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I'm a long standing Logan / Wolverine fan,
not limited to 'Rogan' because I was into the comics way before the movie
and as you know the big screen Marie/Rogue character is nothing like that of the comicverse.
Still, I can't complain about how they portrayed her because the resulting Logan/Marie tension ended up being so hot! ;)
 
Reviews by August Dawn
Sometimes we get the balance wrong. Life is not about knowing the answers, life is what happens while you're looking for them. And the bad decisions? The screw-ups? They're what keep it interesting.


Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 91223 - Hits: 318379
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/31/2008 - Last Updated: 10/11/2009
Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 07/10/2009 Title: Chapter 29: Same dance, different song

Awesome chapter!

Can't believe how she wouldn't just tell him why she was leaving, but then again we wouldn't get the angry Logan hot sex if she had! ;-)

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 07/10/2009 Title: Chapter 30: No promises

Nice ending :)

and Scott's interruption was priceless humour!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah - it needed a bit of Scott to lighten the tone a bit *g*. Glad you liked!

There’s an angel with him.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Friendship
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 6540 - Hits: 46757
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/27/2008 - Last Updated: 10/27/2008
Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star
Date: 02/04/2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

this story really grabbed me so I thought I should leave a line..
I read where you said that this is an old fic, one of your early ones, but it's really good!

I was confused in the 1st chapter, for some reason i thought they were prisoners, I guess because they were so sad and lonely, then the next few chapters clarified how they were in the school but felt alone and marginalised.
It was so sad to think of them as being at Xavier's but being so unhappy, it was really gave us a different look at that school.

Logan and Marie's interactions are just so sweet, I loved every one of them, and I actually liked the open ending!

What if it had been Rogue and not Wolverine who took out Phoenix?

Rated: Adult
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 40
Wordcount: 55447 - Hits: 298683
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/18/2008 - Last Updated: 02/21/2009
Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting twist this, of Rogue killing Jean to save Logan having to do it. I wonder if he'll see it that way though. Can't help thinking she's killing Jean to get rid of the competition ;) ha ha

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star half star
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

how sad.. waking up alone. can't believe Logan would have let anyone talk him out of being there for her!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wow, Rogue really comes across as needy here.. demanding why there was nobody at her bedside! She really is needy though ;)

Looks like Scott wouldn't be there either if it wasn't for the piece of Jean in her head that attracts him!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nice touch having Emma in this in Xavier's place!
Was surprised that Emma could read her mind on other matters but not on 'who she did it for' though.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Difficult scene, very harsh on poor Logan! :(
Couldn't understand at first why Rogue was so angry at Logan after Scott had explained why everyone had been kept away, and when she asks Logan he explains too, then he gets blamed for everything when Rogue was the one who made the choice to take out Jean instead of him! Understandable though given what she's now going through because of her sacrifice. Love how she loses it at the end... poor Wolvie.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Good chapter!
It would make a lot of sense if Rogue 'lost' the control to her power because her body didn't want anyone touching her again after her childhood experiences.
Can't understand why, if her adoptive mother was also a mutant, Marie would have to leave home when her own powers surfaced?

I think Logan recovered rather too quickly from his ordeal given, for example, how long it takes him in the movies to recover from a knock on the head by Sabretooth or Jean's attacks, but the last scene was very sweet.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Mmm, I'm not really on board with how Rogue is getting to permanently keep the powers of everyone she touches. It's supposed to be a temporary thing unless she kills them in which case they stay with her permanently.
This way it's too easy.. she could just touch everyone for a short while and become the most powerful mutant ever!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

good chapter.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awwww. very sweet.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

very sweet, liked it :)
would love to see/hear what others reactions are to seeing Logan kiss her in the middle of the dance!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star half star
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

ha ha ha, lovely scene, love the innocent interruption by a drunken Pitor!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 02/07/2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

good job on these last 2 chapters, tough ones to write!
i was surprised that Rogue's parents were rather easy on Logan given he's so visibly older, but then again they haven't seen her in 3years so they may well just be happy to see she's alive and protected.

good dialogue re Rogue's parents.. I wonder if she'll go looking for her mum and whether she'll make the connection that if Leah is a mutant it's likely that her own mother is too!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 02/10/2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I was surprised that you went with Rogue's mum being an OC, guess I thought you'd go with the comic version of it being Mystique..

Author's Response: I\'m actually using a little from both the movies and the comics. Kind of mixing it up a little. Like the background comes from the movies, but the fact that she can use powers she\'s obsorbed is from later issues of Ultiamte X-Men. I AM going to use her, though.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 02/17/2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Ooh, exciting stuff..
teatime with the family over ;)
maybe now Wolvie gets to skewer something with his shiny new bone claws!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star
Date: 02/17/2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

oh dear.
that was short lived!

Rogue killing Mystique and Magneto so easily wasn't quite what I was expecting. It belittles them.

I can't help feeling that you got tired of writing this story..?

Author's Response: I know. I wanted to make it longer, but I just wasn\'t to sure what to do with it. Hopefully, the next chapter will be better.

Welcome to the sunny state of Denial.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1550 - Hits: 3404
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/29/2008 - Last Updated: 12/29/2008
Reviewer: August Dawn Signed
Date: 02/05/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, this is So sad! but it's very good.

Logan is dealing with Jean's death and Marie is the one person he calls.

Finished!

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Foof, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 26302 - Hits: 93720
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/24/2009 - Last Updated: 05/17/2010
Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star half star
Date: 02/03/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Last Call

Wow, impressively angsty!

and I loved this sweet description:
"He set my blood on fire and did his best to quench the flames."

Author's Response: *grins* It was meant to be an angsty One Shot, to make people cry. But they demanded more, and I had an idea swiming around in my head, and Lord knows I can\'t make people suffer willingly. *grins* I\'m really glad you like it!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star
Date: 02/03/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Space Hurts

Mmm, not as gripping as the first chapter as the descriptive running away is very lengthy, but am interested to see what happens when he catches up to her and whether she's going to turn out pregnant and get her powers back..

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star half star
Date: 02/03/2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Saddest Revelation

I find it really hard to swallow that she would not have looked through his jacket pockets at all for the whole month that she'd been on the run and sleeping with his jacket, and that she only now heard the rustling of the paper. Sorry!
I also struggle with coincidences such as the perfect timing of his arrival to save her from the clerk.
I'm not sure whether this is coming to a close now or whether it's going to get better..

Author's Response: I had my husbands coast for the enitre year of 2005 while he was deployed in Iraq, and didn\'t lokoin them until two weeks before he came home. She\'s not been paying attnetion to much. Logan was very far away from her when he got the text. And he did as she told him, went to the desk before he went to her room.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star
Date: 02/03/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Piles of Worries

ooh, getting exciting again!
liked the scene where she tried to cover herself up and flinched from his touch and he said “You don’t do that, not with me,”
and great twist with her now being on a mutant register book due to having gone and taken the cure.
still think she's pregnant, but now doubt her power will return, since it makes their lives rather difficult, but rather think that she's getting the enhanced Wolvie powers thanks to the baby she's carrying.

Author's Response: Everyone thinks I can\'t add more angst... Hmmmm. LOL I\'m glad you\'re liking the new turn of events, but not everything\'s candy and sweets all the time! Thaks for reviewing so much, I really appreciate it!

Adjusting to life at the Mansion, Rogue struggles with her mutation and the fallout from Southaven, while Logan has to come to terms with her lies and his responsibilities.

Follow-up to "Any Color You Like" and part three of the Dark Side of the Moon series. Same premise, different consequences owing to a treatment facility for mutants called Southaven and a focus on the chemistry between Logan and Rogue.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Dark Side of the Moon
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 30122 - Hits: 38401
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/25/2009 - Last Updated: 02/26/2009
Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star
Date: 02/03/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Look around / And choose your own ground

Really liking this story.. your characterisation and descriptions are very good!

Great opening chapter, i like how Logan takes it personal when Marie flinches from him and tries to push her boundaris later by asking for a kiss, then feels like a right old letch when he finds out her real age. Ha ha.
Then in the 3rd chapter he moves on to smacking on Jean 'cause at least she's old enough. Brilliant!

The only thing I didn't like so much was the amount of extracts from the movie in the 3rd chapter, seemed a bit much, but I guess you want to weave your own story into it.

Looking forward to reading more..

Author's Response: The weaving is something I was hesitating over. On one hand, I want to keep that AU feel. On the other...there are just parts of the movie I\'ve always wanted to turn Rogan. So by placing them in the context of this story, I can totally do that. *g* I can understand how it feels repetitive, though. But glad you don\'t mind the Logan/Jean so much. She is a necessary evil -- er, I mean distraction. Hee.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/03/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Leave / But don't leave me

Brilliant chapter!
Placed comments in my other review.

Author's Response: Thanks!