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Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2012 1:35:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

I can't believe it's been over a year since you updated as I love this story and can't wait to read more. Please keep writing, this story is H-O-T hot!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2011 7:04:43 PM Title: Chapter 7

You know what would be a great Christmas present to your readers? Getting an update out before the New Year! Pllllleeeeeaaaassssee? lol. Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: desy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2011 5:10:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter! I Love it!
Concerning your question to my last review: In X1 Marie was 17 and Logan had lost his memories 15 years ago, making her 2 years old when that happened. When you said Logan lost his memories 12 years ago in your story, I just added those 2 years to get Marie's age.
Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens when they leave (when he gives her clothes and if she wants to clean his 'cozy' camper and how they fall into a daily routine...)

Reviewer: atmd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2011 11:07:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow. Wow. First off, thanks for the dedication in your chapter. I don't see how my story could even hold a candle to this, but glad you found it inspiring in some way =D.

Okay, so I had to go back and read Kristine's 'Anything' and it was close enough to non-con to be pretty squicky for me. That made me reluctant to continue on with your story at first...

But damn, am I glad I did. There were still a couple of parts that were tough to read. But you really managed to 'humanize' this dark Logan. His motivations, while sometimes disturbing, are understandable and very real, y'know?

And aside from the INSANELY melt-your-computer-screen-hot sex scenes, (literally, hottest fic I've ever read, hands-down), this story is really psychologically compelling, too. The balance of power between these two is so intriguing; I mean, sure, Logan is dominant, no doubt about that, but I don't think he even realizes just how much he's getting himself wrapped around Marie's finger. It's already clear he'd do just about anything to keep her safe and cared for.

Marie's backstory was great. I still feel that Logan has somewhat taken advantage of this young vulnerable girl's situation and blah blah (and you've brilliantly shown moments where he feels those twinges of guilt too, which I appreciate). But at the same time, she's getting things she wants/needs out of their relationship, and she's weighed her options and made the very clear-headed choice to stay.

Sorry if this review didn't completely make sense. I'm still a little shell-shocked from reading most of this in one sitting. But uh, to sum up: Wow. Hot. More. Soon. Please. I can't even imagine what's going to happen when/if Logan takes her back to Westchester, but I'm sure it will be an Uh-mazing read.

Reviewer: annie77 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2011 3:08:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Logan is a middle aged man that took a minor teen girl, forced to have sex with him, abused her physically (bite her) and emotionally and on top of everything now hes giving her shots of whiskey to get her asleep! So my question is, how come Im so hooked with this story, and think their relationship is totally appealing? lol Somehow you manage to make the "bad guys" look attractive this is what makes this story so different and great. As I said before this is one of the best rogan fics ever! Please update soon :)

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2011 10:15:03 AM Title: Chapter 7

I've not even read it yet, I'm just super excited to read it after I get home from work!!! Thanks in advance :) and btw WOOOOHOOOOOO!

Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2011 8:14:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

hey, thanks for the dedication at the start of the chapter, really happy to see this fic updated. have to say i enjoyed finding out this marie's back-story, and i agree with logan that her grand-parents sounded cool. i can understand why you were worried about the word count, but it flows quite naturally and retains interest throughout. nice work...

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. I am really really glad to hear you thought the flow worked. The Grandparents thing grew completely organically as I wrote the chapter. I ended up with a scene that will come much later coming out as well. Its weird how a story doesn't necessarily happen for the author in order.rnrnStray is one of the stories I am always on the hunt for an update from so the dedication felt completely approperiate. :)

Reviewer: natsuki sochi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2011 12:17:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm still a bit worried dat he has gotten Marie pregnant or dat the lab people purposely left her to him for the sole purpose of getting her pregnant by him. but I have faith in Marie dat she would be strong against the government and especially against Logan's manipulation I still stand by my theory dat Marie is under the influence of survival instinct and dat there will come a day dat Logan would regret/know wot hit him with the way he is treating her bcoz wen she finds out wot he is really thinking and trying to do with her, "hell has no fury like a womans wrath".Logan says dat she is no whore to him but he is making her into a SEX SLAVE which is worse in my opinion.

Author's Response: Natsuki - First thank you for reading and reviewing. rnSecond, I want to be honest with you, I am not sure this story is going to give you what you are looking for. Do you know what the aspects of a dominant/submissive relationship are? This story is about how Logan and Marie's D/S relationship works. Yes, Marie does and will have her own opinions about things but (without revealing too much) their relationship will remain a D/S one throughout even if it may evolve into something else. D/S relationships are complex and this one will be slow to develop. Marie does understand that Logan has claimed her, she agreed to be claimed. (That happened in Kristine's "Anything" if you haven't read that you probably should.)rnrnBTW I will address the pregnancy question in the next couple of chapters and how Logan knows she isn't pregnant.rnrnI am not sure what you mean by survival instinct. Do you mean survival mode?rnrnHopefully you can stick with me but I understand if this kind of relationship isn't to your taste. But again thank you for thanking the time to read and review. ~ Alesiarn

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 9:08:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love all the back story in this one. And I'm soooo happy you are continuing this.

Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad to hear you liked the back story. I wanted to make it familar enough that it felt like the Marie we know but just different enough that it wasn't the same old same old.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 3:42:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

Brilliant as always xXx

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks that means a lot. I was worried about this one. It felt bulky and somewhat unwieldy.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 2:01:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh wow! You just made my entire week! Do we really have to wait til Thanksgiving for more?

Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad I could make you week and hopefully you enjoyed this chapter as much as the rest. I will try for before Thanksgiving but my updating has been soooo sporadic I didn't want to over promise and under deliver. I really want to get a chapter ahead so guys don't have to wait too long in between.

Reviewer: cindysark Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 9:09:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

This is probably my favorite Logan/Rogue story. I'm so happy you're continuing with it and I plan to stick with you no matter how long it takes you to update. It's worth the wait!

This chapter was great and answered a lot of questions about what happened with Marie. I like how Logan was with her, just the right mix of comforting and dominant. I do have to say I'm extremely glad he didn't bring the waitress back with him, though.

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Writing the part about JoAnne was fun and was only there because a reviewer from the last chapter wanted to know why Logan came home to Marie smelling like sex. That comment got me thinking about whether this Logan at this point in this story would be 'faithful' to Marie and why. His reasoning for not bringing JoAnne back wasn't a completely noble one but he did at least take Marie into account when making the decision. rnrnI needed to get all of the lab stuff out in the open. However I struggled with Logan being tooo comforting for the level of emotional affection in their relationship at this point vs Marie's need to obfuscate and not think about what had happened to her. I am really glad to hear you think I managed to come up with the right mix.rn

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