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[Report This]Date: 04/02/2014 8:25:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Damn, damn, damn. This fic is absolutely stunning. I have to admit I was scared to death of reading this fic because of the angst factor. Although I did read the epilogue doctorg wrote for it - full circle a long while back. But I'm so glad I read this - their getting together and relationship before the miscarriage was so sweet, post miscarriage was just a heart wrecker. The ending left me shocked and devastated and totally ready to choke jean out lol (everytime I read a nice-jean fic I come across one like this straight after where I just want her dead grrrr!) well done!
Date: 11/07/2012 10:27:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow. This really was a rollercoaster. I couldn't sleep and found this fic, Figured I might as well start reading until I was sleepy enough to go back to bed and finish the next morning. It's almost 4:30 AM now and I'm still awake. I quietly celebrated during the happy parts, my stomach did weird things during the sad parts. I loved it very VERY much. Thank you for sharing. <3
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2012 6:39:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
wow this story was pretty freaking amazing. I love how you did a lot of this stuff... the verbal dialogs and the mental dialogs, the non-smut sex :D, the povs, everything. just wow!!! thanks for a great read!
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2011 9:16:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
OH GAWD WHY DID YOU END IT LIKE THIS?!?!?!?! It was such a good story!
[Report This]Date: 12/06/2010 7:09:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
So, I started reading this sometime last night. Picked it up again this afternoon - I had an hour before I had to get to class. The next time I tear my eyes away from the screen, class had started 15 minutes ago. I had to force myself away from the computer, get dressed, and walk through the coldcoldcold!!
... and then I finished reading it in class instead of listening to my last lecture before exams. heh...
I'm rambling now. Such a good story, but so sad. I'm curious what the other ending was, but I'm completely satisfied with the one you wrote.
Also, I had the nagging suspicion from the second chapter (or so) that the reason Marie was pulling away from him so much was because he kept using the word 'baby'. I don't know if that was the case or not, but every time he called her that I winced.
...That's all I think I had to say. I think.
Good story!
Author's Response: Wow. That's an amazing compliment. Sorry about making you late, but the fact that it did makes me bounce a little...or a lot. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 09/04/2010 2:58:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
I have just rearead your beautiful story and I couldn't remember if I told you before how very much I loved it. It was a roller coaster ride, up and down and never knowing where it would end. I truly beieve that someone who wasn't a shipper could read this and care passionately about this couple.
Author's Response: Okay, so...I'm pretty sure I love you...I love getting reviews for old(er) stories. They're such a pleasant ("pleasant" translates to: superfriggin'unbelievablerockin'myworldawesome) surprise. And this one was especially great. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2010 10:30:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wait wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*looks around* Whereīs the cammera?? This CANīT be the end. Itīs not the end, is it? ŽŽ Bad girl! No cookies for you!!
I must to say that I loved how you treated the story. Agh, english isnīt my first language so I will try to explain what I mean, because it was something important for me.
I like how you showed the 2 points of view, but not like most of people do. They didnīt think that same, and they saw things different all the time. I *LOVED* that. Because itīs always like that. No one sees the life like other people, and misunderstandings are an every-day thing.
Your fanfic is sooooo soooo real. Believe me, Iīm such a bitch with fanfics. I want everything to be perfect, and with yours I found that.
Good job!! I will search for more fanfics written by you tomorrow. Itīs 4:30 am in Spain!! xD You seduced me with your fanfic and I couldnīt stop until I finished it.
All my love!
Author's Response: >screams at computer screen< Ohmygod! Thank you! This made my day perfect. I always, always, always hoped somebody would tell me that one day. I cant thank you enough. Goodnight/morning, hope you sleep well, and great job with the English....and ummm...Id suggest Heal Over. People seem to like that one. :~) Thanks! Happy Reading!
Date: 07/13/2010 2:39:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
P.S. Re-read this (as I usually do with your fics) & found this: "He's like the activities director on a cruise ship. He's always, you know...ready. I don't think he even sleeps." Oh man did I laugh like a crazy person. Cruises have never appealed to me until now. That would be the best vacation ever.
I'm just going to go entertain that thought in my brain for a bit.
Author's Response: Lmao! Thanks. (To be perfectly honest, Ive never been on a cruise.) And Im on my way to start typing up the next story. :~) ;~)
Date: 07/12/2010 8:16:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
No. No. It can't be over. Im going to cry. No. I'm going to Bawl. This is one of the greatest stories ever. It's perfect. Perfect ending. This needs to be made into a movie. I would watch it always. Oh god, please write a new story soon!
Author's Response: Lol!! >hands tissue box, hugs< Thank you, Im so glad you enjoyed it...Im halfway done with the first chapter of my next story. It should be up by/before Saturday. :~)
Author's Response: Lol!! >hands tissue box, hugs< Thank you, Im so glad you enjoyed it...Im halfway done with the first chapter of my next story. It should be up by/before Saturday. :~)
Date: 07/12/2010 3:41:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ahhhhhh! *brain explodes*. This can't be the end! Even though I love me some overt Rogan shippery-happily-ever-after-with-kittens-on-top-ness, I this this ending is appropriate and fitting. This was so heartbreaking overall, literally - this story got some pretty visceral reactions out of me. I cannot imagine how you cranked this one out & finished it! I'm glad you left it a little open ended for us hoping that these two make it back to each other :)
Go on & take your very well deserved break, but please don't leave us for too long. Riots will start. Bounty hunters will be on your trail. I will sit in a corner & cry.
Author's Response: Thank you! This was great to read after a long day. I was hoping you, especially would like it. I thought readers would be able to tell that the ending was leading to them getting back together, but for some I guess it didn't look that way. >puzzled< Anyhooters, thank you so so so so much for this. Im actually halfway through the first chapter of my next piece. But Im working full time now, so itll probably take a week to finish/type. >hugs<
Date: 07/12/2010 12:01:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it!! Can't wait till your next story Im so looking forward to read more of your stuff! (secretly hope itll be one with a dominant Logan like the one in Heal Over).
Author's Response: >hugs< Thank you!!!!! I actually wrote all yesterday, and Im halfway done with the chapter. Dominant Logan. ;~) But Im starting a new job tomorrow, so youll probably see it Saturday.
Date: 07/11/2010 4:53:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Very cleverly worked from using “I had a son who died” as you’re beginning line and finish line to the flashback/forward journey in-between.
The rather open ending was fitting and in keeping with the style used and emotion built throughout the story especially with the miscarriage and misunderstandings in interpretation of feeling thereafter, time away making them see a lot clearer/see the truth of what is felt. However, now I have to apologise because I’m going to add a BUT....... I’m not sold on the Jean part of the fic or rather that after the event it seems to have been ignored. [Even taking into account your sneakily added epilogue ;) ] It was a big catalyst in their final breakdown and I felt it needed some/any conclusion/closure or even just an acknowledgement or it being addressed before the simple ending would work completely for me.
Thoroughly enjoyed it, great stuff as usual, well done x
Author's Response: Yeah, Ive got two or three Jean pages I was playing with but decided to leave out(there was also more to the Xavier scene). It just didnt...*feel* right. I wanted to keep the focus on Marie and Logan, nothing but what they personally witnessed. But thank you; Im very glad you enjoyed the story and appreciate the review, as always. ;)
Date: 07/11/2010 9:47:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
wow that was heart wrenching! One hell of a ride.LOL Love you epilogue. lol Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, for this and all of your reviews.
Date: 07/11/2010 6:50:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
RoseSumner -there you are - yay!! I'm torn between being thrilled about this update and at a loss because this is the end of what is, without doubt, one of the best stories I've read on this website. And believe me, I've read a lot on this website. Anyway...
"And he thinks about people, and how easily they break. How Marie and he tore each other to shreds with the best of intentions." - amazing line and oh so true.
"I meant," Logan speaks quietly, "why do you have to go at all?" His eyes burn with an intensity that suits a very different question much better. - great line!
So please, please, please tell me you'll be writing something else soon? Because reading your updates is one of the highlights of my weekend. Does that make me sad? If it does, I don't care! I love it and you are a very, very talented writer.
Author's Response: >embraces, swings round and round< Thank you for the reviews I always look forward to. You always make me feel like it wasnt a waist of ink....Yeah, Ive got an idea Ive been kicking around. Ill probably start it today. :~)
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2010 12:49:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaat. im lost now
Author's Response: About?
Date: 07/10/2010 7:53:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love your writing. Loved the epilouge.
Author's Response: Love this review. Love you! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/2010 6:52:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, you can't leave it there.......Logan and Marie so deserve a happy ending....Pleeeeease?
Author's Response: Im afraid thats as happy as I can give them. The rest is up to your imagination. But, if that doesnt work, here is how I see it: Logan goes back to Marie, takes her from the mansion, and they spend the rest of their days making up for lost time.