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Three minutes!? Can a girl get an encore? Gotta love his assumptions throughout the entire story, but especially in this chapter: "unexpected? Hot? Best damn time of your life?"
I don't know what this says about me, but I just love your Desperate-Logan, who still manages to keep his badass-ness.
Can't wait for more fics from you! They're always great!
Loved the last two lines! (well the whole thing in general, but the last part was priceless :)
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, and thanks for this review too. hobbits away, hey!
Very interesting. I've come across fics where Logan loses Marie, but a "reunion" or sorts? On Mars no less? Nope, not until this so I'm really excited to see where you take it :)
I really like the premise of this story, but I feel like I missed something here. Why is Victor hanging around Marie & why isn't Logan more concerned about that? In fics there are all kinds of variations how Logan & Victor get along and I'm confused as to what their back story is. I'm looking forward to finding out how this Marie is different than the one Logan knew before though.
Oh mess. I like this. I really like this. Perfect balance of ass kicking & comfort from Logan - I bow at your ability to once again capture him so well. Marie is pretty damn heartbreaking here.
I can't wait to see where you go with this. I think this story is going to be an addiction so consider yourself responsible for keeping me from going through withdrawal...no pressure or anything ;)
Author's Response: I bow at your ability to make me bounce gleefully in my chair. And I promise, I\'m a total fanaddict enabler-you\'ll get the next chapter soon.
I am love, love, loving your descriptions.
Once again you're still doing a great job of balancing Logan here: his unwavering care of Marie & his ahem... extracurricular activities.
Author's Response: I am love, love, loving your reviews.
I feel like this was a transition chapter. A necessary one at that. Don't be so hard on yourself either! While we're all practically foaming at the mouth for updates don't forget that you should enjoy writing too. No more nightmares - only inappropriate Logan dreams from now on ;)
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you very much. I think everyone gets iffy on transition chapters. And I do love writing, even when I\'m struggling through it. Its just so dang fun! :)
This is so heartbreaking! Poor, poor Marie. What's up w/ the prof? I'm not entirely sure what kind of mind juju he did on Marie, but I don't like it.
Your description of Jean and the way she carries herself was perfect, but then again I also think that Jean needs to be pushed off of the Blackbird so I'm a little biased. Just sayin'...
Author's Response: Lol, thank you. I think we all wanna see her pushed out of a plane. >sigh< Someday....
My poor heartstrings. You should see what you've done to them.
There were so many things I just loved about this. Logan's calm rage, finally learning her name, the "Go" scene (killed me by the way).
I wish my vocabulary was advanced enough to tell you how much I love this without sounding like a broken record. I'm gonna go ahead & nap on it. Thanks for having this posted so soon!
Author's Response: Lol. Trust me, you could absolutely NEVER sound like a broken records. I\'m so greedy when it comes to reviews. And I\'m always worried my reply doesnt show gratitude sufficiently. Thank you!!!.....Oh, and I\'m very glad u liked the Go scene, and his talk with Jean. I was worried about those.
Ahhhhh!!! That is the sound I make when my brain explodes. This was so good! The buildup of Logan's frustrations was perfectly executed & believable. You also must be a psychic because when thinking about this story I thought, hmm wouldn't 'Ro's garden be a perfect place for Marie's rehab?
Cliffhanger though? Cruel! Please rectify by making Xavier get his just desserts, Marie getting better, and an abundance of kittens just for good measure.
Author's Response: Not to sound creepy, but I\'m so glad I could make your brain explode. Rofl. And of course I\'m a psychic. Don\'t you know: repeated exposure to Hugh Jackman\'s bare chest is the same as radiation. Don\'t worry, I\'m sure you\'ll get your superhero powers any day now. Just go watch Wolverine......Thank you so much as always, and I\'ll see what I can do about the kittens.
Yay! You made my day. I love coming home from a tough day at work to a new chapter of a story that I'm obsessed with. Just when I think you've exhausted the levels of human depravity you come up with people putting a girl in a storage compartment of a vehicle after everything else that was done to her.
I completely agree with you in regards to Hugh Jackman's bare chest. I'm pretty sure exposure to it cures just about anything actually. It's just science.
In conclusion, loved this. It was kind of light on the kittens though...
Author's Response: The idea that I could make anyone\'s day makes mine. I could dance with the thought of someone being obsessed with my writing. Gracias....and of course it\'s science. You can find that in any medical book...but you gotta look very, very close. Bruce Banner didn\'t turn into the Hulk by a machine. He watched Kate&Leopold. P.S. I\'m workin\' on the kittens.
Wow. Once again I don't have words that match how well you've written this. I don't think this could've ended any better - it truly fit & was perfect. Perfectly sweet, perfectly tender, perfectly complete. If I tried to list all of my favorite parts from this I'd end up just pasting the entire chapter, but I have to say the hot chocolate for dinner part is at the top of the list. Better than the kittens.
I really enjoyed this entire story and I absolutely cannot wait for whatever you come up with next (after a well deserved break of course. *throws confetti for you*). It doesn't seem like it was easy to write, but thank you for sharing it with us!
Author's Response: Oh jesus. Thank you!!!!.....And I did mention kittens, actually. Just for you. ;~) >hugs< I\'ve got my next fic lined up; I\'ll probably start on it tomorrow.
I always love your stories. You find the right blend of drama, humor, and in this case smutiness (let's pretend that's an actual word). I really like the premise of this & I'm interested to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Thanks! *blushes furiously* And I have no trouble believing \'smutiness\' is a word, even if Spell Check doesn\'t think so. This will go down some dark and ugly paths, but they will eventually lead to an ending I think any anti-Jean reader will appreciate. --Wendie
Man oh man. The way this is progressing reminds me of my favorite show Lost: it's addictive, has some serious WTF moments, and even though it teases you with some answers to long-lingering questions, at the end of it all you're still drooling to know more.
Are we not supposed to know what exactly Jean did to hurt Rogue yet and why?
And I've said it before, but I'll say it again: Jean seriously needs to be thrown off of the Blackbird...over a minefield...in a thunderstorm...
I hope you're plan for her "suffering" is as satisfying.
Author's Response: Man oh man, right back at ya! Lost? Really? Wow! Even though I\'ve never seen the show, I know how popular (read: addictive) it is. I\'m tickled positively pink that my story is in such good company! As for what exactly Jean did to hurt Rogue, next chapter should answer that question, assuming all goes according to plan with the writing and none of the characters give me any trouble. I like your ideas about a fitting fate for Jean and I promise the \'suffering\' will be positively Biblical. --Wendie
I cheated. I read this chapter on another site because I needed the fix while the gremlins were screwing around here. Hmm...let me read back the last part of that sentence & dissect the disfunction there.
Anyway, you make me hate Jean more than I thought was possible. Throwing her out of a plane is too nice. She's so seemingly perfect that even the splatter she'd make on the ground would be flawless. Comeuppance, I say!! Where's her comeuppance!!
*starts rioting*
Author's Response: *sends in the riot squad, complete with large dogs that only answer to German commands* Stay calm! Justice will be served, I swear! But before we pop the top on that can of adamantium-flavored whoop-ass, we need to see just what havoc she wreaked to deserve her punishment...I\'m hoping to post the next chapter by the middle of next week if not sooner. Btw, I really appreciate you tracking this down on FF. I\'ve done the very same thing with Comic-cake\'s latest story, but like you, I saved my review until I read it here. Thanks again! --Wendie
"...she felt a needle tear into her neck, dosing her with something that felt like the seventies." Hah! Seriously laughed out loud at this. Thank God I'm not in a public place :)
Well if she's earning her way to Hell at least she's traveling first class ;p
"Holy baby Jesus" is right. What's the cure for a mid-Atlantic heatwave? It's not this! Yeah, I had to crank up the air conditioning. My electric bill thanks you. I loved that this was more than 'gruntin' & ruttin' (which is also quite fine I assure you). Whatever feral feelings Marie absorbed weren't shown to be so much primal *need* as it was primal *tenderness*...if that makes sense, which was nice to see and written well.
Can't these two catch a break with privacy! *Shakes fist at the fates in your universe*
Oh these two. Will they ever catch a break? I love their interaction here. The tension is so tangible. Loved it...well, I didn't, but...I did...well, I'm sure you get the idea.
I forgot to review the last chapter :( I'm very lucky I still benefit from your updates.
*bows down to you & your awesome dialogue*
One question: Why does Marie get the case of the lusties after she absorbs Daken? I didn't quite catch the reasoning behind that a few chapters back either.
P.S. I agree with Moviemom from last chapter. This entire thing is so epic. I've never read anything by anyone who can write legit action so well :)
Oh mess. I'm conflicted. Not about your writing - that's always superb. I don't know how I feel about what Logan did. I don't want him to easily be forgiven for it, but it kinda makes sense (Exhibit #55642 of how your writing rocks right there). Did you plan it this way all along? Very interesting.
"Knocking him onto his back and then placing a single high-heeled boot to his chest." Your Rogue *would* rock those shoes while kicking ass.
I'm incredibly satisfied that Callum got his ass handed to him. Like, hot chocolate & a nap on a cold, rainy day satisfied. Hells yes.
Still holding you to the promise of smutty Rogan goodness.
So Daken can play with peoples' hormones? So did Daken intentionally give Marie the case of the lusties a few chapters back to distract her & Logan? If he can do this, why wouldn't he have had Marie get a case of the ragies against Logan?
Oh who knows. Only you do & you keep us in suspense, madame.
Where were you when they were pissing all over the script of....er...I mean "writing" the script of X3? You could have shown them a thing or two...or seven.
"...like he was afraid the word would bite him" I liked this. Not sure why, but I just really did.
"Rocking her in the only arms that had ever been strong enough to hold her..." Ohhhhhh Emmmm Geeee. How spectacularly dead on is that sentence? Seriously. If that doesn't sum up Logan and Marie in any & all facets then I don't know what does.
My question in the last review was totally answered. This grasshopper has learned.
Also, was very glad to see the word "ragies" used. Awesome sauce :D
You're one of the authors I'm coming out of hiding for. I just had to peek out from my blanket mountain to give you cookies for this.
"...she really didn’t know whether she wanted to kiss that man or beat him to death with one of his own cigars." That's a hell of an anti-smoking campaign waiting to happen. I like this and I can't believe I haven't read a threat of death by cigar-beating before :p
"He had to much of a hold on her. And wasn’t that just the perfect fucking metaphor for their relationship?" Too True! But would we have it any other way? NOPE..okay, maybe with less of Logan & his head being up his assage
Cream of the Crop: " You’re balls-to-bones deeper in me than anything those fuckers from the government ever messed with. Deeper in me than adamantium, deeper than the fucking claws under my skin.”" This was just...yeah. It just *was*. I always love your witty dialogue, but this shows that you've got a firm grasp on the characters voices when shit gets real.
Have fun writing Rogan smexiness! Will be hibernating in blanket mountain - Logan-less :( - until then
Tease! Tease!
I'd be put out if I wasn't so sure that you'd eventually deliver the goods. You're right though - this does feel necessary. While I like some good ol' fashioned Rogan smut like the next WRFAer, sometimes you've got to put it on the backburner until you get the characters' heads out of their asses.
I'm glad you followed your Marie-muse - she *did* have a point.
So.....uh....not to sound like a pervert or anything, but uh...can we get that smut now?