Reviews For The Prisoner
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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2012 8:08:33 PM Title: The Bath

Loving it so far :)

Reviewer: Syrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2012 8:55:21 PM Title: The Bath

Soooooo sexy. LOVE IT!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2011 12:00:51 PM Title: The Bath

interesting chapter, first quite sexy with Logan in the tub and Marie washing him, and kinda cute that he is thinkin about Marie at the end but still sad for what was done to him...

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Logan. Doesn't it just make you want to cuddle him? ;-)

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2011 12:49:54 PM Title: The Bath

Oh my god AMAZING!!! Hehe Loved it

Author's Response: Thanks! I was really unsure how this chapter would go over, I'm glad people didn't think I'm hopelessly pervy. Or at least if I am, it's in a good way. ;-)

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2010 8:50:24 PM Title: The Bath

Hooray for non-coherent Logan. There is MUCH perversi... rejoicing.

~Mia

Author's Response: :-D

Reviewer: WolvieDoesItBest Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2010 5:58:25 AM Title: The Bath

I am your Prisoner until the end of this story.

We can't wait to read more.
Linda and My Wolvie Muse.

Author's Response: Kinky! ;-) Glad you're liking the story -- both of you!

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 6:37:30 PM Title: The Bath

Hey! with the hints of coming attractions you gave us, I was expecting some gratuitous smut ... SO glad I was wrong!! Would have totally killed the mood you had set up so far. You definitely managed to keep the kick-A tone of 2 damaged people struggling to get thru each hour of "normalcy" ... while fighting the loneliness & deprivation of human affection which Logan at least isn't even aware of needing.

Seeing thru Logan's eyes as he "figures out" forthe very 1st time what masturbation is ... that was well done, in only a couple of short sentences!!
Well-constructed sentences, for sure.
I'd love to see more of Logan's POV though, next chapter.

Author's Response: Hmmm...I thought I responded to this one before, but it's not showing up. I'm glad you liked the only quasi-smut approach I took. It seemed to me like it might come off like a tease, but to me it was more realistic for the characters, and of course doesn't involve Rogue taking advantage of a cognitively-impaired Logan. I guess you know by now that it switched almost entirely to Logan's POV in the next few chapters, not sure if that was your suggestion percolating in my brain or if it would have happened anyway, but thanks!

Reviewer: Freespirit Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 4:02:23 AM Title: The Bath

I'm totally digging the concept (Logan rescued by Marie)!
Can't wait for what you've prepared for these two...

Author's Response: Thanks so much, fellow insomniac! Here's a short additional chapter, just for you. ;-)

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