Reviews For Breathe
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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2009 9:03:15 AM Title: And balanced on the biggest wave / You race toward an early grave

I like it when Marie gets all wolvie-like ^_^

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 6:04:21 PM Title: And balanced on the biggest wave / You race toward an early grave

Really good chapter.
I like how you take your time revealing things to the characters, like how only now Logan finds out how badly Rogue could have hurt him with that 'kiss' he wanted, and how they still don't know the whole story about Danvers, or how much of the victim's life force Rogue acquires. Very well paced and interesting.
Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Very well paced and interesting. Yay! I hoped people wouldn't feel like I was just being coy. Thanks!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2009 5:18:20 PM Title: And balanced on the biggest wave / You race toward an early grave

This chunk of 5 chapters are fantastic. I could quote line after line that are absolute gems - bare-boned, sarcastic, intriguing, perfect gems. You are now on my 'favorites' list. *applauds enthusiastically!*

Author's Response: *Bows* Thank you! So great to hear that you're enjoying the dialogue. It's my favorite part of writing, hands down.

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