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Brave story, well writtten and brilliantly executed, thank you for sharing this with us all. Nicely paced, just enough detail to hit the target but not too much to get bogged down (like I tend to lol).
Well done honey!
Not you too! I get him sat next to me growling if I get the subtext wrong, or if it goes against what 'he' wants it to go like. Although he does give praise when he feels like it...does yours?
Thanks honey!
*GUH*
Erm...cold shower needed....
It's snowing outside....that'll do!
Thank you for frying my brain again, hugs Jo
Author's Response: Hugs back. But please, hurry with that snow. Wouldn\'t want to fry your brain for good, I like your stories way too much. :)
Wonderful ride honey (no pun intended), thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed the ride! Thanks for taking the time to review x
Thank you for sharing this one honey, very strong emotional content and very well handled! Have a round of applause from me!
Wondeful fic honey! Just the right tempo and everything, thanks for sharing with us.
Great story honey, I loved the free-flow of the dialogue here, could just see the pair of them going at it. Well done babe!
Author's Response: Thank you - I\'m glad you enjoyed it. There\'s been so many fic\'s put on here lately i\'m falling behind with my reading - but i think at some point i\'ll have to do something else with these two, they seem to have so much fun when screaming insults at each other!
One word....brilliance!
Just perfectly pitched, the tone balanced and weighty without being too dramatic and if this was done in a few minutes then that manuscript should be heading for masterpiece. Thanks for giving us this one honey, we all need to remember that they're human underneath all those powers. Hugs Jo.
Lovely, a condensed moment, just what I need on a rainy cold night, where there was no hope there is hope again. Thanks for sharing honey.
Oooh nasty Marie....nice and dark, haven't seen her for a while on here and it's nice to read something that isn't afraid of seeing her this way. Thanks for sharing honey.
Poignant, very well written, emotionally perfect, a great story and a take on the sides of them we rarely witness. Thank you for sharing it with us, hugs Jo.
Oh...oh my that was beautiful in such a sad melancholic way, caught *perfectly*, you deserve high praise for this one, it's not often I say something is PERFECT but this *IS*. Thank you for sharing it and well done!
I know I've read this before on the old archive and I loved it then. Thanks for reposting it on here hon, loved the flow of the story and the emotions behind the acts. Hugs Jo
Very nice honey, loved the last three lines, *she's* in there isn't she? It's the only way he can touch her...well done hon, perfect form, just like Logan.
Author's Response: Thanks. She indeed is there. :)
I've lost a lot of people throughout my life and honey you've nailed it, the feeling of loss, the helplessness and the pain that just won't shift in your throat so you can *breathe*. Thanks for sharing this one honey, sometimes it's good to remember.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Joanne. This was the first story I ever wrote; I\'d lost someone close to me very recently, and wanted to express those feelings in a story. Though it\'s sad, I\'m glad it worked, and that it helped you remember in a good way. Thanks again for the feedback.
Beautifully written honey, well done, caught the moment right, the emotion and the talking through the reasons. You keep writing 'stream of consciousness', it works for you and thanks for sharing it with us honey.
Dark, full of depth and very descriptive, a Marie who likes being the outcast here I think? Nice piece of work honey, thanks for sharing it with us.Jo
Nice one honey, just the right tempo of joy and love, *adult* love here, not the hearts and flowers of whistful wanting but real. Very well handled honey, not too heavy on the fluff and well paced throughout. If this is your first we have a wonderful set of work to look forward to from you. Thank you for sharing this with us, it's nice to read a homely fic. Hugs Jo.
Author's Response: Many thanks for taking time to review and offer encouragement! I just hope the one I am working on now is okay too.
Thank you for doing this fic honey, I just wish I'd have had someone like Marie had here, I just had to wait awhile to get mine. Thanks again honey.
Beautiful honey, just the right amount of sentiment and I can see what you mean, I've been with the same man for twenty years now and you're right it *is* the little things that make it work.
Nicely done honey!
Author's Response: i wish i could say the same but i am hoping that it\'s true lol. thanks for reading :)
Author's Response: i wish i could say the same but i am hoping that it\'s true lol. thanks for reading :)
Oh good god-damn! Please get these two in bed!!
Great piece honey, well done and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Some more things are in the works :D
Very good imagery honey, love the way you've got Logan a bit on the feral side and I'm with ya on the whole 'cold' thing with Bobby, makes me shiver just to think about it. Want a co author? Have a look at my lot on here, let me know, but great start honey and I like your Logan.
Author's Response: Wow, I would be honored! You are incredibly talented. ...so how do we do that? Lol
Lovely, just lovely...
Author's Response: Thanks!