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Reviews by TrickyBusiness
The Night of Nights was quickly turning into a disaster and I had to do something about it.


“You can touch me.”

“Do you want me to touch you?”



Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 4592 - Hits: 20257
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/24/2009 - Last Updated: 03/27/2009
Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed
Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Better Get Dressed

A great short story that started out as a challenge. Keep up the great work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Better Get Dressed

A great short story that started out as a challenge. Keep up the great work.

Rogue and the Mysterious Attic Dweller.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 27496 - Hits: 9580
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/30/2009 - Last Updated: 03/30/2009
Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed
Date: 06/22/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Locked Away

Great Story!

AU where Logan meets Marie in a carnival sideshow.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 19266 - Hits: 3773
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/30/2009 - Last Updated: 03/30/2009
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Date: 06/01/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Dreaming of Oranges

Great job! Loved it!

It started out a dialogue fic, and became something... else. I really like musicals, just so you know....

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4024 - Hits: 2535
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/30/2009 - Last Updated: 03/30/2009
Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed
Date: 06/01/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Being Careful

I liked it a lot. Different twist, but very good.

Through someone else's eyes, I saw myself, on this very bed; only I hardly recognized my face.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Dark, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 4543 - Hits: 19524
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/06/2009 - Last Updated: 04/14/2009
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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: The worst thing

Sucide or even an attempt of suicide is extremely hard to deal with. I hope whomever was hurting and desperate to the point of trying to end their life was able to get help.
I write a lot to vent my emotions and stress as well. I find that it help when I let the words flow and my emotions take over the world I create on paper, so that I'm not so burdened with them. Although you still fill the pain, it does help. I'm glad you took the time to let yourself vent, instead of holding in the stress and shock.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 2: What didn't happen

Very interest way of making Rogue touchable. This story is dark, but it is also neat in how it shows more detail into what is happening in Rogue's mind when the others are trying to take her over or take control of her body. Great idea and work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 3: A weapon in his hands

Great chapter. Very intense.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 4: The man I love

I sure hope this is just another nightmare. Rogue could never live with herself if she really hurt Logan.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Hope

A great job. I'm glad Logan's there to help Marie. Now that she's told Logan, he and the others will be able to help her.

Jubilee's big mouth makes Rogue look at Logan in a whole new way.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 20845 - Hits: 54222
Complete?: No - Published: 05/04/2009 - Last Updated: 05/20/2009
Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed
Date: 06/20/2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I absolutely adored this story. I hope you finish it one day, although it could end well where it is now if you wanted it too. However I must admit that I'd miss the fun. I hope you write more Logan and Rogue happy shippers soon. Keep up the great work. :o)

"I think she's a bit taken with you."

"My heart belongs to someone else."

She wasn't talking about Rogue. Then again, neither was he. How X-Men 1 should have ended.



Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: Do Over
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1473 - Hits: 3824
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/05/2009 - Last Updated: 05/05/2009
Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed
Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A job well done. Love the interaction between our two favorite people.

It was time for the train to start and the red leather seats beneath us to rock a little, giving us an opportunity to awkwardly disentangle; for her to back into the corner, putting a distance between us and for me to ask her to give that geek squad at the school another chance.
But the train didn't start.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 24804 - Hits: 68530
Complete?: No - Published: 05/06/2009 - Last Updated: 06/11/2009
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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Second Chance To Make A First Impression

Great beginning.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 2: They Call Her Mississippi

Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm glad Logan didn't make Marie go back with Storm and Scott. Great work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 3: Hanging All Her Hopes On The Stars

Aww, poor Marie. Thankfully Logan isn't scared of her, or her mutation. I think this was a very nice chapter, corniness and all. :D

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 4: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

Great chapter. I thought the motorcycle scene went well. In fact if you think about it, it could motivate Marie to move past the free of never having touching and isolating herself to giving her asense of freedom and courage to be able to face her fears, which can be just as invigorating. Keep up the great work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Run For Your Life If You Can, Little Girl

Great job, again. If Sabertooth has clear memories about him and Logan, then will Marie have them, and be able to clue Logan in to his past, and if so will he go out searching for answers that some of her knowledge will give him clues to? I can't wait to read more.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 6: She Lives On Disillusion Road

Go Marie, I loved how she stood up to
Scott. The girl has got backbone.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 7: When I Am With You I Feel Flames Again

Another great chapter. Keep up the great work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 8: All That I Have To Give And More

I know Marie might care about what others think, but I'm a little worried Logan might, and try to distance himself for Marie's sake. I hope they can work things out for the both of their sakes. I like the bond they share as well as the idea of others sharing the same type of bond. Great idea. Keep up the great work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 9: I Wish I Could Say To You...It's Gonna Be All Right

Marie's a smart cookie in one regard. Magneto could snap Logan in half. However i sure hope she let's Logan know she cares about him before he goes off to face Magneto. If not she'd regret it for the rest of her life, if something did happen to Logan. Plus I'm curious to when Marie is going to get around to telling Logan about his past. I'm sure Logan would be eager to learn whatever he could since he's been searching for years to find even the small clue.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 10: Girl Who Dries Your Tears When They're Falling

A very well written chapter. Logan's reactions were true to form in my opinion. A great chapter. I can't to see what else you have planned for our couple.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 11: I Found My Strength The Very Day That I Found You

Another great chapter as always. Marie and Logan are such a great couple. They are perfect for each other, while still not being to perfect. They have problems, but they are their for each other. Great job.

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Date: 06/05/2011 Title: Chapter 12: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

What is Marie planning. I'm worried she is putting herself in a position that could let her fall into Magneto's grasp and put everyone else in more danger. I surely hope not. I hope her plan works, however I know that Logan will be furious with her when he finds out that she put herself and others in danger to protect him. Please update soon. You still have fans out here who are interested in what's going to happen next. Me especially.

This is an AU about a sweetly clutzy Marie and a less traditional meeting with Logan that was begun by the great jj blazer and then opened up for completion. JJ was kind enough to approve of my completion of her fantastic story and so...here it is.

Rated: R
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 23921 - Hits: 59085
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/04/2009 - Last Updated: 06/06/2009
Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed
Date: 03/12/2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved everything about it. Especially Logan being the one a bit insecure and needing guidance. I really like how you had them find each other once Marie came home. LOL Poor Marie, you can help but feel for her. Although I know how it feels to be a cluts from way to much personal experience. I like how Logan finds it adorable and amusing with Marie. Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Credit where credit is due, however--all of the meeting at the Mansion scene was the work of the great jjblazer, who wrote the first half of this before offering it as a completion challenge. I agree completely, it\'s a fabulous scene.