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I just re read and have a couple more comments. Your use of present tense was a bit distracting. It felt a little like someone narrating the scene rather than them living it.
And the use of the word, buckle. Clearly you meant "bucked" but you wrote buckle. it was a little confusing at first till i figured out that it was a word error.
Author's Response: Yeah I always liked jumping back and forth with how a story is told ;) And my story isn't beta read so sometimes I don't notice my errors. Thanks for the feed backs its appreciated.
Ok am I wrong to think that was hot? LOL cause, seriously, that was hot. I am still trying to figure out what this Dr's agenda is. I am really loving this so far. More please!
Author's Response: That Doc certainly is a creeper!
OK, so these two guys are going to continue working there for a whole month before Wolverine gets his shot at one of them? How many more female victims will they collect in the meantime? Especially with Wolverine 'leashed' by his promise to do as he's told. I'm gonna trust that there is an explanation for all this coming soon. --Wendie
Author's Response: LOL! Don't worry, our good doctor has plans for those two ;) They ruined his perfect Level, he has to punish them as well ;) They don't get off that easy...well if being promised to Wolverine is considered easy. I'm glad you saw that, I was wondering when someone was going to point that out and then I would have to explain lol. You keep me on my toes that's for sure!
My favorite theme in their fan fictions other than romance is rising against their pain while being treated by animals. I have faith that this one is going to be a damn good one. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Why thank you! I love the Rize against all odds type of stories too. I'm glad you're enjoying this fic :)
what i hope happens next is those two bastards wind up dangling from Wolverine's claws!
scary start, can't wait for an update. adding this to my faves so i know when you put them up.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it. Although, I'm not sure when my next update will be, I can guarantee it will be good ;)
uh oh, something really bad (well at least worse than this) is going to happen to Rogue. :(
hope at some point Wolverine get to gut some of these creeps!
love this start, always enjoy reading the lab stories.
Author's Response: I'm a big fan of the lab/cell stories too!! Ty for reading!
Like I said, I see a pair of dead guards in the not too distant future. Good for her that she didn't heighten their fun by acting afraid. Good for you for writing it so unflinchingly. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thanks, that means alot. I wanted her to be strong in a time of fear. And I'm glad that ppl are catching that. Nice, makes me happy.
May I ask who gets to kill the guards ant the end?
I know I know first chapter an all but even thinking about what will happen makes me very bloodthirsty.
Author's Response: Ooh well that's a surprise ;) and it will be very dark and most likely bloody.