Okay...This story severely disturbs me and makes me want more. I want more so I can see their relationship grow into something so special that no one can touch it. Which is what they have always had, but in this particular story they start out in a much different point in their relationship at first.

Which brings me to the point that I am horrible disturbed by Logan's mistreatment of Marie.. I crawl with the knowledge that he is using her.. the one man that didn't judge or terrorize her and here he is basically forcing her to have sex... I cannot say how disturbing that is for me and I keep hoping he will make it more about them and less about, well sex.

The Rogue/Marie we all know and love would shatter at the knowledge Logan could use her that way without any feelings about her other than she is his possession.. An object is how I feel Logan is using her right now, not a person just a thing.. I don't know if I could ever see Logan being this way, honor or no. His conscious would catch up with him eventually and then he would feel utter revoltion at his behavior, although I couldn't see him stopping I know he would at least have a much bigger inner conflict.

I guess it is just the fact that it feels more like Marie is an object than a person when I read their interactions.. It creeps me out. Sure Logan is definitely a rough sex type of guy and I could totally see him being domineering in the bedroom, but near abusive...nah I couldn't see him that way with or without his honor. Even wolves treat there mates better than that and yes I mean mates.

Wolves will only claim, as Logan has with Marie, one mate and from that point on that is it. They treat them with respect, love, protection. Of course I don't expect Logan to be purely animalistic and not think or want other women (case in point Jean-the bitch) at first anyway. I don't know I'm just expecting a climb in their relationship from owner - object-sex to best friends-lovers-mates. Not right away like I said, but the pattern currently in place needs some change, even if it is subtle. I find myself wanting to rip Logan's face off and wonder where the hell his mind or even heart went... Grrr. Yes I did just growl.. lol

Anyway, your writing style is lovely, I just hope that sometime soon their relationship takes a turn upward instead of the constant feeling he is just using her and not valuing her past she is his possession-object.. It is so degrading and doesn't need to be, even if Logan threw his honor out the window. The sex is great and all, but there needs to start being some substance, especially after they begin on the road and into all the trouble they have to face together. Case in point the link to the video below makes me think of what their relationship could be. Over all great writing style and I hope I did not offend it was not my intention. I just hope that if you come back to this story progression on their relationship starts.. somehow.

LINK: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TetxEjIrgdo