Hey Wendie! Well, you've definitely got my attention with this one, and you know I'm not one to ignore a challenge! I've already got one or two ideas running around in my head, so I'll shake them up and see what comes out!
Incidentally, I love your first offering! Very hot and with a quirky strangeness, to boot!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am so glad you liked this and are excited about taking up the challenge. I\'d love to have your \'head/idea shaker\', if \'Rock\' is any indication of the stuff that rolls around in there! --Wendie

Loving this! Please continue!

Excellent chapter - and so hot and spicy! More sexual tension than an episode of True Blood! (Can I say that on here?!) Please continue soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review...and ah yes, the sexual tension. Isn\'t what this story\'s all about? ;)

God, I just love this story! So beautifully written and full of emotion! I am so glad Logan didn't give in to Jean - she's such a cold-hearted bitch!
Please, please continue - my life is bereft without this story!

Author's Response: Lol! >screams happily at computer< I think thats one of the most awesome things I\'ve ever been told. You made my day. Thanks.

Wow! A story with two halves! First half - intense, shocking and incredibly strong. Poor Logan - I really felt for him. Second half - sweet, touching and sexually powerful. Logan in love makes for one of the best story-lines! I am so loving this story - please continue!

Author's Response: I know. As you can see from the first chapter, each chapter is supposed to have two halves. But I would have been bleeding out my eyes if I had tried to type up the previous segments together-they were just too long. But anyhoo, thank you so, so much for this. >hugs, gives cupcake with white chocolate & sprinkles<

Wonderful story! So beautifully written and full of emotion. I'm so sorry it's complete because I would love to read more. How about a sequel? Or a continuation?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you enjoyed it as much as you did. I said above that I\'ll give it some thought. I hadn\'t really planned on anything else being added, but if I can come up with a decent enough storyline, it won\'t be a chore to write it out.

I could kick myself that I didn't leave a review for the last chapter - I meant to, but I guess I got distracted. Anyway, better late than never!
Y'know, this story is beginning to remind me of a recent series from the Wolverine comic, in which Logan, hiding out in a shabby tenement, meets a young girl - (not Rogue, I hasten to add.) She calls him 'Mean Man' and a kind of grudging respect develops between them, but when she's murdered Logan sets off to avenge her, spreading blood and mayhem across the country. Please don't kill Rogue off in your story, because I'm beginning to like her!
Chapter four - awesome as always! Looking forward to finding out why Marie was missing from her usual place on the step!

Author's Response: Really? Wow. Whats the name of that? Ive never read the comics (certainly not that one;Im no copycat!) but lately Ive had the urge to try them. Especially the ones where on the cover you can squint and pretend he\'s Hugh Jackman...Mmmh...Hugh...Anyway, thank you!!!! >hugs<

Another powerful chapter. Too many writers try to skirt away from what Logan does best - he's a killer through and through, however reluctantly he does it - but you have captured this side of him perfectly without being too melodramatic or over the top.
I am loving this story! Hope you continue soon.

Author's Response: Oh, dear lord thank you! I was worried that people would not like the gorier parts of this. Your review helped me finish the scene I was struggling with; thanks to you the third chapter will be up tomorrow. >hugs< Thankyouthankyouthankyou!

I must have been holding my breath through most of this chapter because when I finished reading I let it all out in a rush. That was a seriously awesome chapter - such a terrible thing has been done to Marie and yet you handled the situation with such tenderness. You have never written Logan better than in this chapter - honestly you should be proud of yourself.
And yes, I'll take the offer of the naked Hugh Jackman! Forget the puppy and candy though - I've got cats and a too-fat husband!!

Author's Response: >wild screaming & jumping up and down< Thank you. This was wonderful to hear. Your Hugh is on his way.

Another awesome chapter, beautifully written and so full of agony for the pair of them that I just want to cry myself to sleep. But wait, what's this? Oh, she's gone into his room! And wow, she actually trusts him enough to lie beside him in bed. I am now so full of hope that I just cannot wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!!

Author's Response: Not quite fineshed agony-wise just yet. Hang tight, and thank you a billion times for this.

I tend to alternate between reviewing your story here and on the other site you write for - (no particular reason, it just depends where I happen to be when your notification comes in!) - but my adoration for your story never wanes. I love this chapter - your description of the city towards the end is especially poignant and I love Logan's thoughts about fainting. He's dropped by one of the most powerful mutants on the planet and he considers it 'fainting'! Bless him!!
And now I presume he's off home to Xavier's? Looking forward to the rest of the team meeting 'his girl'!!

Author's Response: I\'m ubberly grateful for it, on both sites (though the WRFA is my favorite; it never screws up my format). Thank you very much. I\'m always excited to hear from you.

Well, I never expected to see Erik in the last scene! Kudos to you for taking me by surprise!
You say you like lines to be quoted back to you? Well, my favourite in this chapter is something so simple that it probably hasn't occurred to anyone else, but which I absolutely loved - "The glass was so shimmery with moisture that it appeared as water that had merely decided to stand up." So descriptive!! How the heck do you do it?!!
Loved this latest chapter as always - intrigued by Erik's involvement in the school and looking forward to finding out how Marie fits in! Keep going!!

Author's Response: Am so, so happy you feel that way. >does Happy Dance-cross between Irish jig and Oompa Loompa theme< >hugs< You\'re wonderful.

Well, you've definitely got my interest piqued with this first chapter - looking forward to reading more!