revenge. I really appreciate your positive feedback though I am planing on writing a companion piece I just don\'t know when the inspiration\'s going to strike

Wow, that was great and inspired!
Dangerous Liaisons is one of my favourite stories and you did a really fab job with this, assigning each character perfectly and keeping their email tone of voice believable.
I particularly loved Jean's scathy emails, even though in fiction she's not really evil, but we all love a bit of Jean bashing ;)

I loved Logan's line:
"Jesus, Jean, it's just email--you don't have to sound like you're testifying before Congress or nothing."

and Jean's lines to Wolverine:

"My God, I had to check the from line twice to make sure it was still you. "

and

"You actually thought I would take you? You believe I would allow you to treat me as second best?
Don't bother me again.
J "

The ending was even sadder than the original, what with Logan surviving but not seeking out Rogue and getting back together. The choice is sadder than the death in the original!

Aw, that is so sad, but feels so true to form.. Logan plunging ahead with the physical and poor Marie absorbing his thoughts and realising that he's just trying to numb the pain. The fact that she was about to say what Jean had said to him before was just tear-jerking.

The end left plenty of room for a follow-up... ;)

I liked the start, the way it was ambiguous for a while so we could think it was Logan.

and lots of good lines, e.g.
Logan's dig "Breakin' up the morning after don't count as not cheatin', sweetheart."
and later his reply to her saying that his excuse is wearing thin; "You gonna walk away when I'm tryin'?"

Nice ending, with her shaking him up by making him realise that he's wasting precious time given their lives are way shorter than his.

Aw, that was so sweet! Particularly since Logan is jumping in head first given that he's not known Marie without her control and it's not going to be all touchy kissy as it was on the weekend ;)

Loved the twist ending with Xavier playing matchmaker, lol.

Ooh, what a start... intriguing cliff hanger! Perhaps a bit long on the Logan introspection but my interest is definitely peaked!

Some great lines:
"The Wolverine, the mutant with a healing factor was addicted to fine brewed coffee, and it was the good stuff, only the best at Xavier’s. He was getting soft."
"He was so fucking domesticated; he was surprised he hadn’t donned one of Scott’s old robes."