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ok,this is my new favoritest chapter! the bit where he says 'don't leave me'? le sigh!!! and him licking her shoulder bite, like a mating mark or something, so sweet and smexy! i love possessive logan! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I have developed a plan, and I think we\'re about three chapters from the end. Both sad and exciting (for me at least!).
i love how you switched around the usual dynamic of logan promising marie something. it was a reallly poignant moment at the end there. loved the chapter, amazing writing as usual!!!
Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it! This wasn\'t one of my favorites, but I\'m determined to get this sucker done. :-D
you know, i'm not sure how much more of this rogue can take. i mean, he's being really sweet in a fucked up way, but seriously, this is not helping their relationship! i mean, i'd be SOOOOO pissed if i were her, like wanting to burn down the motel just to spite him pissed. anyhoo, amazing twist, very believable and clever! cannot wait for more, but i'm kind of hoping rogue gives him a little bit of a hard time before forgiving him. maybe she could somehow escape and save his ass at the last second, ha, that'd be funny!
Author's Response: Yeah, I\'ve kind of wondered at times just how understanding she can be without being a doormat. I think in other stories I\'m used to Rogue understanding Logan\'s idiosyncrasies because she has him in her head, but since this AU Marie has no Inner!Logan she has to rely on what she knows from his background and what he\'s told her about himself to understand his behavior. He\'s being pretty thick-headed for sure, but I am hoping that his intense reaction to Stryker helps justify that. I mean, if something can scare the sh*t out of Logan, it must be pretty bad, right, even if he can\'t remember exactly what it was? And I think that partly justifies for me why he feels he\'s doing the right thing to protect Marie.
another great twist! awesome that she saved his ass too, love it!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing.
wow, great job! i'm on the edge of my seat here! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I\'m expecting the last chapter will be up this weekend.
i freaking love this story. so excited to read more, especially logan/rogue interaction. did shakespear ever quote anything with 'rogue' in it? that'd be a cool way of explaining how she picked her name. anyhoo, write more soon please!
Author's Response: I guess we\'ll have to see won\'t we? ;)
oh i'd be pissed at them for going through my shit if i were rogue. wonder how long wolvie takes before he realizes he really likes rogue? great update, really hope you write more soon! love the hamlet quote too!
Author's Response: Remember when it said \"long and mixed up\" in the summary. No lies. But I\'m sure she\'ll grow on him eventually. I always liked the idea of love at first sight, but I feel that this Rogue is a little too messed up for that to happen to her. Thanks for reviewing!
fabulous! my fave quote is definitely the little candle one! beautifully incorporated quotations as usual!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had to dig for awhile to find something that I liked. That one turned out to be my favoriet too.
that's so freaking awesome rogue beat logan! and i love all the little moments where we get to see him falling for her. like how he felt when she smiled or his desire to give her what she needs. i wonder if her bday trip to bar will speed things along for the two of them. great job!
Author's Response: It was about time someone beat Logan. Can\'t have him winning all the time! Thanks for reading. Glad you\'re liking it.
great beginning, would love to read more
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m workin\' on it!
i wonder how logan would respond if he heard rogue telling herself 'he's not victor.' sort of give him a clue as to what her life was like before the mansion. great update, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hmmm, that is some good food for thought. I\'ll be addressing it later on down the road, maybe when Logan\'s a little less claw-some? Oh man, *Clawsome*. New word of the new year. Awesome is out, clawsome is in. Spread the word! Might have to work that in here somehow.......\r\n\r\nThanks :D
i'll try to help with your diet, i love this story! i'm so curious to see what logan thinks of rogue now that he's seen what she goes through. but god, jean is such s biyatch! having another telepath run amok through rogue's mind isn't the best idea. please write more soon! i'm desperate!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for helping me with my diet. Your review is quite delicious. I completely agree with you about Jean, too. I admit that I have blatant Jean issues, but I don\'t want to make her a full on unmitigated bitch. Maybe Bitch-Lite?
dun, dun, DUNNNNN! wicked excited to see what happens next so please update soon! love the sassy rogue, she rocked in telling off the professor!
Author's Response: I *knew* I forgot something! Should have put \"dun, dun DUNNN\" at the end of that chapter. I\'m glad you like my Sassy!Rogue. It\'s going to get her into trouble one of these days....
love the new update, the plot's really heating up in the last couple chappies. i'm curious to see if you'll do a logan pov sometime. personally, i'd love to see some insight into what was going on in his mind during some of the things you described from rogue's pov. like his 'straight jacket' face or the 'cold shower' face. are those faces er, correctly labeled i guess. like, is he really thinking 'god she's crazy' with the straight jacket look and is he really angry with the shower look?
anyhoo, rambling over. love the story, love the update. great job!
Author's Response: You\'re my 100th review!!! You get...uh...shit I\'m out of candy. How about a little secret instead? About that Logan POV - consider it kind of done. After much thought & consultation with my oracles I\'ve decided that another story I wrote, \"She\'s Lost Control\" is going to be incorporated into this one further down the line. It\'s a scene that I can definitely see taking place in the world I\'ve created with Loyalties, now I\'ve just got to flesh it out & write it from Marie\'s POV. When the time is right I\'ll change the description of \"She\'s Lost Control\" to explain that it\'s Logan\'s POV of chapter whatever in this story. I know, I know - that\'s not exactly what you meant by a Logan POV. How about I ship you some cookies? Once I find some...
excited to read more, interesting start!
AMAZING! please, please, please update again soon, i'm dying to find out what happens next!!!
i love this story more every time i read it! i'm wicked curious to see how long marie manages to stay sane this time, and if charles can help her regain more of herself. please update again soon!
Author's Response: *grin* I\'ve got a lot in store for Charles and the gang!
my favorite chappie, love how possessive and feral logan and his animal are about marie! the line about smelling his, looking like his and feeling like his was just perfect!!!
Author's Response: *grin* Thanks!
i love the line 'despoiler of her plans.' fucking awesome.
Author's Response: *giggles* I know, right!
please update soon!
Author's Response: I will today!
rereading this for the umpteenth time and still adore it as much as the first time! i hope someday you finish it!
fuck awesome story! please update again soon, i love it!!!
Author's Response: i am working on the next chapter riiiiiiight now!!!
so impressed you wrote this on your phone! please keep writing!
soooo good!
Author's Response: Those two words made my night!! Promise to update soon, just got caught up in other people\'s fanfics and work-related stuff...thanks for the review!!!
yay you updated!!!! but boo rogue's kidnapped! but yay that logan is recognizing marie as his mate! please write more soon, i'm desperate for more!
Author's Response: Yay!! Sorry for the long interruption between updates! I promise to do my best to speed u my updates. I seriously disliked Mystique so she\'ll get hers in the next chapter I think...Woo hoo for Logan\'s realization. Now he just has to go and get her! Thanks for the review!! :)