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Date: 02/04/2009 3:58:35 AM Title: Look around / And choose your own ground
Next chapter please ^_^
Author's Response: Soon!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2009 6:37:36 PM Title: Look around / And choose your own ground
So close to the original, but so much better. Your Rogue is wonderful. She's got the attitude she always should have had with the rest of the world. I also like the underlying disapproval you have going on with the "grownups" and the dynamic duo. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: You're very welcome! I like to think the writers would've given her the attitude if they hadn't had to cram in fifteen hundred characters in two hours. The disapproval angle is a thin line, so it's good to hear it worked for you. :)
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2009 3:56:58 PM Title: Look around / And choose your own ground
Really liking this story.. your characterisation and descriptions are very good!
Great opening chapter, i like how Logan takes it personal when Marie flinches from him and tries to push her boundaris later by asking for a kiss, then feels like a right old letch when he finds out her real age. Ha ha.
Then in the 3rd chapter he moves on to smacking on Jean 'cause at least she's old enough. Brilliant!
The only thing I didn't like so much was the amount of extracts from the movie in the 3rd chapter, seemed a bit much, but I guess you want to weave your own story into it.
Looking forward to reading more..
Author's Response: The weaving is something I was hesitating over. On one hand, I want to keep that AU feel. On the other...there are just parts of the movie I've always wanted to turn Rogan. So by placing them in the context of this story, I can totally do that. *g* I can understand how it feels repetitive, though. But glad you don't mind the Logan/Jean so much. She is a necessary evil -- er, I mean distraction. Hee.