This is quite simply wonderful! I'm so glad I came across it. “My name's Rogue,” a very powerful line, given the circumstances. The whole of the final section, the Logan / Rogue relationship description, was brilliantly written. I can't wait for more...

Author's Response: Thanks^_^ There probably won\'t be a sequel though, if that\'s what you\'re hinting at. Sorry.

Yes. Yes I do. I’m eagerly awaiting…! x

You've amazingly portrayed a whole series of images and scenes in so few words - very well done! Not to mention hot. x

A great little dialogue piece that has given me a much needed rest-bite during a crazy hectic day in the office. Yeah! Now here comes the boss (not the Springsteen sort, the real sort), so back to work for me...! x

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad I could liven up your day for a few minutes anyway. And if all bosses were the Springsteen sort, I\'d have a job and no time to write fan fiction! Thank God there\'s only one! --Wendie

"Disgust. I'm going with disgust." - me too!

Wow - I think chapter one was brilliant! So much emotion in so few words. As for where to go next...I think a fight would be the natural occurance here, but then (as already suggested by Wendie), let's have the speech too. Why not, eh? I can't wait to hear everyone's thoughts on this situation...

LOVED this. It’s so full of energy! I can’t wait for that ‘conversation’. xx

Author's Response: yeh, well there\'s not a lot of \"talking\" heh heh.

I really felt the angst of Rogue in this story and it was simply lovely how you portrayed Logan’s unwavering love for her, without getting soppy. Great stuff!

Also, “Why did Logan have to be so damn handsome?” – Gooooood question! xx

Good stuff, I especially like your writing through Logan's POV. Plus - 'Icehole' and 'Slushy' - hahaha! x

I find Magneto such a fascinating character so I instantly knew I had to read this. It’s such an interesting little piece, something a little different from the ‘norm’ too. Personally, I love it. x

Author's Response: Thank you:)

HAHAHAHAHA! Very cute! x

I like the atmosphere you set, especially when Genna came face-to-face with Logan. The way you describe him looking her up and down and how uncomfortable it made her feel - “His expression was filled with contempt, like she was the worthless one.” – was great!

I’d love to read the same scene written through Logan’s POV? x

Author's Response: First, I would like to thank everyone who has reviewed. You have no idea how ecstatic it made me. When I saw them, I did a Happy Dance-not an easy thing, as I was sitting down at the time. It probably looked like I was having a siezure. \r\n Thank you for the wonderful constructive criticism. I contemplated each one seriously. I know there were a few...what\'s the word?...uncertainties concerning the motivations behind other characters, and that was on purpose. I wanted to restrict the POV to the nurse\'s character, instead of the all-knowing third person.\r\n....I hadn\'t considered writing a sequel, or the story from another POV, but now that sounds kinda interesting...I can\'t get the idea out of my head.\r\nSo-hope you don\'t mind my rambling, once again: thankyouthankyouthankyou!

Love this! I am a huge fan of Magneto, he is layered with history and you demonstrate (in so few words) that there is so much more to him than the typical ‘bad guy’.

Great line - "He wanted to have faith in humans, but sometimes found it hard to have faith even in mutants."

Very well done! x

Author's Response: He really is interesting thats for sure. I loved the scene with him and Rogue on the boat it was almost like he was talking to his granddaughter yet he\'s talking about why he\'s going to kill her. He\'s also very charming theres something about him I can\'t help but like.