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Date: 01/03/2011 2:53:15 PM Title: The Showdown
Yeah, like you said in your response, Marie is more mature and understands inner demons. I love that about your story. They are both strong and mature enough to understand each and try to work things out. Like in The Drive, he is strong enough to give her some space but also to confront her. I especially liked the line where he asks her try and explain anyway because it's better than what he's guessing she's thinking. And her explanation to him is great. Two mature adults talking it through. The same goes for this chapter. She confronts him with the "did you want to leave me or just think you should" line. And his response to her back is so perfect and sweet. This emotion, maturity and intense connection is fantastic and keeps me avidly reading this story and anxiously waiting for updates!
Author's Response: That's such a compliment, that's exactly what I'm trying to convey. They both have their demons/insecurities/baggage, but they are calling each other on it at different times. It's been especially hard to do that for Logan, since he's not a big talker. I was worried about that part in "The Drive" you mention when he talks about himself, because it's like five sentences in a row for Logan, and I was thinking, "That's too much talking for him!" :-D But I like that he'll do something out of character, like talk about himself, or seek out help from others, if it's to help Marie. It makes me all warm and fuzzy. ;-)
Date: 01/03/2011 2:48:45 PM Title: The Stranger
Well that answers that question. Mm I love his resistance at first, and the way he 'takes care' of her, guh, I melted when she tried to get into his pants, and he just wanted her to enjoy herself... Yummmyyy! And I look forward to his reward!
Author's Response: Oh, for some reason when I'm writing my response to reviews it listed the chapter as "None," so I thought your prior review was about "The Stranger." Glad the yellow eyes thing was more clear in that chapter. I'm glad you liked the way the smut went down...I wasn't sure that readers would buy that Logan could suppress "Wolverine" enough to be okay with that, but that's part of what I thought was so sweet about it. Just like she couldn't take advantage of Feral!Logan in the tub because he wasn't fully in control of himself, he's protecting her when she's not fully in control of herself. What a pair. ;-)
Date: 01/03/2011 2:39:50 PM Title: The Attack
Ohhh I love how he's all protective and worried about her! Mmm yums.
And I'm so glad you appreciate my reviews, the more theyre responded to the more Im encouraged to write them (hint). I love having that communication with the author, its one of the best things about fanfiction!
One thing, are the golden eyes hers or Sabretooths? Im a tad bit confused by that
Author's Response: :-) Yeah, I was worried the story was trending towards Marie bossing Logan around a lot, so I wanted him to have a chance to take care of her for a little while. Plus, the smut potential of Feral!Marie was too good to pass up! Yes, the golden eyes were supposed to signify that she was being "controlled" by Sabretooth. I actually thought his eyes were yellow in the movie, but turns out I was wrong about that, they are kind of a pupil-less black. Oh wells. And I always respond to reviews as soon as I can, but you managed to pick a day I'm off work so I'm being especially prompt (i.e. obsessive)! :-)
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2011 2:22:12 PM Title: The Showdown
Wow! Awesome chapter! Very very hot! Love how Marie confronted Logan and how he broke down and begged her not to leave him. Again Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried that it would seem a little too sudden of a switcharound for Logan, but in my mind he had already realized how much he needed Marie and had f*cked it up in the previous chapter, so he didn't really need much convincing when she showed up to give him a second chance.
Date: 01/03/2011 1:57:25 PM Title: The Showdown
Oh no, another update ALREADY?!? That means I finally have to review *sighs the lazy reader*.
Another great Rogue here, yayy for the strong ladies at last! And yes, deep from my own experience: understanding doesn't equal accepting. Cheers to Marie for understanding that.
And cheers to you for a GREAT stor, good plot, great character writing, and not least good English (much gratified with that... )
Author's Response: Yay for a new reviewer! Yeah, I think Rogue knows Logan is being so obtuse because he really sees himself as "unlovable", but she still wants to smack him upside the head for ditching her. :-) I'm glad you are liking the "strong Rogue." I feel like the chapters kind of flip back and forth between a very gutsy Rogue and a very vulnerable one, but I'm hoping to convey that she's both -- some of it true guts, some of it Rogue-style bravado, and then underneath there's still vulnerable Marie. I think these characters are both so interesting because of their contradictions -- Rogue's mutation has the potential for incredible power and yet she is incredibly vulnerable because of the way it works and how it isolated her from others. And then of course all the contradictions that make up Logan/Wolverine. Okay, this is turning into an essay, I'll stop now. Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/03/2011 1:19:33 PM Title: The Escape
Hahaaa poor Logan! And VERY lucky MARIE..
Author's Response: Yeah, I could do with some snuggles in a sleeping bag with Logan...
Date: 01/03/2011 1:09:32 PM Title: The Beer
Whats happening??? Its so well written! K now im off to read the next chap
Author's Response: Thanks! And seriously, you are awesome for reviewing each chapter.
Date: 01/03/2011 1:00:35 PM Title: The Fever
Yay Logies up!
Author's Response: Yeah, Feral!Logan was fun, but it's time to say hello to Coherent!Logan...
Date: 01/03/2011 12:53:51 PM Title: The Dream
The way they both had nightmares bonds them so much... I wouldnleave more detailed reviews but im so anxious to get to the next chapter I dont, Im sorry.. But its YOUR fault! Lol
Author's Response: Ha, I'm definitely guilty of that -- leaving short or no reviews because I'm too anxious to get to the next chapter of something. Thanks so much for reviewing so faithfully!
Date: 01/03/2011 12:49:54 PM Title: The Bath
Oh my god AMAZING!!! Hehe Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks! I was really unsure how this chapter would go over, I'm glad people didn't think I'm hopelessly pervy. Or at least if I am, it's in a good way. ;-)
Date: 01/03/2011 12:43:18 PM Title: The Lake House
Wow, I love this chapter! I can tell im gonna be saying that a lot
Author's Response: Yay!
Date: 01/03/2011 12:37:18 PM Title: The Prisoner
Yay Storm!!! The lake house should be fun... *grins in anticipation*
Author's Response: Aw, it's so fun watching someone review chapters as they read them! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2011 12:07:33 PM Title: The Showdown
Wonderful smut, the image of Scott ckutching his pearls came this close to having me spew my drink on the moniter!Really enjoying the role reversal. I always thought Rogue was tougher than the movie portrayed her.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter! Yeah, I wasn't sure if people would be familiar enough with that phrase, but I just had to use it because it cracked me up. In my mind, this Rogue is in a very different place from the movie one -- I'm repeating my response to the previous review, but she's older, she's survived the lab, she's gained control over her own power and those of others, she's been in the role of rescuer rather than the rescued for several years. I do love reading stories where Rogue is very vulnerable and Logan is very protective, but for this story I'm trying to strike a balance where they both take the stronger role at different times.
Date: 01/03/2011 11:35:30 AM Title: The Showdown
Damn! That was smokin' hot. Actually, smokin' hot is an understatement! ..faints..
I'm glad she understands him so well and can see that he really cares about her and doesn't want to hurt her. Awesome!
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it. Yeah, it's been interesting writing Rogue *without* her absorbing Logan's personality to give her some guide, but hopefully he's been bad-mouthing himself enough to give her an idea why he's so prone to running. And in my mind this Rogue, especially with the background of her lab experiences, age, and greater control of powers is a little more mature and insightful regarding inner demons.
Date: 01/03/2011 11:02:48 AM Title: The Showdown
Oh, you rock! I'm at work right now, but I don't care! I'm reading this now! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Ack, don't get fired! :-) Thanks so much for your reviews, especially for being my lucky number 100. :-D My new goal is to knock those plagiarized stories out of the "Most Reviewed" lists, because what's up with that?
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2011 10:26:07 AM Title: The Showdown
That was hotter and had a better jolt then my two cups of coffee this morning. If you could produce a chapter like this every morning, you may just put Starbucks out of business. More please.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :-) That one took me all long weekend, so one a day might be a bit much. :-) I'll work on more, though. I never expected this story to be so long, but I guess that's what happens when you start something without knowing where you're taking it...
Date: 01/03/2011 9:19:37 AM Title: The Alley
Wow, this story is fantastic! I seriously can't get enough! I really love their relationship.
But someone needs to kick Scott's ass! I hope Marie can get through to Logan so he can stop beating himself up and let himself be happy with her. As usual, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Okay, you talked me into it, I'll post the next chapter now. ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 01/02/2011 11:55:54 PM Title: The Alley
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! It's so exciting to log on and see a new review!
Date: 01/01/2011 5:28:46 AM Title: The Alley
alright marie! i just hope she can convince logan that as long as he stays *with her*, he's a 'good guy,' ya know? damn scott and his well intentioned meddling. and stupid logan and his self esteem issues. thank god for rogue, she'll straighten him out. i have faith. ;-) wonderful chapter, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: :-) Glad you liked it! Next chapter is written, I just want to look it over a bit more before posting, but it'll be up probably tomorrow. It's a whole lotta angst and smut. :-)
Date: 12/31/2010 5:38:26 PM Title: The Alley
You are such a tease but I loved it! Face it, you have us all in the palm of your hand!
Author's Response: Aw, sorry, didn't mean to tease. Okay, maybe I did a little. ;-) The next chapter is at least half written, so it'll be soon!
Date: 12/30/2010 10:48:06 PM Title: The Face-off
That was awesome! It twisted my gut to see how much they each care about Marie ...especially Logan. I can't wait to read more as always!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! More this weekend for sure...
Date: 12/30/2010 10:34:51 PM Title: The Face-off
I think the Professor is going to kick Scott's ASS. Everyone seems to think Scott always acts with Charles' blessing and I have always felt when Scott gets his head on his shoulders like this he is doing absolutely the opposite of the what the Professor would want. And Logan had better not let Marie catch him. She will go all Southern belle on him, and Lord help him!
BTW I have been reading from the beginning and I love it, I am just a horribly bad at reviewing. But the story is great!
Author's Response: Oh, Marie will catch him all right! ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 12/30/2010 9:37:22 PM Title: The Face-off
No! No! Kick his misguided ass, Marie. And then kick Scott's twice. Jeeze the guy has known her for all of 3, 4 days and has been through the metaphorical wringer and Jerkwad wants forever answers right effing now? Jerkwad. Yes, yes I'm sure he meant well ,blah de blah blah. Kick his ass, Rogue.
~Mia
Author's Response: Ha! Yeah, we will see a little bit of the wrath of Marie soon. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 12/30/2010 8:44:01 PM Title: The Face-off
man sometimes i just want to hit Scott. I know he loves her in the whole big brother protective way but why can't he just leave her alone and let her be happy.
As for Logan, he better hope Marie is in a forgiving mood when she finds him.
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Happy New Year, dear.
Author's Response: Yeah, I had a little too much fun with the idea that in this AU it's *Scott* who is stuck thinking of Rogue as a kid instead of Logan. Happy New Year to you!
Date: 12/30/2010 8:38:21 PM Title: The Face-off
she better not let him get away with it!!! i really hope she convinces him, 'cause he's gotta work on that martyrdom complex of his. love the update, this story is just *awesome*!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!