I have to tell you, I did a little jig and an impromptu singsong that sent my freaked kids scurrying when I saw that you have updated!

Brilliant, as is par for the course when it comes to you, but I am forcing myself to choose just one line because I'll probably just gush on forever and embarress myself!:

Logan’s face is still tight, his nostrils slightly widened. He is breathing only through his nose now, and Xavier knows that he is now being run through Logan’s senses; that his body is being smelled, his pulse listened to; that Logan is falling back on his instincts, as always, to figure out what he should do, how safe the situation is, by detecting the slightest change in the room.

And poof, just like that, I see Logan and the Wolverine. Brilliant.

Well worth the wait, and then some. :)

Author's Response: Hi serafim! lol, sorry for your scurrying kids. Thank you for this lovely comment... I\'m glad that line spoke to you. I do think about it; what it must be like for Logan to process the world that way, and what it must be like for other people to be processed that way by Logan. Also the difference between Logan\'s relationship to the body, and Xavier\'s relationship to the body.

k - I just visited your website and *mouth drops* I am just about blown away. Holy Mackinaw (sorry, Canadianese escaping - hockey fever is rampant over here right now).

I am about the spend the rest of my day by the computer! :)

Wow, totally didn't see that coming - Marie protecting Sabretooth - VERY interesting indeed!

Holy mackinaw, but this has me all kerfuffled. Intrigued is the least than I am feeling! Nice start. :)

I had to laugh at the pillow scene - could so see that happening. :)

Hmmm....cajun waking up early?..hmmm...

And I like this line, very Loganish:

It was concentrated, focused. He glanced towards me, his expression darkly concerned.

Keep the chapters coming, I really enjoying this!

Loving the claws coming out. Love, love, LOVE the "fertile" line - something about Jeans always struck me as very unmaternal.

I also really like the way how real Rogue is, noticing how beautiful Jean is and how insecure she feels when around her.

Great story! :)

This was great! You had me laughing, getting angry, getting all hot and bothered and then back to laughing all in one reading. Thanks so much for this, I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing...it\'s my drug!\r\n\r\n-Pepper;)

First off, I am giddy with the knowledge that you have a second chapter for this - second - I don't think I took even one breath reading this. Still a bit light-headed, even after reading it a second time. I absolutely ADORE your Logan. To me - that is him. I love it! A hundred stars for you!

Author's Response: Thanks, Serafim! :D I have a lot of fun playing with the darker side of Logan :)

I wish I could say I'm blushing, but I'm way past that stage in my life, lol! This is the line that I loved in the last chapter:

I'm buried b*lls deep in the sweetest p*ssy I will ever have

***fans self***

I am so happy you've updated. His uneven thrusting near the end had me freaking, but for this chapter I choose this line:

Sunlight carved his features and for a long moment his beauty caught her.

I find your Logan exquisite. Thank you for sharing him! :)



Author's Response: Thanks, Serafim. I thought it might be that one! Wolverine insisted on that line ;-) And I\'m glad you liked the line from chapter 3. FilmLogan is so very pretty I had to have Marie comment on it. *grin*

I have to tell you - this is SOO different and yet you've managed to make it really work. I really loved how you were able to describe Logan's take on Rogue's appearance and weight...very well done.

I hope you keep this up, I am hooked. :)

Author's Response: Thank you a bunch for joining us in this adventure, Serafim. I hope you\'ll like the on coming chapters too!! \r\nThis story is a big deal for me...I know it\'s something very few have done, and a lot of the readers here might not like the liberties I have taken. But well, as they say: \"write what you\'re comfortable with\" and that\'s what I\'m doing...or try to do :o)

I like how you have Rogue being the one to pursue Logan sexually. You've managed to convey his fear and her frustration in this latest chapter very well. I look forward to how you plan on getting this resolved - lots of privacy in that cabin.... :)

Author's Response: Thanks Seraf!\r\nThis chapter was a little harder to handle than the others. It\'s a real mental workout for me to try and create a Rogue that would show Wolverine\'s characteristics but yet be fragile and vulnerable enough to make Logan want to protect her... Am I making any sense?\r\nAnd the privacy provided first by the cabin, then by the different spots occupied by the characters have one sole mission: you\'ll know if you read! (goofy smile)\r\n\r\nFree

Man, you are SOOOO good at this! I love how arrogant Logan is, tormenting Rogue the way he is, only to have it bite him in the ass ( - now THERE's an image... - )

Great story!

Author's Response: An arrogant Logan is still a hot Logan. We shall see soon if there is any ass-biting involved...hehe