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Date: 06/15/2012 6:03:39 PM Title: The General
Woo hoo! I'd forgotten about Kitty. Go, Marie! :D
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2011 6:55:38 PM Title: The General
Okay, forget what I said before. This is the greatest chapter of all time. Oh my god, I have tears in my eyes. It's Just. That. Good. Aaaaaaarrrraaaaaggghhh >satisfied, astounded roar<
Every single fucking sentence had me on the edge of my proverbial seat, every single line so expertly crafted, culminating in that oh-so-huggable last paragraph. Possibly one of the best central villains that have ever graced these virtual pages.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! This was actually one of the chapters I liked the least, because it just seemed like exposition, exposition, exposition. I'm very happy to know that it didn't read that way.
Date: 01/18/2011 9:22:31 PM Title: The General
So relieved that Marie showed up. Logan's despair at being caught and never seeing Marie again was palpable. Looking forward to the ass-kicking!
Author's Response: :-) Glad you liked it! You must be psychic, I just posted the next chapter all of a minute ago!
Date: 01/18/2011 6:17:43 AM Title: The General
Logan is SO realistic both in his love and in his rage - I know a guy like that (and no, it's not hot, it's scary and makes his life hell). Logan's coming back to his earlier conviction here - there is no safe place on earth. He cannot protect Marie, try as he might. Where does he go from there, I wonder? Does he carve the need for a mate out of his soul again, try to revert to the invulnerability of loneliness?
Don't worry about descriptive, non-action/smut chapters!!! You are a great narrator, all is well-paced and makes sense. Action and smut can become quite repetitive without a story and filled-out characters behind it.
Wonderful cliffhanger here! Yes Wolverine, and there you thought you aleady knew all about her, eh?
Author's Response: Yeah, I think part of what makes Logan such a compelling character is that there is really no in-between with him. He's either totally callous, or totally devoted. A complete loner, or fiercely tied to just a few people. All sorts of contradictions, but always at the polar ends of the spectrum, never waffling in between. I can see where that would be pretty frightening in real life, but as far as the character goes it's really compelling to me. I'm glad you're still with the story...I agree I tend to like the non-action non-smut chapters best, but I still have trouble with chapters that are a lot of exposition, and this was one of them. And I think you're right on the money, next chapter Logan figures out there's quite a lot he didn't know about Marie, not the least of which is a full rundown of her powers. ;-) Thanks again for your review!
Date: 01/15/2011 11:42:05 AM Title: The General
Yeah-- love the "reversion" twist and Rogue having Kitty's powers. Can't wait for the ass kickin'!
Author's Response: :-D Thanks for the review! I have to admit, Marie is pretty badass in the next chapter.
Date: 01/15/2011 11:08:56 AM Title: The General
Yay! I have my own chapter!!!! Good Stuff!
Author's Response: You sure do! :-D Yeah, you saw right through my Kitty solution. :-) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/15/2011 12:12:36 AM Title: The General
another great twist! awesome that she saved his ass too, love it!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/14/2011 11:57:15 PM Title: The General
No, you got a goodly amount of detail in here without becoming overly fastidious and losing us. I love the manic madness you imbued Stryker with. He's not JUST evil, he is unbalanced and on a jihad kick. Just beautiful. Thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: Damn, you're quick! I was still reading it over myself for formatting and you commented already. :-) Thanks so much for your review!