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Real name: Bonnie
Member Since: 10/02/2007
Membership Status: Member

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Total AU set in Wyoming. The Mutant Tolerance Act has been passed and mutants are trying to live normal lives. Marie (Rogue) is Scott Summers cousin and is enjoying her normal life. Then she gets involved with her cousin's business partner, Logan. Jubilee, Kitty, Angel, and others will make appearances.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Holiday, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 46451 - Hits: 80547
Complete?: No - Published: 08/12/2009 - Last Updated: 10/20/2009
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 08/17/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay I am guessing you live somewhere that doesn't use Fahrenheit. 60 degrees in the US is cold. (the quick way my French teacher always told us to calculate centigrade is to take the Fahrenheit double it and add 30 - it works you are only off by a couple of degrees. Going the other way is less accurate but I am beating you wanted it to be about 110 - which is about right for a Western Indian summer).

I am really liking this by the way.

Author's Response: I\'m really glad you\'re liking it. But I\'ve got to tell you, I live in Nebraska (and Wyoming is typically colder than Nebraska because it\'s in a higher elevation) and 60 degrees Fahrenheit would really be very warm for November. I believe they start getting their heavy snows in November most years which would mean temps are more generally in the 30\'s or lower 40\'s. We\'re usually in the upper 40\'s to lower 50\'s for highs here in Nebraska then with nights dipping down into the 20\'s and 30\'s (all Fahrenheit readings). Thanks so much for reading and I\'ll be posting more soon!

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 09/16/2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great update, I had missed this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I know it was a little slow in coming but I really hope to have the next one up sooner. I\'m working on it as we speak!

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 09/22/2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

come on Marie, just give in!!! Besides you are going to be snowed in anyway, what else is there to do????

Author's Response: Do you think Marie will make things that easy for Logan? I\'m kind of hoping she does!! Thanks for reviewing!

Events taking place after Golgotha. A return and a plot so crazy, it threatens to change the Xmen forever!

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 24495 - Hits: 73510
Complete?: No - Published: 09/27/2009 - Last Updated: 06/19/2015
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 09/28/2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I read parts of this last night you were putting them up as fast as I was reading them. I like it so far. Comic-verse is so different then movie-verse. It is nice to have a fic do comic-verse justice. You have a few spelling and grammer bits you will want to go back and fix but other then that it's great and I hope to see more.

Author's Response: Thank-you so much. I appreciate your comment, it means alot to me :) I\'m glad that you are liking my \'comic-verse\' story!!

Something happend at the Xavier School, and only Rogue and Jubilee are aware of it. Who can they turn to for help?

Rated: Mature
Categories: X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, Friendship
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 13468 - Hits: 51537
Complete?: No - Published: 10/14/2009 - Last Updated: 12/28/2009
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 06/18/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would love to know happens in part 2, we would love to see an update!

The ‘ifs’ shake her trembling nerves; she reached down, searched for a hand, found one son’s fingers and gripped it tightly. Felt the stickiness of his palm, coated in cola and potato chips, ground her. “I have to Logan.”

Rated: PG
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2848 - Hits: 2704
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/03/2009 - Last Updated: 11/03/2009
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 11/03/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Monday's Child

This is wonderful and heart breaking all at the same time. I would love to get to know the boys.

Author's Response: thanks :) and maybe oneday you will get to know them better, you never know

They're all teenagers. Total AU. Logan doesn't have adamantium.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 24
Wordcount: 63839 - Hits: 170778
Complete?: No - Published: 11/08/2009 - Last Updated: 04/27/2010
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 11/16/2009 Title: Chapter 1: First Day of School

I haven't said it before now but I am oh so loving this story. It is cute and refreshing and funny and just great.

Author's Response: thanks! working on the next chapter now and will have it up tomorrow night. i\'m really enjoying toying with the characters in this new way, especially Wolverine because i can\'t draws on a teenage Logan like i can with the other kids from X-men Evolution and how they appear in my mind. teenage Logan is constantly surprising me with his silly little inner monologue. it\'s really fun to take the usual bad ass Wolverine and make him an awkward kid trying to be tough like every other teenage boy in the world. and i\'m glad you\'re enjoying the ride too :)

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 12/04/2009 Title: Chapter 12: Underground

I love that Rogue's idea was fight club! Awesome!! I love it even more that Logan is taking her to Adam and Eve with the profits.

Hope you are feeling better.

Author's Response: what else is a horny boy with a lot of money and a hot girl going to do! although i hadn\'t planned on them going TOGETHER, but i think you just gave me an awesome idea for a funny chapter!

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/19/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Games

I love this bit of fluff and hopefully the Professor is getting ideas for the danger room and the team. The way you wrote the kids coming together and the developing relationship between Wolverine and Cyke is really well done and feels very natural. Well done as always.

Author's Response: welllll, i don\'t know if the prof is ready to unleash these kids in the DR considering how much damage they do during to the yard recess but we\'ll see ;) and thanks for the compliment on Cyke and Wolverine, yeh they drive each other nuts but they can\'t hate each other forever...OR CAN THEY? *cue ominous music*

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/01/2010 Title: Chapter 15: Interruptions

WOW what a completely hot chapter to be our first update after the holidays! Awesome. Victor, I am sure, is all about stirring up trouble. I love to see Xavier and co be happy for Rogue when they find out about the two of them but somehow I don't think they will be that understanding.

Author's Response: thanks! there\'s going to be some fallout i promise from tonight\'s fights and such, but i plan to keep the story the good times going with some funny stuff too. it\'ll be up Sunday night.

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/03/2010 Title: Chapter 16: Teamwork

Adorable, I love it! You have a perfect mix of Xavier wondering but not knowing for sure. Angel is just too damn funny and who knew that Jean was that good of a telepath!

Author's Response: well, Jean needed to be good for something for once. and for some reason jerking Angel\'s wings is amusing me too much to stop!

In one moment, one split decision changes the lives of two people and Hell is what it leaves in it's wake!

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 68292 - Hits: 83877
Complete?: No - Published: 12/11/2009 - Last Updated: 11/27/2011
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 11/27/2011 Title: Chapter 16: Home is Where the Heart is

There is a huge amount happening in this chapter and I really like all of them but I think my favorite is Logan looking at Xavier and explaining why Magneto let him come back. The delivery is perfect and the reactions I can just see the look going from Logan to Charles. Perfect.

How would you wake Logan up. My part of Logan's Chair

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Logan's Chair
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 495 - Hits: 3410
Complete?: No - Published: 01/17/2010 - Last Updated: 01/17/2010
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Its good, you have a couple of misspellings you might want to go take care of but otherwise its is done well. The last line slays me. :)

Author's Response: Sorry about the spelling very tired when I wrote this actually had it rated a g thank god I fixed that. The last line was the first thing that came to me and it leaves it open for someone else to carry on if they so wish.

Once upon a time, there was this really overlong and convoluted AU how-they-met fic. It wasn't finished. Now it is.

So here it is from the beginning.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 32
Wordcount: 81127 - Hits: 302368
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/17/2010 - Last Updated: 07/02/2010
Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Stranger In The Land

Abita!! Logan's drinking Abita!! :)

I love the appearence of Lynn and Toby (Artist and Fighter being some of my favorites). I am having a great time reading this particular adventure. It will be interesting to see where we go next.

Author's Response: Congratulations on spotting them again! Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/18/2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Wages of Sin

had you posted this before and took it down? I seem to remember this. I remember it being dark but good. I am glad to hear its finished. I am looking forward to see where you take us.

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/19/2010 Title: Chapter 4: What Happened On The Road

I am such a sucker for Logan and Marie stories that take place in the South, probably because it is familiar cause it is home for me. Like all of the rest of your stuff I love this.

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/28/2010 Title: Chapter 16: My Father's Mansion

I haven't had the chance to review the last couple of chapters but I wanted to let you know I am still reading. I am in awe of how you have built, released and are rebuilding the tension in this piece. It ebbs and flows so gradually you don't even know it is happening until you find yourself in the trough of the wave with the crest pressing down on you. I think I remember what happens next but I want to see what you have done with it. BTW I thought the last chapter fit Xavier perfectly - tone, texture and all of the English Lit references.

Author's Response: I\'m very happy you liked Xavier\'s chapter. More soon...

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/29/2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Vision Of The Night

You have me very concerned about what Marie's plan might be. I would love to hear descriptions of some of the paintings. We know what New Orleans looks like and we know what Beauty is but are all her works portaits? And what did she just cover up? Is it Striker? Is it Logan? Is it someone from his past?

Author's Response: So, now there are some descriptions. I hope you also enjoyed Kitty\'s guided tour of the show...as far as what she covered up, I think we\'ll get back to that.

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/31/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Tarry Till I Come

Hot damn, we are close now, they are at least in the same city.

Author's Response: This is true. New York\'s a big place, though, \'specially when you count in Westchester County.

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 01/31/2010 Title: Chapter 20: Strive To Enter

yep she did what I thought, what I remembered. please post soon

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 02/02/2010 Title: Chapter 22: Behold, A Pale Horse

Its all down to timing at this point isn't it? Will he get there or won't he?

Author's Response: All I know is your timing is \'within seconds of hitting post\'. How do you DO that?

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 02/05/2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

I am actually really enjoying the look into these other characters. It is refreshing to be able to see our two main characters through the eyes of others. I didn't comment on the last chapter but I wanted to say that I am glad you made it ackward and hard between them - Rogue's right it will be okay but not right away. I am glad you choose to have them go that way. I look forward to what you have in store for us. I would love to hear what the Professor is thinking of all this.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you like all the little nooks and crannies. We have a few more twists and turns to go...

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 02/07/2010 Title: Chapter 28: If I Make My Bed In Sheol

Beautiful, just simply beautiful

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 02/09/2010 Title: Chapter 29: Bear Witness To The Light

Oh Marie, some day you are going to have to deal with what happened to you.

Please tell me there is more.

Author's Response: Some day she is, yes. And there is more.

Reviewer: alesia Signed
Date: 02/09/2010 Title: Chapter 30: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

I really do love this interludes into other people's heads. It is a great change in perspective. The scene between Scott and Logan was classic. Scott drinking from the carton was just too much.

Author's Response: Thank you! I kinda liked the Scott scene myself...