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This was so good, well done!
I'm an usually anti-Valentine's day person...though I wouldn't mind being in Rogue's position too much ;)
'Daddy'?????? What did she say that for?! Gah! No wonder he run away! Jeez!
poor, poor Logan...stupid Marie!
Author's Response: Uh... This probably would have made a heck of a lot more sense if Word hadn\'t decided to cut it short. Last paragaph\'s missing. sorry. Will correct it now.
I think you might have missed a chunk in this chapter, it seems to be cut off short...:-)
but...it doesn't seem finished. Is that really the end? Does Gambit die then?
Good work on your first chapter!
I have to say, I've always loved a stronger and confident Rogue!
Enjoyed your first chapter and I like your plot!
As for X3, I'm completely denying its existance. It never happened! :-)
I don't think I've written a review yet for this story, but let me just tell you, I love it. Except from one tiny thing: the once a week updates! Grrrrr!!
But then I think you must have a busy life as well, so I guess it's ok. Kinda. Sorta.
Apart from liking your very confused and somehow messed up Rogue I also quite like Mistique. She's all for herself and no one else...but then you see a glimpse of emotion for someone else. She still left Rogue behind though, guess that makes bad ;-) Hopefully we'll see more of her again!
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m really glad you\'re enjoying it, even if it is only updated once a week *lol* Mystique\'s definitely grown on me as well - she\'s becoming one of my fave characters to write :oD
Rogue on a killing spree...that's interesting! Will she not go a bit er, mad with all those people she touched?
I love seven nation army! Good taste :-)
So...hmm. You're deserting us for a couple of weeks. Ok. No problem. But can you please please please give us 2 chapters when you come back???
Author's Response: \'Will she not go a bit er, mad with all those people she touched?\' - Yep, she\'s definitely in for a rough time. I\'m not gonna make this easy on her, poor girl.
ooohhh...I think I know what happened in chapter 18!
So the long wait for the next part begins :(
Well, at least they've started talking....though it seemed a bit one sided! Gah!! Rogue really needs to stop thinking so much and start talking a bit more!
It flows really well, so your editing skills are good!
So...when do we get an update? it's my bday on thursday :-)
Author's Response: \'It flows really well, so your editing skills are good!\' - *lol* thanks. My editing skills had had enough by the time I posted it, so I\'m glad it came across ok. I\'m not sure if I\'ll be able to get the next chapter up any earlier, but you never know. Stranger things have happened! And happy birthday for Thursday :o)
Um, yeah, litlen's right actually...
Author's Response: Situation resolved. Thank you for bringing this to my attention!
Those two can be sooo mean to each other! hehe!
Loving the story by the way!
Oh, wow!! You're writing the next part! Fantastic!
Author's Response: Yep! Glad you\'re excited.
'He probably kissed like a fish'.
LOL! I'm not exactly sure how a fish-kiss would be, but that was funny!
Author's Response: Suck your cheeks in real hard and purse your lips out real far. Now give someone a big \'ole smack on the mouth. This is a kiss from a fish (and, like a lot of young kids when they give exaggerated puckers) --- and something i could never imagine Logan executing. ;)
This has to be one of the BEST AU stories around here!!
But...where on earth have you disappeared to?
Author's Response: okay, best AU story around? Yup. I think i love you. ;) and i haven\'t disappeared. at least, not inentionally. i\'ll be posting again real soon. promise.
Oh, Freddie!! LOL!! I don't know why, but that cracked me up! That poor wolf...
Nice job, I'd say it has a solid plot, in the sense that it feels as if it's actually going somewhere.
Author's Response: *grin* Obviously an excellent name for a wolf. \r\n\r\nAnd thanks, I\'m really glad you think the plot is working so far. Plot and I are generally complete strangers.
It was a cute way of changing the scene from the film!
Only one thing...I kinda laughed when Logan described her eyes as 'Bambi eyes'. It would imply he's seen Bambi...and just the thought of that...LOL!
Author's Response: *gasp* I didn\'t even think about that LOL ...he probably hasn\'t seen Bambi though ;) maybe he\'s seen a poster of it somewhere... ^^
I'm so glad you decided to continue this story and really liked this chapter!
One thing though, great as it is, it feels as if quite a lot of time has passed from what happened in the last one to this one and that a few things are left unexplained...
And oh God...who's the bloody red head at the end?!
I'm liking this story so far. But maybe make the chapters a bit longer?
Please please please update!! Love this story!