The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Wow. This is your best yet, at least of what I've read. You are a superb writer. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That\'s actually the first thing I ever wrote; I\'m very pleased you liked it.
Another great story. You really are an excellent writer.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Very nice! A really cute idea. Well written, and highly erotic without being overly graphic or saccharine.
Author's Response: Oh dear. Well, if you wanted to avoid \"overly graphic,\" I hope you stopped there and skipped the rest of the series. ;-) Glad you enjoyed it.
This is a great idea, a therapy session as soliloquy. If I might offer a suggestion: to indicate a regional accent, use just a couple phonetic spellings in the first few sentences, then only occasionally after that, otherwise it gets distracting. (ref. Steinbeck's "Grapes of Wrath" for how he shows "Okie" accents.)
Author's Response: Thanks, that\'s good advice. I tend to shy away from using her accent because of that very reason, but in this case I wanted to base Rogue on her comic book character, and therefore tried to incorporate her comic accent. Still, I agree, it does make it somewhat awkward to read! I shall bear your words of wisdom in mind *g*
This is a great story. I'd love to hear what happens next...