Powerful. I think that word sums up this story in one nice neat little package. The last chapter was the most powerful of them all. I love how both Marie/Rogue and Logan/Wolverine came to an understanding and acceptance of their individual natures and alternate personalities, while still staying true to the characters we know and love.

Your talent is apparent in every chapter and I applaud this work. 10 stars! 20 stars! And while I would love to see this story continue, I feel you ended it at a perfect place. Kudos to an awesome story.

"The entire group looked at her like she’d just beheaded a puppy."

That line is priceless! Definitely one of my new favorite all times lines from a story. This story has been great, compelling with just enough conflict and angst to keep it moving. Great job!

Author's Response: I am SOOOO glad somebody mentioned that line in particular. I don\'t often crack myself up when I\'m writing, but I have to confess to chuckling over that one several times. Sometimes I wonder where such thoughts come from, but I refuse to look a gift muse in the mouth. I\'ll take them any way I can get them. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story so far. Chapter 6 should be up in a few days. Here\'s hoping it\'s just as entertaining.--Wendie

This definitely has a lot of potential! Keep it going!

I love it, but have one tiny little suggestion - format the paragraphs. Even just putting a full space between one and the next would make this fabulous story even easier to read.

Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review. i finally managed to fix the spacing, had to learn how to save something in the HTLM-whatever format. hope it looks better now and glad you enjoyed it!