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Date: 12/13/2010 5:11:12 AM Title: The Beer
(slack-jawed...catching flies passing by...)I hate to pressure authors, but you know you can't leave me like *that*, right?
Amazing job! Can I start a fan club?
Author's Response: I'm working on the next part. It's funny, I didn't set out to make these cliffhangers. The first time I just wanted to get Logan coherent, because I had been promising that for a while. For this one I just wanted to get to a point where the next chapter title would make sense. :-) Since I picked the title of the fic in about two seconds and picked something really literal, now I'm set on all the chapter titles being a noun that sums up the chapter. We'll see if I can keep that going.
Date: 12/13/2010 4:42:20 AM Title: The Beer
We always expect it...It just still makes us cry. Great emotions and insights in this chapter. It was great.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2010 1:22:17 AM Title: The Beer
Again with the the evil cliffhanger! This time I was actually tempted to pick up and look under my netbook for the rest of this story, because I had hoped you've not ended it right there. But the evil cliffhanger strikes again. BTW, you're doing fine with "this" Logan's voice, love the fact his first clear minded thought of "food" would be beer. More please.
Author's Response: Ha! If you find any good plot points under your netbook, please let me know. :-) I have a vague idea of the road ahead, but it's definitely not as clear in mind as this first part was. Glad you like Logan's "voice."
Date: 12/12/2010 10:55:13 PM Title: The Prisoner
Oops -- sorry shuttlelauncher, I meant to delete my response and write a new one, but instead I deleted your review. My bad. And all for a lame joke about how instead of my updates being early Christmas presents I'm on the Hanukkah schedule, because at the rate I'm going I'll probably have posted 8 in a week's time... ;-)
Date: 12/12/2010 8:17:34 PM Title: The Fever
oh... this is really good. really really good.
can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much for reviewing each chapter. I had never meant to write so much so fast, but you guys are definitely motivating!
Date: 12/12/2010 2:41:34 PM Title: The Fever
I love this story. I really enjoyed that you went into depth over what is wrong with Logan instead of just brushing it off as "some meds" and having him be perfectly fine after a little bit. More please.
Also, early morning/late night updates are the best. Then people get to wake up to a great surprise.
Author's Response: Yay! So glad you didn't find it too "talky." Not sure if I'll get this next update out by tonight, but I'm trying...
Date: 12/12/2010 2:02:55 PM Title: The Fever
awww that was such a sweet tender moment. The ending was perfect for this chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2010 12:20:25 PM Title: The Fever
Nah, no "blah" here. It was a good explanation, and more than most ppl bother writing or thinking out. I think I'm as disappointed in Rogue, tho, @ his miraculously quick recovery! ;0)
Author's Response: Yeah, I have to admit I'm a little disappointed too, I was getting to like this Logan. Plus I have to figure out how to write the coherent one. But, just think of it this way, it didn't seem right to have Marie jump him when he was only half there, so Coherent!Logan dramatically increases the smut potential...
Date: 12/12/2010 10:13:01 AM Title: The Fever
....his healing factor. (I blame my husband for making me accidentally hit the "submit" button! LOL) I hope I'll see another 1am update tonight! ;)
Author's Response: Well, it's only 11 p.m. right now, so you may get your wish. :-)
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2010 10:06:04 AM Title: The Fever
Ahh! You just had to stop there! Grrr. More please. BTW, love Hank.
Author's Response: Glad you like Hank. He and Jubilee were both characters I didn't know much about a month ago, and know from all the fanfics they are getting to be two of my favorites. Don't worry about the stopping point, I'm working hard to pick up where I left off. I had just been promising for a couple of chapters that Logan would finally get his brain back, so I figured I'd sneak it in at the end so as not to make a liar out of me. :-)
Date: 12/12/2010 10:04:24 AM Title: The Fever
Okay, this should tell you how addicted I am to your story; I woke up this morning hoping to see that you made another 1am update even though you already posted 2 chapters yesterday!!
I'm really loving this story! I like seeing Marie caring for him, both physically and emotionally. I like how they are both so intensely drawn to each other. The Dream chapter was so heartbreaking and sweet. I'm interested to see how Logan and Marie will be now that his body/mind have seemingly been repaired by
Author's Response: Aw, as long as we're both addicted together, it's not so weird, right? I'm so glad you're liking it so far. I'm also interested to see how it works now that Logan is better. I was having such an easy time writing Feral!Logan I wasn't sure if I could handle it once he started talking. I think it's going okay so far though, but you can tell me when I update next. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2010 2:29:28 AM Title: The Dream
These four chapters have made a believer out of me. I've added you to my favorite author's list. Well done! Good grammar and punctuation, spelling, etc., and good, gripping storyline. All these little details that make an enjoyable story. I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Wow, I made someone's "list"! That's very exciting. Glad to know I'm not the only grammar/spelling freak on here too. ;-)
Date: 12/11/2010 10:10:29 PM Title: The Dream
Wow, that was awesome! I adore the way you realistically give us aspects of cause and effect of Logan's time in the Lab on both Logan and Rogue is refreshing and addictive.
I hope to see a new chapter soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it -- thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2010 8:15:14 PM Title: The Dream
Don't worry. I don't mind your addiction! I'm loving your story, so far! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 12/11/2010 6:42:18 PM Title: The Dream
any 2 a.m. updates in store for tonight??
Author's Response: Sorry I missed 2 a.m. last night, but maybe today or tomorrow. :-)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2010 6:41:41 PM Title: The Dream
Well, now you've got me addicted!!
The last chapter was sweet and touching. This is the best chapter by far!! Heart in my throat the whole way thru. So nicely done. Only thing that could improve it is to add in more of Logan's perspective, as I said before.
Just imagining a wounded, lost, remorseful, totally confused and petrified mute Logan trembling and curling up repentantly next to Marie, desperately seeking comfort and forgiveness ... well, that makes me want to cry! That last paragraph really got to me. As did Marie's dream ... I'm glad you gave her this background in the lab,a nd made her older. This is a neat duo to watch.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it. I'll keep in mind having more of Logan's POV. I really admire authors who can switch fluidly back and forth between points of view, I'm not sure if I'm one of them. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2010 6:37:30 PM Title: The Bath
Hey! with the hints of coming attractions you gave us, I was expecting some gratuitous smut ... SO glad I was wrong!! Would have totally killed the mood you had set up so far. You definitely managed to keep the kick-A tone of 2 damaged people struggling to get thru each hour of "normalcy" ... while fighting the loneliness & deprivation of human affection which Logan at least isn't even aware of needing.
Seeing thru Logan's eyes as he "figures out" forthe very 1st time what masturbation is ... that was well done, in only a couple of short sentences!!
Well-constructed sentences, for sure.
I'd love to see more of Logan's POV though, next chapter.
Author's Response: Hmmm...I thought I responded to this one before, but it's not showing up. I'm glad you liked the only quasi-smut approach I took. It seemed to me like it might come off like a tease, but to me it was more realistic for the characters, and of course doesn't involve Rogue taking advantage of a cognitively-impaired Logan. I guess you know by now that it switched almost entirely to Logan's POV in the next few chapters, not sure if that was your suggestion percolating in my brain or if it would have happened anyway, but thanks!
Date: 12/11/2010 6:13:40 PM Title: The Dream
Okay, so I "might" be addicted...Can't see a problem here!
I'm in love with your story, amazing job!!
Author's Response: Yay! Co-addicts. Sounds good to me!
Date: 12/11/2010 4:54:15 PM Title: The Dream
oh so wonderful updates!!! i was sooooo excited to see 2 new chapters out! still loving the story, can't wait to see what happens next!!
p.s. the bath scene was hot... ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried that people would think Marie (and me) a tease because of the bath scene, but it just made sense to me.
Date: 12/11/2010 4:46:12 PM Title: The Dream
I can't tell you how much I love this story! So beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliment, and for reviewing!
Date: 12/11/2010 3:25:52 PM Title: The Prisoner
"Does Terri have an author name?" **sigh** How the mighty are soon forgotten. Much of Terri's terrific Rogan stories and series are on the old WRFA site...OR you can hie thee hence to her own site ("The Peep Hut"):
http://www.peephut.org/fics.html
Darlin', you are in for a treat!
Author's Response: Oops, sorry I didn't respond earlier. Probably because I was on Terri's site reading all her fics. ;-) Thanks for the recommendation! Didn't mean to insult, I'm new to the site (and X-Men fanfic world) so I didn't know Terri to forget her. I thought all the stories from the old WRFA were in the new one as well. Live and learn!
Date: 12/11/2010 12:21:59 PM Title: The Prisoner
Keep going keep going! I want more! I'm hooked.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And sorry I missed replying to this earlier. :-)
Date: 12/11/2010 12:18:58 PM Title: The Dream
i love this chapter. and i love how even though i was expecting her to have to touch him, a la X-Men 1, she didn't. which was different.
can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2010 11:40:05 AM Title: The Dream
Don't ever feel weird. I'm completely addicted to this story, always checking for updates. Please feel free to update as often and quickly as you want (hint, hint) You've quickly become one of my favorites. Thanks.
Author's Response: That's so awesome! It's definitely very motivating. Thanks for reading, and especially for reviewing!
Date: 12/11/2010 10:20:21 AM Title: The Prisoner
Pleasde please continue. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories to read. Keep the updates comingm I really like where you are going with this!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!