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[Report This]Date: 05/24/2011 10:00:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sigh.
Again, I am in awe of your writing skills. I completely get Logan's thrill with having Marie under his control, his acceptance of that part of him that wants to own her, mold her. You drew me completely in.
With amusement Logan thought that if he could just have a blowjob and go down on a woman before every X-men mission, the Brotherhood and the FOH wouldn’t know what hit them.
OMIGOD. LOL, I loved this. He could probably rule the world if he wanted to - you really got across his enjoyment of this particular part of sex. :)
Maybe she was even strong enough deal with him - all of him, even the darkest parts.
Need I write anything here? Clear as a bell.
Now onto Chapter Three...
Author's Response: I am really glad you liked the bit of humor. This story is so intense it needs a bit of sacrasim here and there. I deeply appreciate your complements on my skill. Writing is hard for me with the dyslexia, sometimes I think completely backwards to what ends up on the page so it takes me forever, but I am humbled that you enjoy it so much.
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2010 10:41:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
jesus, that was loooooong and exciting. whew, more smut in this one chapter than in about 5 other stories put together!
god, he's a sexy control freak!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Chapter 6 has a few bits you might find enjoyable as well!
Date: 10/01/2009 5:40:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Absolutely loving this!You have really got a way with smut!It's just a beautiful thing.I really hope you continue. If I had to pick at one thing it wold only be a spelling error, in mor than one place you used trill instead of thrill. But only if I had to be picky.
Author's Response: Oh thanks for the review but even more thank you for pointing out the spelling error. I will go fix it! Chapter 3, which I am sorry to say is sex free, should be up by Monday.
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2009 7:22:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow just wow. I've never been one to love the darker Logan, the one who puts all those good qualities aside for his own selfish needs but I'm falling even more in love with him. Because even when he hides the moral part of him it always pops back up somewhere along your story.
And as much as I think that Rogue giving him anything to be safe is totally unreasonable I kind of like it. Who wouldn't want to do that just to have all that hotness ^__^ and it's not like she's not benefiting from this proposition lol
So yeah this story is amazing, and hot, and oh so sexy and I can't wait to see where this goes and whether they make it to the mansion and confront the evilness that is Jean lol
Author's Response: I am really glad to hear you like it so far. I really appreciate hearing your thoughts on what you are reading. rnI have always believed that even the very darkest most savage parts of the Wolverine lived by a code of conduct. It may not be 'honor' as Society would see it but it is there and governs all things Logan does. It will continue to appear throughout. rnAs far as what Marie would give up for what she thinks she might get, I think it is relative to how desperate she is. She has nothing, having just escaped from a lab, and has nowhere to go, or at least that is how she feels. So she has in essence prostituted herself to Logan. We will see a bit more of why she is so desperate later and hopefully it will click for you. It was very important to me that I stay true to what Kristine established in "Anything" as well.rn
[Report This]Date: 09/23/2009 2:32:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
HOLY CRAP!!!!! This fic is awesome and I can't wait to see where you take this. Is Marie going to be more like the comic verse Rogue or a blend between the two?
Author's Response: Oh, you want to know secrets...sorry can't do that. :)
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2009 9:29:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
ok, i have to go read the story that inspired this. if it's half as good as this one i'm going to need to turn down the A/C to cool down!
Author's Response: I love "Anything". It is probably the best example of a dark, hear broken, SOB!Logan that you can still see the good in. And it is HOT as HELL!
Date: 09/21/2009 9:06:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love that you are doing this!! I have a feeling I will be reading this over and over...ahem. (blush)
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, check out chapter 6, there is lovin' in that one too!
Date: 09/21/2009 5:51:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm finding this to be a really interesting and unusual story character-wise, and for that alone I'm quite enjoying it.
Cause on the one hand, domineering Logan can be all kinds of *GUH* hotness, but on the other hand, he's been kind of an asshole and he's making it really quite difficult to actually like him all that much, let alone even remotely condone what he's doing.
That last point I think is easier to get past when Rogue's more overtly complicit in the affair, which sort of seems to be suggested in patches though it doesn't always feel like it's present the way through.
Dark and domineering Logan with a sort of ...'unwillingly-willing' Rogue turned-on despite herself I have no trouble seeing, it's just the bits that seem to touch at the boarder of unhappier non-con I have a harder time reconciling with the way I'm used to seeing Logan's character. (Or at least I have a harder time seeing it without a serious jab from his conscience, anyway.) So I'm interested to see how that plays out, because I do kind of slightly want to shake him and tell him to crawl out of whataver cave he's living in at the moment. (That shouldn't be taken as a criticism by the way, it's very emotive writing because of it.)
You've also got lots of scope for interesting shifts in the balance of power as you go along too, if you decide to follow that route. Overall though, I'm looking forward to finding out where you're ultimately headed with this story.
Or indeed if they'll ever even get as far as the mansion before they shag themselves into a sated coma first. *g*
Author's Response: Marie has, essentially, agreed to something she didn't understand the depths of in 'Anything'. By saying she would do anything, she gave up all power to Logan. He took it. Part of what we will see in this story is how they work themselves back from Logan taking everything from her. I am going to work on some of the harder bits. He didn't force her into anything she hadn't already agreed to, he is just holding her to it.
Date: 09/21/2009 3:26:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Gluh.
You did it again.
So much dominant!Logan in one fic, I don't know how you do it, but it's wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Let me know what you think of him in Chapter 5.
Date: 09/21/2009 1:42:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Is it hot in here or what?
Date: 09/21/2009 12:18:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
Someone has already said it, in another review I think, but I believe it works very nicely here as well......
There's something to be said about being dominated. *wink*
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2009 12:03:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
More please xXx
Date: 09/21/2009 2:26:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow Logan makes acting like a bastard hot in this. I am usually appalled by this type of behavior but you make it ok for me to say, "yeah, this might be wrong but its hot! " Great job! Update again soon
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2009 12:14:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm,not exactly the way i would want my Logan, but teh story is good, cant wait to see whats next....
Author's Response: Dark and controling doesn't always mean bad...stay with me and you will see.
Date: 09/21/2009 12:02:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
Mmm, dark Logan. XD Hope you'll update with more soon!
Author's Response: Chapter 6 is out, let me know what you think. How's the dark Logan? Still dark enough?