aw this is so beautiful and sad..

Author's Response: I\'ve done three of these and they always seem to go down the sad route! would love to do a happy shippery feel good one but alas I have promised the wrfa community no more poetry!! Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for taking the time to review x

Im loving this story so far. Im a fan of dominant protective Logan, please continue! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Im gonna try and up date this soon, hopefully before christmas. So keep an eye out.

LOVE this dominating logan, specially when he's tender with Marie and takes care of her. And Im also very fond on the way Marie seems to need at the same time the protection of logan and how she tries to please him even when he acts as an asshole sometimes. This is so kinky and exiting lol I love your story please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Annie - I FINALLY got chapter 5 up so please please let me know what you think of their dynamic at this point. They make progress...or do they? Thanks so much for the feedback you have nailed some of the complexity in which they find themselves - need vs want vs survival.

This story shows another possible way of what could have happened without going off character. I mean, it’s Logan, he’s not an average “hero” he’s crossing the line between good and evil all the time. He’s got honor but he’s also a man with animal instincts, and after taking so much bullshit I totally buy that he decided to act that way with Marie, claiming her as his own. So, I personally like the fact this is not like the 98% of stories out there showing a caring perfect Logan but show us something else.

Ok about this chapter…I loved it!!! You write soooo well you make of this a masterpiece. I truly like the dynamic between them, they are starting to feel at ease with each other (under Logan’s strict rules, of course) and it amuses me how Marie is agreeing with everything Logan says. I loved when she was scared that something could happen to him in the fight circuit, that was cute. I also like that he treats her in a sweet way but at the same time he’s harsh and pretty much a prick; “And darlin, I am going to fuck you as many ways as I want, however many times as I want. And you, my sweet tasty girl, are going to come as many times as I let you.” I would be scared to death if a guy like that said that to me lol, but the fact Marie enjoys their sexual encounters even after that, and also asks about that statement makes their relationship more complex and exiting. She really needs Logan and she’s willing to please him in exchange for his affection and protection and now it seems she’s kinda falling for him, the whole concept is great!

Oh I must make a mention to the smut part, simply HOT! You describe everything so well with a perfect pacing, superb!

Please pleeeease I beg you update soon!!!! Thanks :)

Author's Response: Annie - Oh my goodness thank you so much for your feedback. I am really flattered that you like this Logan. They have so much still to learn about each other still it is going to be interesting to see exactly where their feelings end up. (I actually haven\'t decided yet.)

i was gladly surprised to see an update of this hot story. It was a very nice chapter though I dont get all the fuss with the toilet and cleaning stuff. I love dominant!Logan hes so caring and hot, and marie likes being his little slave lol hope you update soon

Author's Response: Annie - Thank you for the review. I wanted to make sure to demonstrate to the reader that Logan may not care about Marie as a person at this point in the story, he does care how well she is cared for (by him). Logan has a lot to learn about how to care for a person. ~ Alesia

This is still on my Top 3 rogan fics, please please please you have to update this. I can't take another YEAR without updates

OMG loved it! specially the end

Sorry I deleted one comment by mistake!

The reviewer said she liked the story except for the 'father' part that was a little awkward, and I replied saying that it is awkward indeed, but that I totally see some "daddy issues" around marie...and then I deleted the whole thing by mistake :/

Go psycho Marie go!!! lol I just pictured in my head logans face when he figured out what was going on. Very nice fic!

Loved it!!! You describe the scenes so well, the shower part was simply h-o-t XD!... cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! >hugs< Ya know, I almost apologized in the chapter for the smutty section. I was worried people wouldn\'t like it. :~)

very sweet :)

I must admit I was a little disapointed they didnt share anything but I loved it all the way anyways! Like someone said its nice to read a non rogan fic from time to time. I loved the chemistry between them and the way they were so close