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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 9:29:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

ok, i have to go read the story that inspired this. if it's half as good as this one i'm going to need to turn down the A/C to cool down!

Author's Response: I love "Anything". It is probably the best example of a dark, hear broken, SOB!Logan that you can still see the good in. And it is HOT as HELL!

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 9:06:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love that you are doing this!! I have a feeling I will be reading this over and over...ahem. (blush)

Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, check out chapter 6, there is lovin' in that one too!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 9:02:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh my sweet lord...that was so insanely hot!!!

i think most women have had the fantasy of being completely dominated in bed...you delivered!

Author's Response: Thanks, I tried.

Reviewer: Lady_T_220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 5:51:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm finding this to be a really interesting and unusual story character-wise, and for that alone I'm quite enjoying it.
Cause on the one hand, domineering Logan can be all kinds of *GUH* hotness, but on the other hand, he's been kind of an asshole and he's making it really quite difficult to actually like him all that much, let alone even remotely condone what he's doing.
That last point I think is easier to get past when Rogue's more overtly complicit in the affair, which sort of seems to be suggested in patches though it doesn't always feel like it's present the way through.
Dark and domineering Logan with a sort of ...'unwillingly-willing' Rogue turned-on despite herself I have no trouble seeing, it's just the bits that seem to touch at the boarder of unhappier non-con I have a harder time reconciling with the way I'm used to seeing Logan's character. (Or at least I have a harder time seeing it without a serious jab from his conscience, anyway.) So I'm interested to see how that plays out, because I do kind of slightly want to shake him and tell him to crawl out of whataver cave he's living in at the moment. (That shouldn't be taken as a criticism by the way, it's very emotive writing because of it.)
You've also got lots of scope for interesting shifts in the balance of power as you go along too, if you decide to follow that route. Overall though, I'm looking forward to finding out where you're ultimately headed with this story.
Or indeed if they'll ever even get as far as the mansion before they shag themselves into a sated coma first. *g*

Author's Response: Marie has, essentially, agreed to something she didn't understand the depths of in 'Anything'. By saying she would do anything, she gave up all power to Logan. He took it. Part of what we will see in this story is how they work themselves back from Logan taking everything from her. I am going to work on some of the harder bits. He didn't force her into anything she hadn't already agreed to, he is just holding her to it.

Reviewer: Sakashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 3:26:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

Gluh.
You did it again.
So much dominant!Logan in one fic, I don't know how you do it, but it's wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Let me know what you think of him in Chapter 5.

Reviewer: likelandm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 2:19:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow…intense. I tend to avoid fics that are purely just dark/and or angsty..figure there’s enough stress LOL…so, I wasn’t sure about this..but seeing the shipper part, decided to go ahead..and am glad I did...powerful stuff.
I don’t think I’ve read a Logan quite so dominating before, usually it’s Feral!Logan or Wolverine who shows that trait…so it’s really interesting to see it’s Logan who’s made a conscious decision to be like that..sounds like Jean’s messed him up pretty bad..if he’s willing to override his conscience and rise above the “animal” that in the past he’s wanted to distance himself from. That said, underneath all that, the guy who Marie instinctively trusts is still there..there are glimpses which show through…as well as inklings that Marie will breach his defenses (think she’s already kinda started to).
-As for Marie…that core of strength is still there..I think she’ll be a handful and he won’t know what him ;)
Thanks for sharing this great story..there’s a complexity to the characters which make them interesting in addition to all the hotness...since you mentioned it’ll deal with them at the mansion…can’t wait to see how everyone will react to these two *ahem* lovebirds.

Author's Response: Logan's got a lot going on in his head. Jean has actually broken him more than he realizes. You will start to see parts of that in chapter 3. He is, underneath it all the guy, that Marie can instinctively trust and to some extent she already does or she would have blotted sometime in the night. They both have an interesting journey ahead. I hope you like it.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 1:42:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

Is it hot in here or what?

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 1:37:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

*fans self*

HOTTTTTTTTT!!!

Author's Response: :) Let me know if you think chapter 6 measures up to the rest.

Reviewer: Turante Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 12:41:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very hot. Has some spelling and grammar errors that need tending, and you should add the archive's Rape/Non-Con warning to the story for the obvious reasons, but otherwise highly enjoyable. And, because it bears repeating, HOT!

Author's Response: I will go back and fix the spelling and grammar, thanks for the heads up about those. I think I need to maybe tone down bits of chapter 2 if you really see it has rape/non con. The morning after wasn't really any different than the night before in "Anything" or the first chapter of this. I would love to understand which bits pushed you to see this chapter as non con. I had no intention of trying to make this chapter be non con. Specific things that squeaked you would be helpful.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 12:18:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Someone has already said it, in another review I think, but I believe it works very nicely here as well......

There's something to be said about being dominated. *wink*

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 12:03:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

More please xXx

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 2:26:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow Logan makes acting like a bastard hot in this. I am usually appalled by this type of behavior but you make it ok for me to say, "yeah, this might be wrong but its hot! " Great job! Update again soon

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 12:14:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

hmmm,not exactly the way i would want my Logan, but teh story is good, cant wait to see whats next....

Author's Response: Dark and controling doesn't always mean bad...stay with me and you will see.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 12:02:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

Mmm, dark Logan. XD Hope you'll update with more soon!

Author's Response: Chapter 6 is out, let me know what you think. How's the dark Logan? Still dark enough?

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 1:14:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just wanted to let you know I adored this story! I kept hoping Kristine would update but this is just great! will you be adding more chapters?

Author's Response: yep, more is coming should have chapter 2 ready to go up on Monday if not sooner.

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 1:25:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wow - I remember you posted something forever ago about writing a fic picking up where "Anything" left off, and I was so excited to see what you would do. Totally worth the wait. Can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: If you are still interested chapter 6 is out there. I will finish this, I promise.

Reviewer: RoguePixie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 11:30:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I also am totally with Sakashi on this fic. This is now one of my all-time favorite stories of all time. Especially since this Logan reminds me a lot of my husband (or is it my husband reminds me a lot of Logan, I' still not too sure, hehe ^_~)

Author's Response: :) Lucky girl you are. Let me know what you think of chapter 6.

Reviewer: Blue Morpho Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 8:12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Whoa. Just...whoa. Loved 'Anything' and am now totally loving 'Everything'. Thank you, this fic just made my day. Dark Logan RULES. Now hurry up with the next chappie!

Author's Response: Can I trade the rest of my story (all of it) for the last chapter(s) of Bounty Hunter??!!!?? :) Seriously the end of chapter 2 is in sight.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 4:36:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love, love, love this. And...I love this!

I can’t breathe...!

Author's Response: :) Thank you, hope you are still reading, chpater 6 is up.

Reviewer: LeeMinKyo Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 12:31:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

WOW!

I canīt believe how hot is this fanfic!!! Normally, i donīt read a lot of dark-ff, but this one is really good!

I canīt wait for the next chapter, and of course Iīll send you more reviews in every one of them.

English isnīt my first language, but I hope I can write good reviews for you, because "OMG" YOU īRE SO GOOD!!!

This Logan is so wild, and I love it. But in some parts i feel sadness... Rogue is so innocent, so scared, ... But well, I like the relationship between them.

HOT HOT HOTTTT *Lee sings* ~

Good luck with this story!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful feedback, let me know what you think of him in chapter 5. He is up to some interesting stuff there.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 12:26:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like a plan malfactor, but, alas, I do believe that "house policy" is that you MUST have permission from the original author to 'play in their sandbox', as it were. Some may be willing to let others have a crack at thier writer's block. But neither would I blame folks for not wanting to allow their creations to become public commodities. You never know unless you ask tho, POWER TO THE REVOLUTION!!! LOL

Author's Response: The two I have contacted have been great. You just have to wait sometimes.

Reviewer: malfactor Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 10:13:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh punk! I've wanted to do a followup to this story for ages. Better do a good job or I will smite thee. I will smite thee, Goddamnit! *couch* Sorry. True Blood marathon.

But that gives me an idea. We could be Abandonfic writers! Lets rescue all those promising (or wandering so badly even the original author gave up) fics that never got finished. We'll just steal em! With proper credit due the original author, of course. Is there a house policy for such things or is it anything goes around here? Let's do it! ANARCHY!!!

Author's Response: I sent my first request asking for permission a loonngg time ago. I sent a bunch. It is a waiting game. If she comes to read it, I hope she likes it.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 7:45:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE IT!!!! xXx

Author's Response: I am glad, let me know if you like chapter 6.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 7:04:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

THAT was f'n HOTTT!!! I'm in total and complete agreement with Sakashi, this Logan is...is...damn, I can't find the words but he's IT! SO looking forward to Chapter two, and, as far as chapter 3?? Who says we need plot????

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Chapter 6 has a bit of both. Let me know what you think, please.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 12:54:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

ur gonna make us wait a whole frekin week for chapter 2? :(

Author's Response: I have made you wait forever, but if you are still interested chapter 6 is now up.

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