I never considered Logan’s reaction to really strong scents – great little idea! And now you have me thinking that I absolutely have to contribute to this challenge. And sooner rather than later! ‘Real life’ may have to wait whilst I write something ‘chair-related’….! :-)

Wow – I loved this! Such an intense and intimate scene between the two of them I found myself holding my breath as I read.

“It had taken Hank, Kurt, Storm, Colossus and Warren to pull him off the bastard.” – What an image this portrays of one furious Wolverine!

“He wasn’t sure whether he wanted the moment that came after This Moment to arrive just yet,” – great line.

As suggested by Moviemom I’d love to see this continue…please? xx

P.S. I can’t offer any advice on the ‘technicals’ of the round robin posting, given I managed to stuff it up royally! :-)

This just gets better and better (and hotter and hotter!).

“He hissed in pain and pleasure then- His favourite fucking combo.” – hahaha!

“He’d gut someone else fer doing this to her.” - brilliant line.

I will definitely keep tuning into this most entertaining of Rogan channels…! xx

Perfect.

“Because Jesus, he’d never realised how predatory she could look before now.”

Logan didn’t often think it, but falling back suddenly seemed like a real good idea - Or as a non-military man mighta put it, running away.” – haha!

Absolutely f-ing perfect. x

Author's Response: i know it\'s late, but thanks for this review. the above was probably MY favourite moment in the story, so it\'s nice to now you liked it too. thanks again and hobbits away, hey!

Your Logan is so bad (in a good way, I mean) I just can’t help but LOVE this story!

"Bunny? The fuck...?" Haha!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! And I agree, when Logan is bad, he\'s just so so good ;)

You portrayed the change in Logan brilliantly as he finds his conscience and...dare I say it...maybe starts to fall in love? And I’m so glad he rejected Jean because I can’t help but dislike her in this story (poor Jeannie, she does get a rough ride on this website!!) . Great update, nice and long. x

Author's Response: Whew, I wasn\'t sure at first how I was gonna nail this one, but it ended up being one of those rare scenes that came out EXACTLY as I imagined it. And yeah, it\'s a long one, which is why it took me forEVER to write. I wanted to give an uninterrupted, real-time feel to the stuff happening here, because it\'s so important for the characters\' development. ;) Thanks for the review!

This pulled at my heartstrings. The way you describe them wanting each other is so passionate, and yet now she’s alone and her need for him to return is desperate. You must continue this. *fav* x

Oh, I love this story and I’m so glad I’ve finally been able to catch up with it. The end of chapter three was brilliant and in chapter four, Logan’s first words when he saw Draven – “You have got to be shitting me.” – is so perfectly Logan – haha! I can’t wait to see how he deals with his ‘mini-me’ and what happens when he’s faced with the wrath of the Rogue... x

Yay - a very amusing and enjoyable chapter. I wonder if Rogue will be as forgiving as Draven?

"Well I'll be damned. The kid has the most adorable pout... I'm almost tempted to give him a cookie..." - LOL

Okay, so you know how much I love 'Overlap' and 'Heal Over', right? So I needed cheering up this afternoon and I noticed there's a story of yours I'd not read (how I missed it I have no idea!). Honestly, I have so much to do today, but I couldn't tear myself away from this once I'd started. Put simply, it's another brilliant piece of writing. You can imagine I have so many lines I want to quote, but it might freak you out if I copy and paste your entire story here in this review, so I've picked out a few:

"Baby-sitter," I repeat, baffled at the depth of poor judgement those words imply. - ha ha ha!

It's wonderful how expressive Cyke's face can be, even with his eyes covered. I bet he's just itching to take off those glasses, just for a moment. I wonder if I could take it. - great line, made me grin stupidly at the laptop (hubby thinks I've gone insane...maybe I have?)

I kiss the top of her head and tell Marie the truth, the only thing that comes to my mind. "I think you're perfect, Kid." - awwww - so sweet!

In the afternoon I spend a few hours in the garage, go for a ride on the bike, or watch football in the lounge. Economically, any of the previously mentioned activities can be done while pissing off Scott. - I always love a bit of Logan's Scott-bashing and you do it perfectly!

Ain't it strange, when your claws just pop out, without you meaning to? Well, I suppose you wouldn't know. - hahahaha!

Apparently you shouldn't tie a student to the wing of the Blackbird and threaten castration. Iceboy's a little squealer. - love it!

I adore the ending of chapter eight - "I want you," I whisper, just in case she need clarification.

Chapter nine is hot - "I swear, if she backs out now I will die-healing factor or no." - Anyway, has someone turned the temperature up in my house??

Xavier bites off each carefully-scripted declaration, as if struggling to contain himself. - love this description.

Phew! Right, I'll get back to real life now and stop stalking you... :-)

Author's Response: What a great surprise! Thank you so so so much.I love getting reviews for older fics; its like finding Christmas presents when you didnt know it was winter. Believe me, if this is how you do it, please stalk away. (Huh. Dont find myself saying that alot.) Im glad you liked it....I dont know why Im so mean to Scott. I actually like the guy! If it werent for Logan, Id have a crush on him(but then I wouldnt have seen xmen fifty times)....its just so fun! Thanks again, and Merry Christmas! :~)

Oh my fucking God…sorry about the language but that was truly great!

“He didn't retort. Didn't move. Just looked at her, hard and hungry. He was so damn good at it, it was practically one of his mutant powers.”

This is so perfect. Damn, I love it! x

I liked it - good work!

"As she passed him, he leapt out and hauled her back into the dark with him." - fav line. x