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Reviews by miss vixen
There's only one thing worse than spending Valentine's day alone, and that's spending it with other people.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Holiday, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5576 - Hits: 3446
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/14/2008 - Last Updated: 02/14/2008
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star
Date: 02/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Pink Carnations and Scarlet Geraniums

This was so good, well done!
I'm an usually anti-Valentine's day person...though I wouldn't mind being in Rogue's position too much ;)

It was meant to be, so why fight it?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 661 - Hits: 1989
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/29/2008 - Last Updated: 02/29/2008
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star half star
Date: 02/29/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

'Daddy'?????? What did she say that for?! Gah! No wonder he run away! Jeez!

poor, poor Logan...stupid Marie!

Author's Response: Uh... This probably would have made a heck of a lot more sense if Word hadn\'t decided to cut it short. Last paragaph\'s missing. sorry. Will correct it now.

This takes up where Is Christmas Ever Normal left off, Marie is pregnant, Logan's happy and the promise he made to Hank comes back and bites them all.
A fic where the love triangle really gets an outing only this time it's between Hank, Marie, Logan and Wolverine.

Rated: Adult
Categories: AU, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Dark, Drama, Foof, Friendship, General, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Completely OOC, Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked, Rape/Non-Con

Series: The Journey From Darkness to Light
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 121314 - Hits: 72209
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/18/2008 - Last Updated: 04/19/2008
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed
Date: 04/19/2008 Title: Nine Months

I think you might have missed a chunk in this chapter, it seems to be cut off short...:-)

Dr. Kroker wants his revenge on Rogue and Wolverine. What ever happened to Sabretooth? And what does a certain red-eyed Cajun thief have against Wolverine? Takes place after "Stealing Rogue" and "The Beast in Rogue."

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 16507 - Hits: 2641
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/01/2008 - Last Updated: 05/01/2008
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed
Date: 05/02/2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Rogue's Revenge

but...it doesn't seem finished. Is that really the end? Does Gambit die then?

Rogue left three years ago to get her life in order. Now she's ready to come back to the mansion. How will she get along with the new resident badass?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 28836 - Hits: 58071
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/27/2008 - Last Updated: 06/30/2008
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star
Date: 05/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Home Again, Home Again

Good work on your first chapter!

How would the story have changed if Rogue decided not to take the cure?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 33037 - Hits: 119600
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/30/2008 - Last Updated: 07/07/2008
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star
Date: 05/30/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Choices

I have to say, I've always loved a stronger and confident Rogue!
Enjoyed your first chapter and I like your plot!

As for X3, I'm completely denying its existance. It never happened! :-)

Sometimes we get the balance wrong. Life is not about knowing the answers, life is what happens while you're looking for them. And the bad decisions? The screw-ups? They're what keep it interesting.


Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 91223 - Hits: 318046
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/31/2008 - Last Updated: 10/11/2009
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/27/2009 Title: Chapter 18: Once a Rogue, always a Rogue

I don't think I've written a review yet for this story, but let me just tell you, I love it. Except from one tiny thing: the once a week updates! Grrrrr!!
But then I think you must have a busy life as well, so I guess it's ok. Kinda. Sorta.

Apart from liking your very confused and somehow messed up Rogue I also quite like Mistique. She's all for herself and no one else...but then you see a glimpse of emotion for someone else. She still left Rogue behind though, guess that makes bad ;-) Hopefully we'll see more of her again!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m really glad you\'re enjoying it, even if it is only updated once a week *lol* Mystique\'s definitely grown on me as well - she\'s becoming one of my fave characters to write :oD

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star
Date: 01/31/2009 Title: Chapter 19: A seven nation army

Rogue on a killing spree...that's interesting! Will she not go a bit er, mad with all those people she touched?

I love seven nation army! Good taste :-)

So...hmm. You're deserting us for a couple of weeks. Ok. No problem. But can you please please please give us 2 chapters when you come back???

Author's Response: \'Will she not go a bit er, mad with all those people she touched?\' - Yep, she\'s definitely in for a rough time. I\'m not gonna make this easy on her, poor girl.

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/04/2009 Title: Chapter 20: A seven nation army - Part II

ooohhh...I think I know what happened in chapter 18!

So the long wait for the next part begins :(

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star
Date: 03/15/2009 Title: Chapter 24: Maybe's and what if's

Well, at least they've started talking....though it seemed a bit one sided! Gah!! Rogue really needs to stop thinking so much and start talking a bit more!

It flows really well, so your editing skills are good!

So...when do we get an update? it's my bday on thursday :-)

Author's Response: \'It flows really well, so your editing skills are good!\' - *lol* thanks. My editing skills had had enough by the time I posted it, so I\'m glad it came across ok. I\'m not sure if I\'ll be able to get the next chapter up any earlier, but you never know. Stranger things have happened! And happy birthday for Thursday :o)

Man's hubris knows no bounds. A perfect example of this hubris was to think the "cure" administered to the mutant population would actually work. Life, Logan, and circumstances out of her control show Rogue that a cure is only as lasting as she wants it to be.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X3, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5941 - Hits: 3818
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/14/2008 - Last Updated: 09/14/2008
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed
Date: 09/15/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Um, yeah, litlen's right actually...

Author's Response: Situation resolved. Thank you for bringing this to my attention!

If life's a movie, Rogue didn't get to pick her genre.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: Comicverse, X3
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 17025 - Hits: 31669
Complete?: No - Published: 01/16/2009 - Last Updated: 04/17/2010
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star
Date: 01/19/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Running. Again. How Nostalgic.

Those two can be sooo mean to each other! hehe!

Loving the story by the way!

Adjusting to life at the Mansion, Rogue struggles with her mutation and the fallout from Southaven, while Logan has to come to terms with her lies and his responsibilities.

Follow-up to "Any Color You Like" and part three of the Dark Side of the Moon series. Same premise, different consequences owing to a treatment facility for mutants called Southaven and a focus on the chemistry between Logan and Rogue.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Dark Side of the Moon
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 30122 - Hits: 38309
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/25/2009 - Last Updated: 02/26/2009
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star
Date: 01/25/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Leave / But don't leave me

Oh, wow!! You're writing the next part! Fantastic!

Author's Response: Yep! Glad you\'re excited.

Admin Note: This story was plagiarized from the book “Project Date” by Kate Perry. You can read the first chapter of “Project Date” here:

http://www.kateperry.com/books/pd2/


AU events in which Marie finds love in an unexpected person and an unusual situation.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 80361 - Hits: 158703
Complete?: No - Published: 02/05/2009 - Last Updated: 04/04/2009
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star
Date: 02/08/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

'He probably kissed like a fish'.

LOL! I'm not exactly sure how a fish-kiss would be, but that was funny!

Author's Response: Suck your cheeks in real hard and purse your lips out real far. Now give someone a big \'ole smack on the mouth. This is a kiss from a fish (and, like a lot of young kids when they give exaggerated puckers) --- and something i could never imagine Logan executing. ;)

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/01/2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This has to be one of the BEST AU stories around here!!

But...where on earth have you disappeared to?

Author's Response: okay, best AU story around? Yup. I think i love you. ;) and i haven\'t disappeared. at least, not inentionally. i\'ll be posting again real soon. promise.

Loosely based on the prompt 'I think I love you... // chewing gum'. Slightly AU. Set after X1, Logan's return to the mansion.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 26052 - Hits: 65856
Complete?: No - Published: 02/21/2009 - Last Updated: 09/16/2009
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed
Date: 03/03/2009 Title: Chapter 7: Tendril, Bolt, DeathTouch....And Freddie.

Oh, Freddie!! LOL!! I don't know why, but that cracked me up! That poor wolf...

Nice job, I'd say it has a solid plot, in the sense that it feels as if it's actually going somewhere.

Author's Response: *grin* Obviously an excellent name for a wolf. \r\n\r\nAnd thanks, I\'m really glad you think the plot is working so far. Plot and I are generally complete strangers.

It was time for the train to start and the red leather seats beneath us to rock a little, giving us an opportunity to awkwardly disentangle; for her to back into the corner, putting a distance between us and for me to ask her to give that geek squad at the school another chance.
But the train didn't start.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 24804 - Hits: 68472
Complete?: No - Published: 05/06/2009 - Last Updated: 06/11/2009
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed
Date: 05/06/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Second Chance To Make A First Impression

It was a cute way of changing the scene from the film!

Only one thing...I kinda laughed when Logan described her eyes as 'Bambi eyes'. It would imply he's seen Bambi...and just the thought of that...LOL!

Author's Response: *gasp* I didn\'t even think about that LOL ...he probably hasn\'t seen Bambi though ;) maybe he\'s seen a poster of it somewhere... ^^

He’d made the mistake of asking her once, asking what it was like being healed by him.No better than being killed by him she’d instantly spat back.

He’d made the mistake of asking, and she’d made the mistake of telling him.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Dark
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Chronicles Of A Path Forsaken
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2241 - Hits: 2573
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/24/2009 - Last Updated: 06/24/2009
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star half star
Date: 06/24/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Death To The Living

I'm so glad you decided to continue this story and really liked this chapter!

One thing though, great as it is, it feels as if quite a lot of time has passed from what happened in the last one to this one and that a few things are left unexplained...

And oh God...who's the bloody red head at the end?!

A different perspective on the relationship between Logan and Marie.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU, X1, X2
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 6854 - Hits: 34507
Complete?: No - Published: 08/13/2009 - Last Updated: 08/15/2009
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star
Date: 08/16/2009 Title: Chapter 1: An Introduction to Jane Bayfield

I'm liking this story so far. But maybe make the chapters a bit longer?

Set in X-men: Evolution.

Logan is frustrated with life at the Institute, but as he gets to know the Rogue he starts seeing that life there isn't nearly as boring as he'd thought.

Each chapter inspired by my one of my favorite bands of all time: Nine Inch Nails. Can't think of better music to describe Rogue or Logan. P.S. I'm a comment whore, feed the beast!!!

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X-Men Evolution
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Angst, Dark, PWP, Shipper, Songfic
Tags: None
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con

Series: None
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 32987 - Hits: 63741
Complete?: No - Published: 09/28/2009 - Last Updated: 11/03/2009
Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/29/2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Great Destroyer

Please please please update!! Love this story!