You definitely bring the yum with this line: Heat radiating through his skin with every point of contact, the urge to shut her up using only his mouth and tongue and tonsils suddenly over-powering in that hot, sticky room.

Okay, pretty much everything Jubilee says here is awesome, but especially this:
“So let me get this straight,” Jubes was saying, “You tried to warn Marie that Remy LeBeau is a no-good, honour-free horn-dog? And yet you somehow managed to turn that into You are Unattractive and Too Emotionally Frail To Deal With Adult Life? That about cover it, bub?”

and this:
“We must move beyond the Era of Logan the Growler, of Logan the Semi- Stalker,” She thundered. “We must even move beyond the Era of Logan, the Scruffy Sex God Who May or May Not Turn Up If You and He Make A Date! We must move ourselves into the Era of Logan, the Considerate. Of Logan, the Coordinated. Of Logan, The Only Man Marie Wants To Date. In short, we must move into the Era of Logan The Dancer!

Did I mention the yum?: She launched herself at his throat, teeth breaking the surface and as she did so she heard him make a sound she couldn’t identify, somewhere between a snarl and a moan. Felt his big, heavy hand thread roughly through her hair to hold her mouth in place. “Right there,” he hissed as she bit again, “Right there, darlin’- Just like I like it-”

Awesome: “Look,” he said, “I ain’t Hank so I’ll leave out all the big words and just cut to the chase: What The Fuck, Marie?” And he swept a hand behind him, as if to encompass all that might be The Fuck.

It took me a minute, but when I decoded it I laughed out loud. Poor Bobby!: Not that Marie had ever been persuaded to watch that stuff with Bobby before he finally renounced his Narnia-seeking ways.

Two great phrases here: Something sixties and dreamy and honey-toned. and: Making eye contact the entire time, whispering soft, hot things that made her feel dizzy and wanted, that made her toes curl and her blood practically sing.

I will ignore how you made Logan three and a half feet tall here! ;-) I know he can be short, but...

Best line: And without a moment’s hesitation the Asgardian reached down and smacked Kit soundly on the ass. Grinning. As if she kept her supply of drunken bridesmaids in there.

Awesome! And hilarious. And yes I would like my calendar, please. ;-)

Author's Response: Hmmm, MANimals calendar? I hadn\'t considered that...Maybe a \"MANimals Magazine Presents: Fantastic Feral 2011 Calendar\"!!! I\'ll put you on the recipient list. Thanks!

Aw, I loved this one. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

I'm so glad to see you writing new stuff! I'm new to the site (and the general world of Rogan fanfic) and I looooved your Dark Side series -- it was so great! I loved the explanation of why the cure was so vital to Rogue (especially how the Freak Out intensified her power/curse). And her interaction with John. Even her interaction with Scott when she takes his powers is so brief but moving. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Welcome to Rogan! There\'s a lot of great stuff going on over here. :) Glad you liked the interactions with John and Scott. Secondary characters are really important to me. More soon.

Just wanted to let you know I haven't forgotten about this story, and would really love to see an update some day!

Yay! I love your crazy/resourceful Marie!

Author's Response: I\'m starting to like her a whole lot too. I could never stand the Marie of the movies because she just stood around helpless all the time waiting for someone else to come save her. Totally not the Rogue of the comics or the cartoons or of my brain for that matter. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! I know it\'s hard sometimes to take the time when you\'re writing your own stories and I appreciate it. Kiss Kiss.

Squeeee! I don't know what thrilled me more, seeing a new story by you or seeing that the "complete" box was unchecked knowing there would be more. I am totally hooked already. I think you did a great job of establishing the circumstances of the AU without having to spell them out in an intrusive way. I was a little confused at first but all was clear by the end. I know you've had other offers, but add me to the list of those who would be thrilled to beta for you. You have my email. :-)

Author's Response: Oh gosh there\'s a lot of squeeing going on these days, huh? I think you\'re one of the only people on this site who *likes* the unchecked complete box. Usually that\'s a sign of doom to readers. I\'ve got plenty more already written & unless something unfortunate occurs *knock on wood* I\'ll be delivering it. With a side of Nearly Nekkid Logans for everyone. Okay, you\'re all just going to have to use your imaginations on that one. I can\'t actually deliver that. Thanks for this :D