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WONDERFUL twist to their meeting! Very sweet, even when he was being an ass and not talking to her! Loved how she had the conversation with herself to bring him out of his funk. Really liked the scene by the lake and him telling her she was wrong about 'being careful'.
I love all your stuff, but this fic really stuck with me in particular. It's just so sweet and poignant. I came back to reread it and was surprised that it wasn't as long as I remembered -- the characters seemed so fleshed out and I hadn't realized you had done that with just not many lines of dialogue. And the somewhat naive ( maybe that's not the best descriptor but I can't think of another) Logan just tugs at my heartstrings.
This was just So sweet!
The introduction given by the guys at the bar worked really well, and I loved Logan and Rogue's talk about how they'd behave if they were in love :)
Oh, the part where Logan questions her "You ever had a man?" and "You do anythin' with him?", that comes across really strong, like he's sizing her up to see how far he can push. Nice.
I did get annoyed at Logan for letting Rogue 'do something for him' though. He shouldn't have, even if she did say she wanted to, but I guess that's his weak/bad side we all love ;)
The end was great, about bein' in love actually bein' about being careful.