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I have been waiting and waiting for an update to this story. I'm starting to fear it will never happen, which makes me sad. It's such a good fic - great plot idea, and you're handling it so well. I hope you still plan on continuing, and soon!
I really, really love this story - I loved the plot from the get-go, but now that you are developing the subplot of how the serum is affecting Logan - I find myself fascinated. Will he be feral permanently? I cannot wait to see what happens, please update as soon as you're able!
Okay, funny story. My husband was watching I am Legend while I was reading this - I had my eyes on this story because, well - I hate scary movies. That's not the point though - the point is, when I got to this chapter, it was the 'epic battle' portion of the movie playing in the background with the inspirational swelling soundtrack music. It was crazy - I was reading (and re-reading) parts of this chapter, and I could *see* it happening in my head, and it was all slomo and kick ass - I have never read a fic quite like this one. Your use of language is gorgous. It really made me feel, and feel like I was there - and even at the end, I sort of expected Logan and Marie to make it out, or for Logan to jump up and kick ass. I love that he didn't though, and you chose to tie it all up in an epilogue. It just felt very noir - and I really, really, REALLY loved it. And I felt like I should take the time to tell you that. Fantastic.
You made me register, just so I could get updates e-mailed to me when you update. I adore, adore, adore this story. I cannot wait to see where you are taking us, thanks so much!
Author's Response: lol, good! Welcome to the club :) You are welcome so much, thank you for letting me drag you around through a very boringly decorated military base.
Oh em gee, I am loving and adoring this story! I cannot wait to see what happens. Literally. I CANNOT WAIT. Please update soon - please, please, please? It just left off in such an evil spot, haha. I really adore the whole plot and I love your take on rogue's mutation. It's something I've never seen done before - which, considering how much fic is in this fandom, is a treat.
More. OMG more. This is an amazing idea. I cannot wait to see what happens!!
I just re-read this for what is, I am sure, the billionth time. I love this story so much. I love this Rogue so much. I don't know if you're still working on it or not, but if you are, please, please, please go as fast as you can. This is just too damn good to make me wait this long between updates.
Loving this so far. God, I love AU's with such a passion. I cannot wait to see what happens!
P.S. Also, if you need a beta, I can probably help you out - I've been writing and beta-ing for about four years now. I've never done anything for X-men, but I'm pretty sure I could handle it. I cans end you a link to my stuff I've written and betaed if you'd like - just let me know!
Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thats would be great, thank you. my email is sharonmarkjake@tiscali.co.uk. get in touch if you still wouldn\'t mind doing a bit of beta work for me.
I am loving how you are writing the Logan/Jubilee side of things. I find a lot of people try to sort make Jubilee clingy and whatnot when they use that little piece of comic canon, and it never sits right with me. Jubes is kick-ass - she should always be that way, haha. I love how Logan's thoughts don't really dwell on Marie, but seem to keep circling back there. It was subtle, and really effective. I can't wait to see what happens - there's so many possibilities! Does Marie end up at Xavier's? Do we have to wait for Logan to go back to Canada? I'm dying to find out! Well, okay, not dying in the literal sense - but absolutely in the figurative one, haha!
I cannot wait for Loagn to find out about Marie and vice verse. I always love stories where they draw out them discovering each other's mutations - it's nice to know that human or mutant, they still connect. And I still love that fight scene, Logan should kick ass more often!
I love this series - and I hope you continue it soon. I cannot wait to see the rest of your take on X1!
Oh my goodness more please! I started off, and totally thought three chapters in that with thirteen left, I'd probably get to the wedding and the sexings - but no. You're an evil (incredibly awesome) writer and you're dragging it out like slow (awesome) torture. I find myself knowing just how Logan feels, haha. So more soon please - and since this is the second story I've come across of yours that I've absolutely adored, I'm gonna go see if you have any more. Please, please have more.
I love this! Au's are so damn delicious, haha - and cowboy!Logan is awesome to read about. Can't wait to see what happens. More soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! It makes my day. And seriously, who wouldn\'t love cowboy Logan? The next chapter will be up very soon!
Damn, I love this story. *grins* I am so glad he didn't take advantage of her. I pretty much loved every bit of this chapter - from beginning to end. I loved the bantered dialog at the end too - it ended for me with a smile - a great pick-me-up. More as soon as sanely possible, please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you love the story because I really love writing it! The dialogue is my favorite part to write. I read angst but don\'t really like to write it so you can bet on lots of happiness in my story even if it sometimes takes a while to get there.
I so adore your Jubilee/Marie scenes. They make me smile. Loved this bit! Can't wait for more! And heck yes you're on my favorites list. In fact, everytime I get an alert I hope it's this story - so that makes you the favorite of my fvorites, haha.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing Jubilee so much. And wow, the favorite of your favorites? That really makes my day! LOL Have a great weekend!
Oh yes - totally worth the wait, haha. I hope your husband feels better. Update, update, update! I want Logan to take her to the doctor's and meet Warren hahaha.
Author's Response: Oh you do, huh? That could be a definite possibility! Glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!!
Okay firstly - I love, love love and adore that you are contnuing on Kristine's story. It's one of my favs, and I love the idea of a darker Logan. Loving it - and cannot wait to see more.
Only concrit is that you need to watch for typos - your grammer and flow are great, but I noticed a few times you'd use 'ascent' instead of 'assent', or 'beat' when you needed 'beet', stuff like that - spellcheck doesn't pick up on. So keep an eye out for them. If you need someone else to look it over besides your beta - I've betaed a bit for W/R stories and a lot on others, let me know!
Can't wat for the next part - so going on my favorites, haha.
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. I have gone back through the entire story and looked for the flipped words as I call them. Hopefully I have gotten them all. If you are still up for a quick beta check I am shooting to have chapter 5 up but the end of the month is you have time and are still interested please drop me a note. I would love the help.
I'm reading this for the first time, and I am really loving it. I am a sucker for 'Rogue defects from the Brotherhood' stories, and I like where this one is going. Plus it's still being updated, which is nice - because usually the stories I really like are abandoned. I go through fits and starts with W/R fan fic, lol - so I am shocked that I remembered my login information for here in order to leave this review - but I wanted to tell you home much I was enjoying it. I hope you'll update soon :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Rogue defecting has always interested me - even though she doesn\'t quite \"defect\" in this one. She\'s not pro-Brotherhood like the original comics-Rogue. I\'ll try & keep with the updates, honest. Working through writer\'s block, but I\'ve got some ideas stored up to hopefully get everyone through. I hope to see you around these review-parts again!