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Just when i thought i had read all your fic i find this gem!!!! Lol @ your a/n at the end the chapter haha
You know...as I was reading about him being all cautious about the foot, I thought....she's gonna reach over and stab at the food to show him....and TADA...that's exactly what she did! I LOVE THAT!
With Logan naked no wonder Marie's eyes keep wandering south... totally understand it ;)
Author's Response: True dat! ;-)
Wow, I love this chapter! I can tell im gonna be saying that a lot
Author's Response: Yay!
As far as "slow" chapters go, this one is phenomenal. I am quickly warming up to your fantastic taste in writing. You have good taste in reading and have used that, it seems, to sharpen your own skills into a really gripping story. I couldn't put this one down now if my chair caught fire. Thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: Aw, you are awesome for reviewing the chapters as you go! I keep meaning to do that for some of my favorite stories, but any time I reread them I'm too anxious to get to the next chapter to stop and review! You're absolutely right, whenever I feel like my writing is starting to suck I go back and read some of my favorite authors to try to step up my game. I know I'm still leagues below them in terms of emotional resonance, but I'm trying!
Cool, you updated! I really liked Logan's thoughts/reactions to Marie. I like how Marie is connecting with him and not trying to distance herself from him and the memories his captivity brings back. Can't wait for the chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it...I'm working on the next one.
oh... i like this chapter... sure no Logan jumping to Marie's defense and definetly no action, unless staring at naked man's groin counts... hmm naked Logan...
sorry back on track.. can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for the multiple reviews! It's very motivating.
Yay, you updated! I really like that Marie knows how he's feeling and is making the right steps with him....update soon, please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, it's great to get positive feedback. I'll try to be timely with updates.
Wow, what a quick updater you are!! We are ever so grateful. ;)
Marie's little breakdown @ calling Logan a puppy was really sweet. And I love the way she startles at his constant sneaking up on her! You've really captured the tone well here.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much!
Wow! I am loving this story, a little different than the typical Lab Rescue stories I have read. Hope to read a new chapter soon.
Author's Response: Thanks!
hurray for updates! love logan's pov at the beginning, very cool. can't wait to read about bath time, which sounds a lot dirtier than i mean... ;-)
Author's Response: Glad you like Logan's POV, wasn't sure how that would go over. I'm looking forward to bath time too! :-)