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Real name: Dr. Girlfriend
Member Since: 11/05/2010
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Wedding bells are a-ringing at Xavier's when Kitty drags Logan, Marie and Jubes off to New Orleans for her big day. But Wolverine's going to regret sending her to see his old friend Gambit- Because suddenly he's not the only handsome, cool badass with an interest in Rogue. But there's no cause for alarm, is there? And why are Jubes and Kitty grinning like that anyway..?

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X3, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Humor, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 30458 - Hits: 54272
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/23/2010 - Last Updated: 06/23/2011
Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Don't You Want Me Baby?

You definitely bring the yum with this line: Heat radiating through his skin with every point of contact, the urge to shut her up using only his mouth and tongue and tonsils suddenly over-powering in that hot, sticky room.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Tainted Love

This caused me to snort water out my nose: It was strange, but he looked like the type of man who laughed easily and often, a far cry from the Wolverine and his death-and-me-are-Molson-buddies stoicism.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 6: I Don't Feel Like Dancing

Okay, pretty much everything Jubilee says here is awesome, but especially this:
“So let me get this straight,” Jubes was saying, “You tried to warn Marie that Remy LeBeau is a no-good, honour-free horn-dog? And yet you somehow managed to turn that into You are Unattractive and Too Emotionally Frail To Deal With Adult Life? That about cover it, bub?”

and this:
“We must move beyond the Era of Logan the Growler, of Logan the Semi- Stalker,” She thundered. “We must even move beyond the Era of Logan, the Scruffy Sex God Who May or May Not Turn Up If You and He Make A Date! We must move ourselves into the Era of Logan, the Considerate. Of Logan, the Coordinated. Of Logan, The Only Man Marie Wants To Date. In short, we must move into the Era of Logan The Dancer!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 7: Heaven Knows I'm Miserable Now

Didn't even have to think about this one, I think it's the best line in the whole fic:
Didn’t help that the moment she’d spoken he and Parker had leapt apart with the limberness of spring lambs,
What a visual!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 8: Let's Hear It For The Boy

Did I mention the yum?: She launched herself at his throat, teeth breaking the surface and as she did so she heard him make a sound she couldn’t identify, somewhere between a snarl and a moan. Felt his big, heavy hand thread roughly through her hair to hold her mouth in place. “Right there,” he hissed as she bit again, “Right there, darlin’- Just like I like it-”

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 9: Crazy In Love

:-D: What Marie and Logan shared wasn’t so much a mutual affection as mutual brain-damage

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 10: Heart of Glass

Awesome: “Look,” he said, “I ain’t Hank so I’ll leave out all the big words and just cut to the chase: What The Fuck, Marie?” And he swept a hand behind him, as if to encompass all that might be The Fuck.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 11: I Play Chicken With The Train

This was a very deep thought for Remy in the middle of a fluffy chapter. It's great: Girl spent so much time trying to distract the feral from his darkness that she never thought to find someone to distract her from her own.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 12: It's Raining Men

It took me a minute, but when I decoded it I laughed out loud. Poor Bobby!: Not that Marie had ever been persuaded to watch that stuff with Bobby before he finally renounced his Narnia-seeking ways.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 13: True

Mmmmm: Despite herself Marie felt heat rising to her cheeks, felt herself taking in every wet, dirty, scuffed, perfect inch of him.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 14: Some Kind of Wonderful

Two great phrases here: Something sixties and dreamy and honey-toned. and: Making eye contact the entire time, whispering soft, hot things that made her feel dizzy and wanted, that made her toes curl and her blood practically sing.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 15: Big, Bad Handsome Man

You can make even the most innocuous sentences so evocative and lovely!: He’d ghosted into place beside her, an unlit cigarette between his lips, the look he was throwing the newly-clued-in honeys unreadable.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 16: All The Single Ladies

I will ignore how you made Logan three and a half feet tall here! ;-) I know he can be short, but...

Best line: And without a moment’s hesitation the Asgardian reached down and smacked Kit soundly on the ass. Grinning. As if she kept her supply of drunken bridesmaids in there.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue: (I've Had) The Time of My Life

Aw. Thanks for a great story!

Author's Response: hey hun, just wanted to thank you for all the kind reviews! i normally only respond to reviews when i\'m writing the fic (everyone gets a shout-out at the beginning of each new chapter)but you started me thinking that it was kinda rude not to say thanks if someone only discovers the story after it finishes and then reviews. so thank you, i\'m really glad you enjoyed \"jitters,\" and i\'m really looking forward to your next chapter... \r\nhobbits away, hey!

Booze, half-naked Logan, growling, and indignation.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2037 - Hits: 3850
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/24/2010 - Last Updated: 11/24/2010
Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 11/25/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome! And hilarious. And yes I would like my calendar, please. ;-)

Author's Response: Hmmm, MANimals calendar? I hadn\'t considered that...Maybe a \"MANimals Magazine Presents: Fantastic Feral 2011 Calendar\"!!! I\'ll put you on the recipient list. Thanks!

Now COMPLETE!!! :-D The X-team, including Rogue, liberate a mutant lab and find our favorite feral...

Okay, that's not much of a summary, so here's an excerpt to give you a feel:

She held out her hand, palm up, and for a second time seemed to stop. The man narrowed his gaze on her hand, and then again on her eyes. He took one shuffling step forward, and she concentrated on keeping her body loose, letting no tension show in her posture. The sudden /snick/ as the claws retracted startled her, but she managed not to jump. He watched her closely, reaching toward her hand. Suddenly he grabbed it, and for a second she thought he was going to bite her palm. But he just took a deep inhale, smelling her scent and then looking back at her eyes, assessing. She thought she saw a slight lessening of the tension in his posture after this strange ritual, but either way they were out of time.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 45928 - Hits: 118175
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/06/2010 - Last Updated: 01/22/2011
Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 12/12/2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Prisoner

Oops -- sorry shuttlelauncher, I meant to delete my response and write a new one, but instead I deleted your review. My bad. And all for a lame joke about how instead of my updates being early Christmas presents I'm on the Hanukkah schedule, because at the rate I'm going I'll probably have posted 8 in a week's time... ;-)

Marie's chasing her demons, Logan's chasing her. Things get angsty.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read, Not Spellchecked

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 679 - Hits: 1776
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/09/2010 - Last Updated: 12/09/2010
Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/11/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, I loved this one. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/20/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I can't believe I missed reading this earlier. I absolutely loved it. I'm going to have to open it in another window to quote all the parts I love, but these in particular got me:
"she’s up on coltish legs, tangled in the length of her cloak."
"he rises as slowly as any man who knows too well how things work in the wild"
"He’s damned sure his reinforced frame is going to crack with it."

Just great. I can't wait to read the rest of it!

Author's Response: Oh gosh you just did my most favorite thing ever: QUOTING. I dunno, it just makes me bounce & squee a bit when reviewers quote things. I love, love, love knowing which lines stood out to people. Right now I don\'t think I\'m going to continue this. I can sort of see a cloudy impression of where I could take it, but there\'s another monster that I\'m working on. It\'s really good to know that the interest is there in case I do decide to uncheck the \"finished\" box. Thanks so much for reading, rating, and reviewing! The *new* 3 Rs!

Marie thought she needed a cure. Logan thought he needed answers. Turns out fulfilling a need is a lot less satisfying than accepting a want – but no less achingly complicated.

First part in the Use Somebody series. Post-X3, the architects of Marie's cure and Logan's amnesia conspire within the government. Only together can Marie and Logan break their cycles of self-destruction and stop a war they were never meant to start.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X2, X3, X-Men Origins Wolverine
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Use Somebody
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 24694 - Hits: 34109
Complete?: No - Published: 12/16/2010 - Last Updated: 08/15/2011
Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 12/16/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Scream: I

I'm so glad to see you writing new stuff! I'm new to the site (and the general world of Rogan fanfic) and I looooved your Dark Side series -- it was so great! I loved the explanation of why the cure was so vital to Rogue (especially how the Freak Out intensified her power/curse). And her interaction with John. Even her interaction with Scott when she takes his powers is so brief but moving. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Welcome to Rogan! There\'s a lot of great stuff going on over here. :) Glad you liked the interactions with John and Scott. Secondary characters are really important to me. More soon.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed star star star star star
Date: 03/06/2011 Title: Chapter 7: Wish I Was the Moon: I

Love this chapter, and appreciate how thoughtful you are about tying things together. But poor, poor, Marie. That just hurt to read! Anxiously awaiting more...

Author's Response: I appreciate your appreciation. Much more to come, inshallah.

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 01/01/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Scream: I

Just wanted to let you know I haven't forgotten about this story, and would really love to see an update some day!

Marie's a little crazy. Logan's a little farther south than he should be. Everyone's a little worried about the political climate in the nation.
A long and mixed up AU containing our favorite cast of characters, in which Logan and Marie try to live their lives peacefully (yeah right).

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 49249 - Hits: 43384
Complete?: No - Published: 12/23/2010 - Last Updated: 05/16/2013
Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 12/23/2010 Title: Chapter 1: A little more than kin, and less than kind

I liked this a lot! Can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 01/02/2011 Title: Chapter 3: As good luck would have it

Yay! I love your crazy/resourceful Marie!

Author's Response: I\'m starting to like her a whole lot too. I could never stand the Marie of the movies because she just stood around helpless all the time waiting for someone else to come save her. Totally not the Rogue of the comics or the cartoons or of my brain for that matter. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! I know it\'s hard sometimes to take the time when you\'re writing your own stories and I appreciate it. Kiss Kiss.

"...home of lost causes, and forsaken beliefs, and unpopular names, and impossible loyalties!" -Matthew Arnold

A Brotherhood Rogue is betrayed and finds herself in the middle of a very fractured team of X-Men after she kills one of their own. Now she has to figure out what Carol was & still is up to while juggling a tentative friendship with Jubilee, a growing resentment for the Professor, and a distracting attraction to the growling feral mutant who was sleeping with the woman she killed.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, AU, Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 42049 - Hits: 31453
Complete?: No - Published: 12/28/2010 - Last Updated: 08/18/2011
Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 01/27/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Still loving it! Lots of great lines, but I'll pick one I particularly loved:

The goddess inclines her head and unlike so many of the nonverbal head gestures she had been given in the past few days, this is more of a “won’t you accompany me?” and less of a “hop to, underling.” Marie appreciates that now that she has experienced the difference.

Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love when reviewers point out what they loved. And honestly, just the simple \"keep writing!\" was enough to brighten my day!

Reviewer: doctorg Signed
Date: 12/30/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Squeeee! I don't know what thrilled me more, seeing a new story by you or seeing that the "complete" box was unchecked knowing there would be more. I am totally hooked already. I think you did a great job of establishing the circumstances of the AU without having to spell them out in an intrusive way. I was a little confused at first but all was clear by the end. I know you've had other offers, but add me to the list of those who would be thrilled to beta for you. You have my email. :-)

Author's Response: Oh gosh there\'s a lot of squeeing going on these days, huh? I think you\'re one of the only people on this site who *likes* the unchecked complete box. Usually that\'s a sign of doom to readers. I\'ve got plenty more already written & unless something unfortunate occurs *knock on wood* I\'ll be delivering it. With a side of Nearly Nekkid Logans for everyone. Okay, you\'re all just going to have to use your imaginations on that one. I can\'t actually deliver that. Thanks for this :D