wow....what's the deal with Marie.....so worried....

Ohhh I love how he's all protective and worried about her! Mmm yums.

And I'm so glad you appreciate my reviews, the more theyre responded to the more Im encouraged to write them (hint). I love having that communication with the author, its one of the best things about fanfiction!
One thing, are the golden eyes hers or Sabretooths? Im a tad bit confused by that

Author's Response: :-) Yeah, I was worried the story was trending towards Marie bossing Logan around a lot, so I wanted him to have a chance to take care of her for a little while. Plus, the smut potential of Feral!Marie was too good to pass up! Yes, the golden eyes were supposed to signify that she was being "controlled" by Sabretooth. I actually thought his eyes were yellow in the movie, but turns out I was wrong about that, they are kind of a pupil-less black. Oh wells. And I always respond to reviews as soon as I can, but you managed to pick a day I'm off work so I'm being especially prompt (i.e. obsessive)! :-)

Little nit-pick here: You wrote that Logan's skull was cracked during the fight with Sabretooth. But his skull is metal; no matter how much force you put into it, even a tree trunk isn't going to be able to crack it. As the movie proved, even a speeding bullet loses in a head-on collision. So... watch those SNAFUs! Accuracy is important even in fiction.

I'm kinda wondering where all of Logan's intense affection and longing for Rogue is coming from, though. It isn't convincing. It's frankly TOO much sap to be believable, and I'm sorry to have to say this but that element has given your storytelling a juvenile quality this chapter. I know you're capable of much better, because the earlier chapters prove it!! Please don't bring your earlier efforts to ruin in the 2nd half of this tale!

Author's Response: Hmmm...I'll start with the nit-pick. From the description in X1, Logan's skeleton was reinforced, not replaced, with metal. In the movie while they are talking they actually show a close-up of the scans of his skull, and it looks like the bones of his skull are encircled with metal bands, but with spaces in between. In my thinking, he still has bone to be cracked, just like the bullet first went into his head but was then extruded, but certainly if you want him to have a solid metal skull that's another interpretation of what was done to him. Sorry the pace of their relationship is not to your liking. My feeling is that this Logan has been pretty disconnected from anything and anyone in all of his life that he can remember, so this connection that he has formed with Marie, especially starting as it did on a more or less subconscious level, is going to affect him deeply whether he logically buys into that or not. But, again, that's just my interpretation of things. I appreciate you taking the time to think so deeply about the story and to review it.

amazing update! personally, i do prefer shorter, more frequent updates than longer chapters with a longer wait. but that's just me and i totally understand that sometimes the muse does what the muse wants. anyhoo, loved the update, but i hope marie's ok! and love logan's protectiveness!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think you'll like the next chapter, it should be posted pretty soon. Thanks so much for reviewing, it means a lot!

I am so obsessed with this story. Ever since the first chapter came out. I have been checking every day to see if you have updated. And on such a lustful cliff hanger I am hooked now more than ever! I really hope that you update soon! Keep up the fantastic work!

Author's Response: Hooray! You have no idea how motivating the reviews are. My Christmas tree may not be trimmed, but the next chapter is in the works for sure... ;-)