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Reviewer: Zaz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2017 12:22:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Unnnnfffff That was SO HOT.

I loved "Anything,' the I think the first chapter of 'Everything' was even better, hotter. LOVE the D/s dynamic, Logan is so deliciously dominant in this fic.

I felt a little sad reading the interaction between Logan and Jubilee, because it reminded me of the tender interaction he had with Marie in the movies, which made me fall in love with the pairing. But I understand that this wouldn't exist in the same way in a D/s relationship, and maintaining the spirit of 'Anything'.

I really hope you write more...I would have liked to have read about how the other X-men responded to their relationship when they returned to the school, or even Marie's response to finding out that Logan is also a mutant.

Even if you don't write more of this fic, I hope you write more delicious Dom!Wolverine stories! Great work!

Reviewer: angeljocjd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2012 2:30:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I would love to read more.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2012 12:04:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

HAVE MERCY!! Update faster please!!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2012 6:05:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Where oh where have you gone? :(

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2011 5:25:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pleeeeeeeaaasee come back to it. Im feeling like a stalker. lol

Author's Response: You weren't a stalker, I would call you an avid reader. :) Thanks for having faith.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2011 5:18:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

my mind....its blown.

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2011 9:49:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have officially made today "serafim day" and will spend it settling in and reading this story as slowly and as thoroughly as I can. I remember reading it a while ago, but now that you're updating again, I can't help but invest in this story again.

This deserves a lengthy review for each chapter because it is simply amazing. Really. What you have taken here, the premise of your story is nothing short than mesmerizing and your writing just transcends it. You are extra-ordinary at telling this story - words fail. Really. They fail.

So many parts of this chapter got me breathless but here's a few:

His voice was thick and laden deep with seduction, want, and most importantly command.

This pretty much summed up the first chapter for me. :)

He thought he saw what might have been a very very small uptick of a smile from her, but she just nodded instead.

There she is. I don't think Logan quite understands what he's getting himself into here!

Love it. This is the Wolverine/Logan that I just simply ADORE. :)

Author's Response: I am in awe that you have given me an entire day. I really hope to keep up with your expectations as we go forward. Thank you for taking the time to review each chapter, it is very much appreciated. Have fun picking up your youngest and hopefully I will get chapter 7 done before the 4th of July holiday. :) Thank you again, Alesia

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2011 1:37:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

really? well I will be checking it out right now! Thanks for the heads up!

Reviewer: LadyReview Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2011 2:46:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting....please finish this and soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Chapter 6 is up, please I would like to hear if it is still interesting.

Reviewer: SubbieJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2010 2:25:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm fairly new to the Rogan scene, but I've read Anything and aside from it's not continuing I absolutely loved it. I'm so glad you've taken on it's sequel/companion! It's wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank, my main fear is not being able to do Anything justice but I am trying. I think it is required reading in the Rogan fandom. :)

Reviewer: Blue Morpho Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2010 12:04:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, YAY!!!!! You're back with this story. And what a chapter, with some great, HOT smut. I have to admit I'm with White Dove that the whole thing makes me a bit uncomfortable, but I don't really mind being made to feel uncomfortable ;-) Because hey, what's the point of writing fiction if you're too afraid to ruffle a few feathers on the way? My mum put it best when she said that fiction is meant to comfort the unsettled and unsettle the comfortable. So keep going, I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Blue - Thank you soo very much for the review!! I am glad this Logan makes you uncomfortable, he should, shouldn't he? I mean he is basically a ruthless bastard, right? I haven't quite decided if he will ever be anything more so I can't guarentee he won't stay a bastard. :) BTW your mum is brillant, I love that statement.

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2010 4:08:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you sooooo much for updating!!! This is really one of my all time faves! I can't wait to read this chapter!!! (its 4 am and I must go to sleep now but reading this will be the first thing I do tomorrow - so expect another review from me) Thanks again!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2010 3:52:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok Just read all 5 chapters. For some reason this story makes me uncomfortable. It is well written and really evokes a response in the reader. My reaction comes from the fact that I don't like How Logan treats Rogue. I hate that he wants to use her as a substitute for Jean. I would rather he be acting like he is just because he wants Marie. To me this is kind of a slight to Marie. I am not used to Logan being so unfeeling about Marie's feelings as well. I love the Logan that Cares more about how she feels than anything else in the world.

Author's Response: White Dove - First, thank you for expressing you feelings about being uncomfortable with the story. I know in other fandoms it is often frowned upon to give less than glowing feedback, so thank you very much having the courage to doing so. Secondly, I agree with you. I don't know that you are really supposed to like how Logan treats Rogue at this point. (Have you read "Anything" yet?) Remember is a rather Dark!Logan. He is doing exactly what you say at this point, he is using her as a substitute for Jean (to an extent). This Logan doesn't know who Rogue/Marie is yet. He doesn't know all of the reasons he should care about her for herself (yet). What is interesting about Dom/sub relationships is that in those it is the sub with all of the power and it the sub who is the absolute center of the Dom's world when they are in a scene together. It is the Dom's primary responsibility to care for (and not just in a sexual way) and cater to (again not just in a sexual way) the needs of the sub. Now, while in this story Logan and Marie aren't in a true D/s relationship (we are missing safewords, limits, etc), they are darn close, or at least that is what I am going for. So all that said, you are right; Logan isn't doing what he is supposed to be doing - he is not caring for Marie's needs (and again I say yet). However, I not really sure this Logan knows how (yet). There is more to the whys and whats of Logan's relationship (if you really want to call it that) with Jean than we know up to this point, which might shed some light on why Logan is acting the way his is now. Also part of this journey is about both Logan and Marie discovering how they are supposed to relate to each other. (Marie is mentally stronger than she looks, which this Logan should know by now.) Without getting too far into what is to come, I will just say I love happy endings, am a big sap, and really hate angst - if that tells you anything about where we might end up. :) I would love it if you hang with me for a few more chapters there are things coming that I would really love to hear your perspective on. Again thanks for reading and even more thanks for taking the time to provide feedback.

Author's Response: White Dove - First, thank you for expressing your feelings about being uncomfortable with the story. I know in other fandoms it is often frowned upon to give less than glowing feedback, so thank you very much having the courage to doing so. Secondly, I agree with you. I don't know that you are really supposed to like how Logan treats Rogue at this point. (Have you read "Anything" yet?) Remember is a rather Dark!Logan. He is doing exactly what you say at this point, he is using her as a substitute for Jean (to an extent). This Logan doesn't know who Rogue/Marie is yet. He doesn't know all of the reasons he should care about her for herself (yet). What is interesting about Dom/sub relationships is that in those it is the sub with all of the power and it the sub who is the absolute center of the Dom's world when they are in a scene together. It is the Dom's primary responsibility to care for (and not just in a sexual way) and cater to (again not just in a sexual way) the needs of the sub. Now, while in this story Logan and Marie aren't in a true D/s relationship (we are missing safewords, limits, etc), they are darn close, or at least that is what I am going for. So all that said, you are right; Logan isn't doing what he is supposed to be doing - he is not caring for Marie's needs (and again I say yet). However, I not really sure this Logan knows how (yet). There is more to the whys and whats of Logan's relationship (if you really want to call it that) with Jean than we know up to this point, which might shed some light on why Logan is acting the way his is now. Also part of this journey is about both Logan and Marie discovering how they are supposed to relate to each other. (Marie is mentally stronger than she looks, which this Logan should know by now.) Without getting too far into what is to come, I will just say I love happy endings, am a big sap, and really hate angst - if that tells you anything about where we might end up. :) I would love it if you hang with me for a few more chapters there are things coming that I would really love to hear your perspective on. Again thanks for reading and even more thanks for taking the time to provide feedback.

Author's Response: White Dove - First, thank you for expressing your feelings about being uncomfortable with the story. I know in other fandoms it is often frowned upon to give less than glowing feedback, so thank you very much having the courage to doing so. Secondly, I agree with you. I don't know that you are really supposed to like how Logan treats Rogue at this point. (Have you read "Anything" yet?) Remember is a rather Dark!Logan. He is doing exactly what you say at this point, he is using her as a substitute for Jean (to an extent). This Logan doesn't know who Rogue/Marie is yet. He doesn't know all of the reasons he should care about her for herself (yet). What is interesting about Dom/sub relationships is that in those it is the sub with all of the power and it the sub who is the absolute center of the Dom's world when they are in a scene together. It is the Dom's primary responsibility to care for (and not just in a sexual way) and cater to (again not just in a sexual way) the needs of the sub. Now, while in this story Logan and Marie aren't in a true D/s relationship (we are missing safewords, limits, etc), they are darn close, or at least that is what I am going for. So all that said, you are right; Logan isn't doing what he is supposed to be doing - he is not caring for Marie's needs (and again I say yet). However, I not really sure this Logan knows how (yet). There is more to the whys and whats of Logan's relationship (if you really want to call it that) with Jean than we know up to this point, which might shed some light on why Logan is acting the way his is now. Also part of this journey is about both Logan and Marie discovering how they are supposed to relate to each other. (Marie is mentally stronger than she looks, which this Logan should know by now.) Without getting too far into what is to come, I will just say I love happy endings, am a big sap, and really hate angst - if that tells you anything about where we might end up. :) I would love it if you hang with me for a few more chapters there are things coming that I would really love to hear your perspective on. Again thanks for reading and even more thanks for taking the time to provide feedback.

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 6:58:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE this dominating logan, specially when he's tender with Marie and takes care of her. And Im also very fond on the way Marie seems to need at the same time the protection of logan and how she tries to please him even when he acts as an asshole sometimes. This is so kinky and exiting lol I love your story please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Annie - I FINALLY got chapter 5 up so please please let me know what you think of their dynamic at this point. They make progress...or do they? Thanks so much for the feedback you have nailed some of the complexity in which they find themselves - need vs want vs survival.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 9:58:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

oooohhhh, that made me shiver. i love a dominating Logan.

not to be TMI, but i'm kinda a control freak dominate myself and this kinda gives me idea for the next poor sap i date LOL!

Author's Response: Corinne - Oh honey you want ideas let me turn you on to some really good NCIS fanfiction - her name is Chirgul and she is on fanfiction.net. If you love dominating Logan, you will really love dominating Gibbs. Read all of Chirgul's Sir/Little Tease stories, hot, hot, hot. BTW, do you think Logan and Marie need a safe word? Any thoughts would be appreciated.

Reviewer: Elliesmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 8:43:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I do indeed. I'm well familiar with Bad!Jean via Terri's works.LOL I hope she'll get what's coming to her.

Surprised that Xavier has no clue at all what the woman gets up to. You'd think he'd keep a fairly close watch on the situations involving Logan, since he's so important and vulnerable due to his amnesia and PTSD.

Oh well. Post more soon?

Author's Response: Elliesmeow - Never underestimate the Professor. I will tell you one of my things about fics with Xavier is that he doesn't seem as powerful or as informed as he should be (or he is the bad guy, which I don't mind but anyway) so don't count our good Charles out of this one. And Logan is never all that far from Charles's mind, never fear.

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 12:12:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

so happy you are continuing this.

love the concept and of course an evil jean to boot.

i do agree with anami, however, that i hope he falls head over heels for her.

cause if not and their relationship goes on this way, she is still just a prisoner.

can't wait for the next update. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, I am having a wonderful time trying to determine just where Logan's feelings will lead us. Let me know what you think of chapter 5.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 9:17:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seriously, going into withdrawal waiting for updates. Anything I can do to help?( waves cattle prod) Nothing in RL could possibly be as important as this story!

Author's Response: Taminsnead - Thanks for the nuggle the other day, I finished chapter 5 the day you emailed me and started typing chapter 6 so never fear we will get there. I is afraid of the cattle prod! :)

Reviewer: blah39 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 7:52:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please update soon. I loved "Anything" as well and was thrilled when I found this. Very good extension of the original one-shot. Hope you post soon, I'm really curious as to how the inhabitants of the mansion react to the relationship.

Author's Response: We will get to the mansion but not just yet. There is much for Logan and Marie to figure out about themselves first. Chapter 4 is up now so please provide your impressions both positive and negative as to where they have ended up at the end of the new chapter.

Reviewer: Silent_muderess Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2009 3:17:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was bouncing off the walls when I first heard the glimmerings of a possiblity of this fic over at lj.com, and was even more estatic when you started it and I found that it was good. REALLY good. I am desperate to get more of this fic, so please please please update, or let me know if you need any help to get you writing again. Sometimes all I need is someone to get my creative juices flowing again.

Author's Response: Thank you for enthusiam, chapter 4 is up if you are still interested after all of this time. I appreciate the offer to help, I was stuck much longer than I have been before but I love this idea and "Anything" too much not to finish this.

Reviewer: thaty Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2009 6:26:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is fantastic!
I loved 'Anything' and always wanted to read a follow up to that story!
Thank you so much!
When is the next chapter coming?

Author's Response: It is here, if you still want to read it. Thank you for your comments and compliments.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2009 9:36:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is awesome- love the D/S nature of the story especially since so many authors write with Logan's softer side in mind, but you write him extremely bad-a$$, love it!!!

Especially love hearing it from both POVs.

When is the next chapter coming out?

Author's Response: Chapter 4 is out if you are still interested. No sex though, although chapter 5 will make up for it. Promise!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2009 11:09:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

omg, i just read "Anything" and omg i would agree to anything with that man!

and i like bastard!Logan

Author's Response: you and me both baby!

Reviewer: Turante Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2009 12:28:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nothing specific squicked me, as I enjoy occasional dub-con and non-con, but you mention yourself in the Author's Note on the first chapter that there will be a partial rape. Also, I would say that this story is clearly dub-con, but as the archive doesn't have a label or tag for that, the Rape/Non-Con warning would be the next best thing.

Erring on the side of caution when it comes to warnings is good policy in general, IMO. Especially after the huge warnings kerfuffle on LiveJournal a few months back. Plus, how else are pervs like me supposed to find the stuff we like to read if it isn't tagged? ;P

Author's Response: Oh, the partial rape actually takes place later. I had planned to mark that chapter specifically, but I also wanted to give folks a heads up of the general tone of the piece (which isn't pretty and very NC-17). I will go back and clarify the author's note. Thanks for the clarification of what concerned you and thank you for reading and responding.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 9:02:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh my sweet lord...that was so insanely hot!!!

i think most women have had the fantasy of being completely dominated in bed...you delivered!

Author's Response: Thanks, I tried.

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